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TaaRey & Swaron : Make u feel tat u love me (uptd pg no 97) 26/8/1 - Page 59

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This content was originally posted by: nishu98

Update nxt part waiting for it 😛

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plzzz update next part plzzz update update update plzzz...
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TaaRey & Swaron: Make u feel that u love me

Chapter  10

 

Recap:

                   Every1 in Sharon's home and decide to go to Rey's home and pick up taani on the way in mandir and there they meet Rey

 

Swayam:oh taani is also here u didn't c her?

Rey nodded in no

Rey: (in mind)oh god what will I do now mom told to bring taani here and how will I handle every1? What if every1 comes to know about me and taani spending time together and taani told it will be a secret pls help me god

 

From inside mandir taani and Rey's mom talking to each other and coming towards Rey's car they didn't notice the gang.

Rey saw his mom and taani coming towards him but still they didn't notice them. Swayam seeing Rey looking somewhere saw where he was seeing

Swayam: Taani? (little loud to hear every1)

All: Taani???

Sharon: that too with aunty

Rey:oh god pls help me (praying inside him and giving a confused look)

Sharon  looked over Rey

Sharon: (to herself) something is fishy

 

Taani and Rey's mom reached near  them

RM: Rey (looked at him and every1 and Sharon) Sharon beta

Sharon: hi aunty and how come taani is with aunty?

Taani: hi guys wo...

Swayam:haa taani do u know Rey's mom?

Taani and Rey looked at each other

Taani: no bhai just now I met maa inside (Rey's mom looked over Rey in what's happening look and he just said I will say later  slowly)

All: Maa

Taani: wo.. wo

RM: actually I told her to call like that

All:ohh (Rey and taani relaxed)

Taani: k what r u guys doing here?

Simmi: we were going to Rey's home and Sharon told u were here and came to pick up u and we saw Rey here

Taani:k

Rey:so shall we guys move?

All:ya

Every1 went to Rey's home and did their lunch and left from there and went to Swayam's home in evening except Rey he said he will join them later.

 

In Swayam's home

All were chit chatting and boys irritating girls as usual.

Taani: I will make coffee for every1

Swayam: no taani u be here I will make coffee u might be tiered by helping aunty in making lunch

Saying so Swayam went from there to kitchen

Vicky: ya guys taani will be tiered in helping her mother in law right taani?

Taani: Vicky

Kria: no no Vicky not mother in law she is  her maa

All: ya agree to that

Taani: guys shut up

Saying so she went to her room. All were laughing seeing her.

After taani left every1 continued their chit chat

Sharon: guys I will be back

She went to kitchen to see what Swayam doing

 

In kitchen

Swayam's back was facing Sharon

Sharon: Swayam

 

At same time Taani's room

 

She marched inside her room casually and opened her window and sat in her bed.

Taani: these guys na they r too much cant they just shut up

She was blabbering continuously and suddenly she heard a sound and turned around and saw the window

Taani: Rey

 

In kitchen

Sharon: Swayam

Swayam was startled and turned to see Sharon

Swayam: Sharon my god u scared me a second

Sharon: ok leave it any help?

Swayam: no its ok its almost done just have to add sugar

Sharon:k  I will take cup for every1

Swayam: ok

Sharon went to cupboard to take out the cup and Swayam turned to the stove

 

In taani's room

Taani: Rey

Taani turned towards window and saw that once again he broke her window curtains

Taani: Rey what r u doing here? And what's this? (pointing towards the curtains which were lying in the floor) and cant u come by door?

Rey:sshhh (placed his finger on her lips and started to move towards her and taani taking steps back they moved like confession day and taani hit the cupboard and rey took his finger)calm down taani and these many question in same time how will I answer

Taani frowned and glared at Rey

Rey: ok first when I was just abt to enter by door I saw u were opening the window so thought u will be alone and i love to come through ur window to see u and abt that ( pointing to the curtain) it always disturb me when I m coming see u remember when last time I came also

Taani who was silent till now cut Rey

Taani: not last time. The last time when u came through the window was on our breakup

 

In kitchen

While sharon was taking cups with Swayam he forgot and took the hot pot with his hands

Swayam: aaahhh (cried in pain)

Sharon: Swayam what happened?

Sharon came forward and took Swayam's hands and took him to the tap and showed his hands in the cold water and seeing his hands and blowing air in his hands.

Swayam was constantly looking sorry sorry adoring  her  and her hairs  were swinging in the air and Swayam caught her hands and brought her closer to him a few distance were just away from their face. Swayam moved forward to her and moved to her ears and Sharon clutched his shirt with her other hand. Swayam moved closer to ears and blow some air in her hairs which was coving her ears.

Swayam:looking beautiful

After saying he moved back and both looked eachother and lost  In them and suddenly Sharon came to sense and moved back from  her place

Sharon: Swayam how can u be so careless Swayam look at ur hands. I asked u right do u need any help u can take my help but u didn't want it and now see ur hands and it should be first aided

Sharon was shouting without stopping

Swayam: Sharon stop it and don't irritate me pls (Swayam shouted because he was irritated that his romance was stopped and his hands were paining)

Sharon: am I irritating u Swayam? (asked in low tune and he looked at Sharon and was about to say something) fine irritating u right

Swayam: no Sharon I didn't mean to say its just

Sharon: u know about I m fed up with this all so from now the SHARON RAI PRAKASH will never come after u get that (in her diva attitude)

Swayam: Sharon

Sharon showed her hand

Sharon: u do what ever u want and I will never ask u anything

With TaaRey

When taani said the word breakup their flash went through them their lives most painful and bad days went through

Taani: it was on our breakup day Rey u came through window lastly

Rey: taani cant u just forget that and remember our happy moments we had

Taani: how can u say me to forget those easily Rey it may be easy for u to forget but not for me

Rey:taani I know its not that easy

 

Meanwhile with gang they were playing and chit chatting and just then they heard doorbell

Vicky: I think  it must be Rey

Kria: k I will go and open the door

Kria went and opened the door on seeing the person she...

Kria: tum?

Guy:you? (both shouted and the guy without saying anything came inside)

Every1 saw them and kria got annoyed

Kria: excuse me what r u doing here?

The guy didn't answer anything

Kria: oyi cant u speak up? U very well know to speak na so bolo what r u doing mister?

Nil: do u know him? (looking at kria)

Kria:he is such a irritating character I have ever met (shouted)

Guy: and u r such a arrogant (shouted)

Kria: me arrogant? Who r u to say this can u pls get out from here

Guy: excuse me first who r u to say that?

Because of the guy and kria's fight both TaaRey and Swaron came where every1 r there

All four: what's happening here?

Every1 turned and saw the four and TaaYam  got shocked +surprise

TaaYam: Bhai???

All: bhai??

Taani and Swayam wented and hugged him

Rey: Taani's another bhai how much bhai does she have? (a little bit louder for every1 to hear)

Every1 saw Rey

Taani: Rey (glared at him)

On hearing Rey's name TaaYam's bhai went to Rey and grabbed his collar

All were shocked

 

Precap:

Sharon: come on girls we will enjoy our time without boys and that to in manali (in attitude glaring at boys)

Girls: wow yes... (cheered )

Boys: what?

 

And about the new character the CS

Siddarth Shekhawat: Swayam and taani's elder brother  more about him will come in updates and he may the pair for Kria I didn't decide about that  and I m still imagining how it will be when Taani calling Kria as Bhabhi

 

 

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awzm uldate plz taarey ka bich main fight mat karbana nice next update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.
Please dont start a fight beween TaaRey.
Update soon.
Thank you for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm update
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update...
Loved SwaRon and TaaRey scenes
New guy sounds interesting
Update nxt part soon and thanx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank god gang did not
Came to know abt TaaRey
One more Bhai :/ god bless
Rey nice Sawron were gud
taarey Were nice thanks for PM