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Bound by Blood, ek Alag love-story.(KR+SS FF) *Updated Ch5* (Page 7)

dollydua Senior Member
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:20am | IP Logged
awesome part will be waiting 4 d next chapter

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Lovelylavender Senior Member
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
Well hey anki..!
First of all my intro.. Hey i m shanaya.. Shanaya singhania..
Chuckle..
Yes thats me..
Anyways dnt worry i understand the character in ur ff is an imagination.. So its k.. Lol..
In any case its sanaya na.. I m shanaya.. Its different.. Wink
So cumin to d update..
I luv d way ur story is takin twists n turns.. First kria cumin.. Now leavin.. And now d swaron mystery..
Hmm niceee..
I guess again kria is havin sum prob coz of which she s runnin away from rey..
Dekhte hain..
I luvd d way u described their feelings.. Kriyaansh n swaron both..
I luvd d fact tht kria cud see that rey still luvs her..
I guess swayam must b kria s guardian or brotherly sumthin..
Chalo lets see.. Very intrested in reading further..
So thnx fr pm.. N waiting fr nxt part.. Smile
alex754 Senior Member
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 9:26pm | IP Logged
So unique story
Ur writing skills too good the way u switch btw past and present too good
What is the relation btw swayam and kriya?
Swayam and sharon?
Kriya and sharon?
Little confused there
Please update next part asap
I am in awe for this ff

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ramya.sri Senior Member
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 10:54pm | IP Logged
next part jaldi update karo
i totally loved this update
looks very intresting
kria n rey missing each other
and rey  is a cassinova really
and ab rey wants kria so badly hehehe
and swayam is stronger
and ye sharon ka kya chakar hai
pls jaldi reveal karo mai pagal hoing yaha 
waise awesome update ha
totally loved it

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anki_22 Senior Member
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Posts: 709

Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
@ -Vaish- : thank u sooo much for the comments..I really appreciate it.. ANd Sharon, yes, I will reveal her POV in the next oneLOLLOL sochti rahooo.. but agar woh bounty hunter hogi to she will be the most gorgeous bounty hunter ever..Big smile

@swaronlove001 :
I'll reveal her in the next one pakka..LOL But I promise woh kisiko kha nahi legi..LOL

@ dollydua:
thank u soo much..Smile

@ alex754:
that was really sooo nice of you, thank u soo much.. am really glad u liked it..Smile I really love writting in this way, switching between past and present...I hope you'll love the next part aswell..

@ramya.sri:  
thank u thank u..LOL haha, keep thinking, and please keep loving it..LOL I look forward to all of your comments..Smile



Edited by anki_22 - 08 January 2014 at 11:33pm

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Mystique.Kishi Senior Member
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Posts: 775

Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:38pm | IP Logged
Hey sweet heart.so, I really don't like saying this but I will say it anyways.
            I TOLD YOU SO.
See dear, I told you it will be great and I personally loved it. This is written so beautifully and engages the readers on so many levels. I personally felt as if I am watching the proceedings in a show. The usp is the fact that you have given a definite shape to all the characters and there are no side roles. Kriya and Rey were done in a beautiful way. But what won this over for me was Swayam and Sharon. Swayam's flashbacks, his attachment to Kriya and his dilemma of being torn between two conflicting loyalties. And my favourite part was the entry of the femme fatale, Sharon Rai Prakash. I could almost sense the lethal aura around her (was seeing sneha in my mind).Day Dreaming
Also,Swayam's recalling his father's teachings. They were really well written. 
Overall, congrats on a job well accomplished.Clap It was captivating, mi cara.
P.S-Thank you. Embarrassed But i was encouraging solely cause wanted to read this beautiful piece that i knew you will put up.TongueTongue
                                                                                                                                     Much love,
                                                                                                                                       KishiThumbs Up

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anki_22

anki_22 Senior Member
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lovelylavender

Well hey anki..!
First of all my intro.. Hey i m shanaya.. Shanaya singhania..
Chuckle..
Yes thats me..
Anyways dnt worry i understand the character in ur ff is an imagination.. So its k.. Lol..
In any case its sanaya na.. I m shanaya.. Its different.. Wink
So cumin to d update..
I luv d way ur story is takin twists n turns.. First kria cumin.. Now leavin.. And now d swaron mystery..
Hmm niceee..
I guess again kria is havin sum prob coz of which she s runnin away from rey..
Dekhte hain..
I luvd d way u described their feelings.. Kriyaansh n swaron both..
I luvd d fact tht kria cud see that rey still luvs her..
I guess swayam must b kria s guardian or brotherly sumthin..
Chalo lets see.. Very intrested in reading further..
So thnx fr pm.. N waiting fr nxt part.. Smile


hello SHANAYA..!! *bows* am so soo so sorry, maine kabbh nahi socha tha aisa kuch hoga...ConfusedOuchTongue and she is completely fictitious, and middle aged, and she doesn't have the H...LOL sooo it is not you AT ALL..Tongue

okay, now hoping maafi manjoored, so, yes, Swayam is something like that to Kriya, and am soo glad you noticed...LOL thank u sooo much for liking it and the comment... I hope you'll like the next update aswell... and usme Sanaya Singania nahi rahegi..LOL



Edited by anki_22 - 08 January 2014 at 11:53pm
anki_22 Senior Member
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Posted: 08 January 2014 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by luvarsha20

Hey sweet heart.so, I really don't like saying this but I will say it anyways.
            I TOLD YOU SO.
See dear, I told you it will be great and I personally loved it. This is written so beautifully and engages the readers on so many levels. I personally felt as if I am watching the proceedings in a show. The usp is the fact that you have given a definite shape to all the characters and there are no side roles. Kriya and Rey were done in a beautiful way. But what won this over for me was Swayam and Sharon. Swayam's flashbacks, his attachment to Kriya and his dilemma of being torn between two conflicting loyalties. And my favourite part was the entry of the femme fatale, Sharon Rai Prakash. I could almost sense the lethal aura around her (was seeing sneha in my mind).Day Dreaming
Also,Swayam's recalling his father's teachings. They were really well written. 
Overall, congrats on a job well accomplished.Clap It was captivating, mi cara.
P.S-Thank you. Embarrassed But i was encouraging solely cause wanted to read this beautiful piece that i knew you will put up.TongueTongue
                                                                                                                                     Much love,
                                                                                                                                       KishiThumbs Up


awww, me lovesh chuu KISHIII...EmbarrassedBig smile
thank u thank u, If you haven't encouraged me I wouldn't be able to put it up.. and wouldn't be able to work on the next either..Smile
I love writting Swayam, he can be written in soo many shades...
I couldn't do much to Sharon in this one, but I hope I'll do justice to her in the next.. thank u for loving her entry..LOL yushh, she had that aura around her..
well, ab main kya kahoo, thank u for loving them..LOL

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