Bound by Blood, ek Alag love-story.(KR+SS FF) *Updated Ch5* - Page 6

So unique story
Ur writing skills too good the way u switch btw past and present too good
What is the relation btw swayam and kriya?
Swayam and sharon?
Kriya and sharon?
Little confused there
Please update next part asap
I am in awe for this ff

next part jaldi update karo

@ -Vaish- : thank u sooo much for the comments..I really appreciate it.. ANd Sharon, yes, I will reveal her POV in the next one😆😆 sochti rahooo.. but agar woh bounty hunter hogi to she will be the most gorgeous bounty hunter ever..😃

@swaronlove001 : I'll reveal her in the next one pakka..😆 But I promise woh kisiko kha nahi legi..😆

@ dollydua: thank u soo much..😊

@ alex754: that was really sooo nice of you, thank u soo much.. am really glad u liked it..😊 I really love writting in this way, switching between past and present...I hope you'll love the next part aswell..

@ramya.sri:   thank u thank u..😆 haha, keep thinking, and please keep loving it..😆 I look forward to all of your comments..😊
Edited by anki_22 - 10 years ago

Hey sweet heart.so, I really don't like saying this but I will say it anyways.

Originally posted by: Lovelylavender

Well hey anki..!
First of all my intro.. Hey i m shanaya.. Shanaya singhania..
Chuckle..
Yes thats me..
Anyways dnt worry i understand the character in ur ff is an imagination.. So its k.. Lol..
In any case its sanaya na.. I m shanaya.. Its different.. 😉
So cumin to d update..
I luv d way ur story is takin twists n turns.. First kria cumin.. Now leavin.. And now d swaron mystery..
Hmm niceee..
I guess again kria is havin sum prob coz of which she s runnin away from rey..
Dekhte hain..
I luvd d way u described their feelings.. Kriyaansh n swaron both..
I luvd d fact tht kria cud see that rey still luvs her..
I guess swayam must b kria s guardian or brotherly sumthin..
Chalo lets see.. Very intrested in reading further..
So thnx fr pm.. N waiting fr nxt part.. 😊

hello SHANAYA..!! *bows* am so soo so sorry, maine kabbh nahi socha tha aisa kuch hoga...😕😛 and she is completely fictitious, and middle aged, and she doesn't have the H...😆 sooo it is not you AT ALL..😛

okay, now hoping maafi manjoored, so, yes, Swayam is something like that to Kriya, and am soo glad you noticed...😆 thank u sooo much for liking it and the comment... I hope you'll like the next update aswell... and usme Sanaya Singania nahi rahegi..😆
Edited by anki_22 - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: luvarsha20

Hey sweet heart.so, I really don't like saying this but I will say it anyways.

            I TOLD YOU SO.

See dear, I told you it will be great and I personally loved it. This is written so beautifully and engages the readers on so many levels. I personally felt as if I am watching the proceedings in a show. The usp is the fact that you have given a definite shape to all the characters and there are no side roles. Kriya and Rey were done in a beautiful way. But what won this over for me was Swayam and Sharon. Swayam's flashbacks, his attachment to Kriya and his dilemma of being torn between two conflicting loyalties. And my favourite part was the entry of the femme fatale, Sharon Rai Prakash. I could almost sense the lethal aura around her (was seeing sneha in my mind).

Also,Swayam's recalling his father's teachings. They were really well written. 

Overall, congrats on a job well accomplished.👏 It was captivating, mi cara.

P.S-Thank you. 😳 But i was encouraging solely cause wanted to read this beautiful piece that i knew you will put up.😛😛

                                                                                                                                     Much love,

                                                                                                                                       Kishi👍🏼

awww, me lovesh chuu KISHIII...😳😃
thank u thank u, If you haven't encouraged me I wouldn't be able to put it up.. and wouldn't be able to work on the next either..😊
I love writting Swayam, he can be written in soo many shades...
I couldn't do much to Sharon in this one, but I hope I'll do justice to her in the next.. thank u for loving her entry..😆 yushh, she had that aura around her..
well, ab main kya kahoo, thank u for loving them..😆

this was amazing ..

Originally posted by: divyani.arsha

this was amazing ..

a new concept ,,, n no doubt a very good one ^_^

rey's pov was shown brilliantly ...

nd kria's too :)

swayam  is and will always remain a sweetheart ^_^

well sharon is hunting for kriyam O.o 

kyuuu ???

update the next chappy asap !!! :)

its very interesting 

nd pleashhh pm me ^_^

sure I will, thanks for reading and commenting.. I really look forward to that..😊

its very interesting