Originally posted by: -Khwahish-
I love the start already
Its so damn gripping and intriguing
The portrayal of different shades of characters was seriously
Awesome
Looking forward to this story ...update soon
thank you sooo much..😊 will surely do..😊
Originally posted by: -Khwahish-
I love the start already
Its so damn gripping and intriguing
The portrayal of different shades of characters was seriously
Awesome
Looking forward to this story ...update soon
Originally posted by: -Blind.Dance-
Dude this is gripping!! awesome work.. looking forward for more
Originally posted by: pradeep_maurya
Awesome start love that concept
Updte fast pm me whn u update plz
Originally posted by: Couch_Potato
Fatafati!
This was such an interesting read. I enjoyed it cuz there is no clear cut characters right there. We just get tiny glimpses into their lives and I have to say, in this prologue, Sharon shines for me. It leaves me curious to know exactly what is going on here. Just one question, is this a paranormal fic?Oh and your Swayam has caught my eye. Something is off here and I really wanna know what it is so update soon! 😊
I was waiting for your comment...😆😆
and yushh, it's going to be a supernatural fic..😳
Thank you for loving Sharon, She is going to be a girl full of shades..😃
Swayam me kya off laga...??samjhi nahi..?😕
keep telling me how to improve, okay okay..??😆😆
Originally posted by: Couch_Potato
Awww. Well mujhe aap ka fic set laga ek dum! Haan about Swayam, off as in the way he was talking to Kriya and his concerns? There's definitely a story there. That's what I meant. Ke it's not as simple as it seems. Kuch to scene hai wahan. Kuch toh hai jo black and white nahi hai.I had a feeling I was going to love your Sharon. Click Clack se hi.Ab saare feedbacks ek hi prologue par? Jaldi update karo toh aur bataoon! 😉
Originally posted by: luvarsha20
yipppeee!!!!!!! i have been yearning to read something a bit paranormal. do i sense vampires??? anyways, really good job!!👏👏👏
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