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Arshi FF: Along Came Khushi #2...LAST PART/Page 33!! (Page 45)

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Posted: 23 June 2014 at 11:56am | IP Logged
lovely story...read all in one go n i just loved it :)

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Posted: 27 June 2014 at 7:48pm | IP Logged
Congrats Dil on thread 2 of your most amazing FF!!!!


God I love this ArShi story, so beautifully written!!!!!


Thanks for giving us a happy ending and getting Arnav and Khushi married, they truly deserved each other!!!! Awww their son Arjun was tooo cute!!! But at the same time I'm happy NK and La figured ou their feelings for once another (with a little help) and settled!!!!!


Dil you are just awesome!!!! Hats off for coming up with this amazing FF and writing it so beautifully!!!!


Anyway thanks for a great reading experience!!!!!!


Wish you all the best for your future Fan Fictions; please continue to write many more amazing ArShi stories!!!! I would definitely love to read them!!!!


Well I'm off to find your Index so I can read your other works!!!!



Take care,


Lots of love,


Your fan,


Rahat





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Posted: 07 July 2014 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Along came Khushi came as a refreshing tale.


First of all, I loved the title. It suited her presence and the change in Arnav's life which she made.

Also, it was nice to have an Arnav who wasn't perpetually grumpy; he did have a past which he was helpless about and which was tying him in the present as well, but the hint of melancholy provided to him was just the right amount.

I also liked how the characters were portrayed; I especially liked the part where you showed Khushi's guilt, linking it to a lesson she had learned in her childhood in the orphanage.

There wasn't an overdose of malice in the form of Sheetal and Shyam; another plus point.

And the two banners were wonderful!

P.s. Rasgulla_sp recommended this story to me

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Posted: 21 July 2014 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Awesome update yaar... You won't blv me, I read all d chapters at a stretch... Lovely update... Send me d links of ur other works, nah???? I really love your style of writing... I have no words to express how I felt while reading ur ff... Actually, I felt as if I was watching all this happen...

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Posted: 29 July 2014 at 6:08am | IP Logged
CH 1
Well nice intro... on arnav and khushi...
he is married...to sheetal..

CH 2
so sheetal is arnav bro's gf... and pregnant she lost the baby and herself...
Khushi is taking interest with arnav and is attitude...
she start to care for him.. and he notice her
he slept at her apartment...LOL


CH3
Its very sweet manner... both realize the comfort moment ...
little jealous moment listening to Nk ... invite her bday party
so he is watching her .. sit outside her house Embarrassed
 


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Posted: 29 July 2014 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Chapter 4...

Arnav is so effected by khushi... is diwali she want invite him..
he avoid her and running..look what happen
they meet at the orphanage
he is attracted to her getting  Jealous


Chapter 5..
Fun in goa... both are relax... khushi is ordering arnav more
finally he knows Nk..just like bro..
now... the romantic dance...
and arnav lost his mind and confess with a kiss

 

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Posted: 29 July 2014 at 7:23am | IP Logged
Chapter 6...
Khushi good value in life from the nuns made her guilty...
arnav try to apologies...
he feel unlucky.. that he can never have love...
and went she said all that out anger
only got worst...


Chapter 7..
well nice NK came for help... and he did she lied...she loves him to
he did say some sense in to her...but she is ready to anything
for him..
arnav avoid for her own good...
now farmhouse..finally she can get to speak...

Chapter 8...
Nice she confess strongly... and both accept their love
and now she blindly trust him...
he is going to talk about his marriage
sheetal have been blackmailing arnav...

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