Finally read it last night in one go! I had heard a lot about this story. Thanks to Anu (Aashi12) who recommended it :)
First of all I loved your writing style, your vocabulary, you language everything is just perfect. I am glad I read this story! :)
The chapter in which Arnav kisses Khushi, that was the best chapter of the whole SS for me. Arnav's emotions, Khushi's turmoil everything was written very well.
Do I need to say i hated Sheetal and Shyam? But the best thing was that Khushi never misunderstood her ArnavJi, that was heartwarming.
I loved NK and lavanya too, they were absolutely adorable:)
Keep writing:)
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