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RagNa FF- The Waltz Of Two Hearts (part 19 on page80) (Page 47)

maarushkaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 5:35am | IP Logged
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Sooo Sooo Sooo Sooo much !!
I didnt  know 1 request pe ull continue it ..geee ...i shud have done dat long back in that case !! LOLLOL
reserved Big smile
Ur writing lost its charm ...that wud be the biggest sinful lie i wud ever say.WinkWink
It was awesomer than the awesomestBig smileBig smile
Ok ..so lemme start off ...i had always been a silent reader on forums & by d time i had become vocal u were goneCryCryCry
But now since u r back with this todu (bear my words ...pleaseLOL) update i take this as a chance to make up for my silence in the past even after reading waltz...
this 1 was as fab as ur previous 1s ...not at all off-beat. So much so that even after such a long time i didnt need to refer the previous updte ...1st line ..& Kaboom !! I was translocated in the waltz world with the story all crystal clear in my mind...no special efforts to recall the story were required. & the credit goes solely to ur writing skills ClapClap
Kalpana's emotional portrayal was impeccable ..her fear to confront her parents was beautifully presented. 
Raghav was as usual flwless but the line which caught my attention was the 1 in which u mentioned abt his fear to confront Kalpi's parents. Especially Kamla !!
& then was the toggling of Kalpi from Vitthal to Kamla & then to Pakya .. I found that so sweet. Thank God that Kamla has brains over here atleast ... the kalpi-pakya covo ws cute ...
All was so perfect ...
But the line which impressed me the most & is yet adamant on not leaving my brain
"Now was the time, admit it, please",  he pleaded inwardly.
The timing was so correct ...
& finally it was Paakhi ...wonder how are u gonna play with that aspect in the story !!

Do continue soon ...hope u dont get a discontinue ka jhatka againLOLLOL


Edited by mariee - 13 December 2014 at 6:23am

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charvi3 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 June 2014
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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Thank you so much dear for continuing this story .
I really loved this story.
Kalpi sad yes to marriage & from where this pakhi comeAngry
Update next part soon dear

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vyshuu.. IF-Dazzler

Joined: 05 May 2014
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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 6:13am | IP Logged
Resss!!! Big smile
Heyyllooo dear.. I'm superrr glad dat u choose to continue this ff.. thnx dear.. and yes! Welcum back.. Wink Hug
Update was superr cool one.. I loved the way u explained each n every feeling of kalpi.. her nervousness.. her fears n all.. it was superbb.. though they were simple gestures it made it look natural.. I lykd it!! And I really really loved pakhya's concern fr kalpi.. after all he is her brother and his support fr kalpi, which u showed us, was a good one! Nw finally even kalpi accepted her love fr him n vice versa fr raghav too! Bt I hope pakhi won't cum in btw ragna.. I'm sure u ll sort it out well.. Wink
Anyways.. thnx fr continuing dear.. and fr d pm too! Hug Big smile

Edited by vyshuu.. - 13 December 2014 at 11:53am

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chahat4u IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 6:29am | IP Logged
OMG You're back! Big smile Still can't believe it!!!! Rushing to read! Big smile

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darkloveriam IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 6:34am | IP Logged
finally u back
it's awsome
plz now don't discontinue it again

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Niki1980 Senior Member

Joined: 23 June 2014
Posts: 902

Posted: 13 December 2014 at 6:36am | IP Logged
Thank you for continuing this ff...amazing update..will be waiting for the next update

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chahat4u IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 6:39am | IP Logged
Okay, first things first, welcome back darling! Hug This was one of my most-most favourites and I was so pleasantly surprised to see it's update. Big smile Hoping to get regular updates now. Big smile
Coming to the update ti was awesome as usual and as always I am in love with your writing skills! brilliantly written. happy finally everything sorted out between the Jadhavs and Raghav Singhania. But Pakhi Kapoor? Cry Hope she doesn't create any hurdle.

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Rozy77 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 December 2014 at 7:32am | IP Logged
when i saw your pm i was like, OMG Shocked... (rubs eyes disbelievinglyShocked)
i cannot believe you came back to updateCry
such a pleasant surpriseStar
seriously, im crying happy tears right now.Cry
its been so long since i've read something on raghav-kalpana, and this story was one of my all time favourites...Day Dreaming

what an awesome partClap
loved itBig smile
i instantly connected to the story even though its been months since i read the last chapter
your brilliant writing skills have gone nowhere dearStarStarStar
thanks for updatingHug
i hope you continue soon
thanks for the pm too
hope you are well, take careHug

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