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RagNa FF- The Waltz Of Two Hearts (part 19 on page80) (Page 46)

lolor IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 August 2014 at 9:43am | IP Logged
pls continue...if u change ur mind pm me...

mehr05 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 August 2014 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rozy77

CryCrywell im sad but cannot say i didnt expect this..Disapprove
i respect your decision dear
thanks for giving us this beautiful story Hug

oh Rozy! 
thank you for understanding me Hug

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singhania Groupbie

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Yaar, never thought we wont see a happy RagNa ending with such a beautiful title and all the wonderful lines/emotions written in this FF. So plz Dear, your FF is read internationally and we miss such superb writers as you. You give us such beautiful dreams but  they cant be broken ones, whatever the outcome plz make an effort to give us an ending to quench our thirst. EMA is bakwaas now but give us something to make us revive our RagNa heaven. Plz I cant force you, but you know how many people have been reading and waiting for your updates, so plz plz plz just write a few more lines to develop this FF coz you left it at a turning point which brings so many questions in our mind. Plz my Dear Mehr as for myself, Im from Mauritius and love your writing. Hope to hear from you soon.Thanks will pray so that Allah gives you the inspiration needed to fulfill our dreams.Wink

Edited by singhania - 02 August 2014 at 4:03pm

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Cry One more writer sacrificed and defeated! I do understand long breaks to be normal! But stopping, this is plain atyachar on us die-hard fans and readers! Cry Anyways, do pm me if you by chance change your mind!CryOuch

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plzz continue ur FF dearCry

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please...please...please continue this ff...

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mehr05 IF-Dazzler

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Part 14

The long drive back home was filled with palpable tension. Sammy was driving as Raghav was engrossed in making some important calls and sending so many messages at the same time that Kalpi was amazed despite the tension she felt will explode anytime. No one was talking among them. Kalpi sat behind Sammy's seat and leaned her head on the window pane, watching every car sped past them...or were they speeding past the cars? Anyways, what matters was what was going to happen once she arrived home.

The news headline resonated in her head like a mantra. Gold digger? Lovers? Engagement?Her aai must have heard about it all now. Kalpi shut her eyes to ban the images they've shown on national TV and unwillingly groaned and couldn't manage to muffle the little sob that followed.

Raghav turned to watch her intently and then said nothing as he turned to his phone again.

The car finally halted in front of the chawl. Kalpi felt her heart stop beating and then it kick started all too soon. Blood was rushing in her ears and she couldn't hear what Raghav was addressing her. No!She can't face her parents. Not now!

Raghav got out of the car followed by Sammy and he came round to open her door wide. She looked at him and then shook her head, denying coming down. Raghav pulled her gently out and with Sammy and Raghav on either side of her, she went up to her house, where unsurprisingly, Manda Tai was avidly watching the trio's entrance and she fled upstairs to inform the other chawl people.

Raghav could feel how Kalpi was trembling but giving her any assurance now will shake her more. He was dreading this meeting as much as her but he must be brave and must stand firm. This is going to be his first meeting with Kamla ma. Would she recognize him? Would she welcome him or shun him? Would she believe the press about Kalpi and his pseudo affair or accept the proposal he is going to do for Kalpi's hand? So many questions were bubbling up and he dreaded each answers to them.

Kalpi went ahead as they reached the threshold. Her father was sitting on the couch, with an untouched cup of cold tea laid on the small coffee table. Pakya was sitting by his side, his gaze angrily roving about the floor and Kamla was in the kitchen doing nothing.

" baba?" called softly Kalpi from the threshold.

Vitthal shot to his feet as he heard the voice of his princess. He ran to his daughter and nearly overthrew the coffee table in doing so. He crushed Kalpi in a bear hug and showered her with concerned question. Kamla took her time to reach her and with tears filled eyes, she gently wrapped her daughter in a comforting, motherly hug too.

Pakya was up and about too. He dragged his sister to the couch and before anyone could ask anything more, he started: " I know these press people. Total nonsense they said about my sister, they don't know me! Pakya Vithal Jadhav!!!! No one, I precise Kalpi, no one here believes any of these craps they've shown on tv. This must all be a huge misunderstanding. And if ever, anyone opens his mouth to tell you anything, just tell him he'll have to deal with me first. Okay? Don't you worry, lil one. As long as your brother is here, you don't need to fear. And that Raghav Singhania! Your engagement with him? huh! I don't believe it and I don't accept it."

" believe it Pakya, and you have to accept it too!" interrupted Raghav, making everyone spun around to see him at the door step. No one noticed his entry as everyone was engrossed in Kalpi.

Raghav moved towards Kamla who was watching him like she was a statue. He bent down to touch her feet and simply said" Kamla ma. Its me, Your Raghav baba. Won't you bless me?"

Payka's mouth was left open as he glared at Raghav and Vitthal was eying him like he was a dangerous thing to his family.

Kamla laid her hand on the bent head and lifted him up.

"Raghav baba!" she cried and hugged him tightly. " you came back and all this... I'm so sorry for this news...I don't understand...Kalpi...you...engagement...hey deva!"

Raghav supported a nearly faint Kamla to the couch, sat down and turned to Vitthal.

"The news they've shown on tv is not what it seems. There is a lot behind it. Its your right to know exactly what led to this situation and if you permit me, I'll tell you all."

Raghav recounted the journey, omitting some parts and downplaying some other parts so as not to hurt them. Their concern for Kalpi was genuine and they don't need to know how much Prem has harassed their darling.

By the time he finished, Pakya was fuming. " this Prem Kapoor!!!" he stormed out of the house.

"so, you announced this engagement just to protect my daughter. Thank you Raghav baba, but I cannot allow this to go on. We'll call off this engagement." announced Kamla in a  much firm voice.

" No. this engagement is on and will be on. Kamla maa, I love your daughter and so does she and if you both will allow me, I would like to ask Kalpi's hand in marriage. Please, Kamla maa, Vitthal sir, I know this is happening fast, but trust me, I sincerely love Kalpi and will always keep her happy." Raghav ended his speech by folding Kamla's hand in his and giving it a squeeze.

The silence that followed was unbearable. Vitthal said nothing. He stood there and was absorbing it all while Kamla maa was crying profusely now.

Then, Vitthal turned towards Kalpi and asked her: "is it the truth? You love him too?"

Kalpi froze. The dreaded question! Kamla shifted so as she could read her daughter's expression and Raghav held his breath. He inwardly prayed that Kalpi gets the courage to admit it.

-"Now was the time, admit it, please",  he pleaded inwardly.

Tears streamed down her cheeks as she watched her parents and then she locked eyes with Raghav. Those eyes!  She could clearly see Raghav's love for her shining bright and the concern she saw there was enough to finally make her admit it to herself. He was the one! Has always been and there cannot be anyone else than him.

Slowly, so very slowly, Kalpi nodded and managed to mumble a yes, a very weak yes, but still they heard it all. Raghav relaxed and sagged with relief. Kamla hugged Kalpi again and Vitthal stood there trying to hide his tears. He grabbed Raghav and hugged him awkwardly to congratulate him.

"welcome to the family, Raghav baba.  So, when is the wedding, Kamla?" asked Vitthal.

"wedding? Who's getting married, Kamla maa?" asked a cheerful voice by the door. "Kalpi??? You are getting married?" asked Paakhi Kapoor.

"Paakhi Kapoor!" seethed Raghav.


here you go, all my readers.

hope you liked it and if so, plz hit like and drop some encouragements and comments for me plz.


Edited by mehr05 - 13 December 2014 at 5:24am

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Too awesome mehr gald u back n plz don't discontinue this story plz 
Plz no intrusion in my ragna wedding plz

Edited by sweet1308 - 13 December 2014 at 5:41am

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