Originally posted by mariee
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Sooo Sooo Sooo Sooo much !!
I didnt know 1 request pe ull continue it ..geee ...i shud have done dat long back in that case !! 😆😆
reserved 😃
unreserved
Ur writing lost its charm ...that wud be the biggest sinful lie i wud ever say.😉😉
It was awesomer than the awesomest😃😃
Ok ..so lemme start off ...i had always been a silent reader on forums & by d time i had become vocal u were gone😭😭😭
But now since u r back with this todu (bear my words ...please😆) update i take this as a chance to make up for my silence in the past even after reading waltz...
this 1 was as fab as ur previous 1s ...not at all off-beat. So much so that even after such a long time i didnt need to refer the previous updte ...1st line ..& Kaboom !! I was translocated in the waltz world with the story all crystal clear in my mind...no special efforts to recall the story were required. & the credit goes solely to ur writing skills 👏👏
Kalpana's emotional portrayal was impeccable ..her fear to confront her parents was beautifully presented.
Raghav was as usual flwless but the line which caught my attention was the 1 in which u mentioned abt his fear to confront Kalpi's parents. Especially Kamla !!
& then was the toggling of Kalpi from Vitthal to Kamla & then to Pakya .. I found that so sweet. Thank God that Kamla has brains over here atleast ... the kalpi-pakya covo ws cute ...
All was so perfect ...
But the line which impressed me the most & is yet adamant on not leaving my brain
"Now was the time, admit it, please", he pleaded inwardly.
The timing was so correct ...
& finally it was Paakhi ...wonder how are u gonna play with that aspect in the story !!
Do continue soon ...hope u dont get a discontinue ka jhatka again😆😆
UR EXCLUSIVE PANKHA , MARUSHKAA
wooowww!
now, this is awesome!!!! never i've got such a long comment for my FF. 😳 😳
Thank you for reading! i'm glad you really like my work. 😊
actually, i was not away from IF...i was here itself but became very silent as bashing was going on too much and EMA forum lost its charm somehow...but now i'm back to my babbles and decided firmly to get rid of this red colour and move on to become a sizzlerz. ☺️
i'm on holidays till end of December...i'll do my best to complete this FF and ends it well. 😊
