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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Aur meri yeh khwaahish hai ki aap aise hi likhte jao. ...
Pata hai apka ff padhne ke baad mujhe apne ff mein hamesha kami si lagti hai...

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Worldpeace

Aur meri yeh khwaahish hai ki aap aise hi likhte jao. ...
Pata hai apka ff padhne ke baad mujhe apne ff mein hamesha kami si lagti hai...
achcha ji...

Pehle apne FF par jaake...mera comment padho...

U fiction ki raani...swimming...cards...hmmm
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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ShagufElina

Originally posted by Worldpeace

Aur meri yeh khwaahish hai ki aap aise hi likhte jao. ...
Pata hai apka ff padhne ke baad mujhe apne ff mein hamesha kami si lagti hai...
achcha ji...

Pehle apne FF par jaake...mera comment padho...

U fiction ki raani...swimming...cards...hmmm

Fiction ki rani yeh thoda zyada ho gaya..

Mujhe daar lagta hai ab sabke comments padhne mein..

Sab ke expectations pe khari nai utar payi to...

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Posted: 15 March 2014 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Worldpeace

Originally posted by ShagufElina

Originally posted by Worldpeace

Aur meri yeh khwaahish hai ki aap aise hi likhte jao. ...
Pata hai apka ff padhne ke baad mujhe apne ff mein hamesha kami si lagti hai...
achcha ji...

Pehle apne FF par jaake...mera comment padho...

U fiction ki raani...swimming...cards...hmmm


Fiction ki rani yeh thoda zyada ho gaya..

Mujhe daar lagta hai ab sabke comments padhne mein..

Sab ke expectations pe khari nai utar payi to...
yeh kya...

Tumhaari taarif karo...toh maska malai lagne lag jaata hai...

Ab hmaari exoectation se bhi upar de rahi ho...toh taarif toh banti hai...Jaani...

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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Wow Shagu Day Dreaming

so beautiful & well written Heart

Thanks for this post Hug
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Posted: 17 March 2014 at 12:30pm | IP Logged
Shagu Star
ye update mixed emtions se bhara hai

Khariyat janene ka dar

khariyat jaan kar sukun

Tara ke behoshi mein bhi uss se mj ki baate Clap

haatho mein haath Star

wo ek tak niharna Star

aur phir se bechani..

bas intezar hai iss sleeping beauty ke jagne ka

intezar...
Ehsaas Star

Edited by Archi21 - 28 March 2014 at 4:07am

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Posted: 28 March 2014 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Archi21

Shagu Star
ye update mixed emtions se bhara hai

Khariyat janene ka dar

khariyat jaan kar sukun

Tara ke behoshi mein bhi uss se mj ki baate Clap

haatho mein haath Star

wo ek tak niharna Star

aur phir se bechani..

bas intezar hai iss sleeping beauty ke jagne ka

intezar...
Ehsaas Star
thabks Archu...Hug

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Posted: 08 June 2014 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Part 10:

Intezaar ka lamhaa mushkil hota hai...issliye nahi ki uska intezaar hai...par issliye...ki uske thik hone ka intezaar hai...

Waqt guzar raha hai...par usse abtak hosh nahi aa raha...

Bench pe baithe...usski neend tootne ka intezaar kar raha hun...

Kya karoon...uske siwa koi chaara nahi...

Raat ke 1 baj rahe the...

Achanak nurse aayi ...ussne kaha...

Aap jaldi aaiye...aapke patient ko hosh a raha hai...main doctor ko bulaati hun...

Meri khushi ki intehaa na rahi...main daud kar room ki taraf bhaaga...sheeshe mein se dekha aur ander ghuss gaya...

Ussne dheere se apni aankhen kholi apni naazuk si palkon ko upar kiya...

Saamne tha main tanha...

mujhe dekh usske chehre par halki si muskaan aa gayi...main aur khush ho gaya...

Woh mujhe ab bhi pehchaanti hai...

Par yeh kya...

Usske chehre ke andaaz badal gaye...
ussne dheeme lehje mein kaha...

"Tum"

Utne mein doctor aa gaye...

Unhone uss ka check-up kiya...woh hosh mein toh aa gayi thi ...aur thik bhi thi...

Doc: she is absolutely fine...bt she wil there under observation for 2 days...

Par Tara ne ussi waqt doctor se poocha...

"Doctor main yahan kaise...mujhe kya hua tha..."

Doc: aap ko yeh lekar aaye the...he wil explain...

Aur doctor wahan se chale gaye...

Ab sirf main aur woh...

Ussne phir poocha...

"Main yahan kaise..."

Maine bataya...ki accident hua tha...aur jaise tum mili main tumhe yahan le aaya...tum hosh mein bhi aayi thi...kya tumhe yaad nahi..."

Woh rone lagi...na jaane kyun...

Maine poocha " kya hua...pls ro mat...tumhari tabiyat par asar hoga..."

"mujhe kuch pata nahi...kuch yaad nahi aa raha...bas itna yaad hai...road cross kar rahi thi...usske baad kya hua mujhe pata nahi...aur jab aankh khuli toh tumhe dekha...abhi ..."

Maine kaha...

"kya sach mein tumhe kuch  bhi yaad nahi...tum yahan kaise aayi...kyunki uss waqt toh hosh mein thi..."

Tara:" Nahi...kuch bhi nahi..."

Yeh sun meri aas toot gayi...mera ishaara unn baaton ki taraf tha...jo ussne mujhse kahi...uss haalat mein...par usse yaad nahi...

Woh pareshaan hone lagi...yeh soch kar...

Maine kaha..."pareshan na ho...koi baat nahi...apne ghar waalon ka number dedo...toh hum unhe inform kar de..."

Tara: haan ...pls unhe batado...papa...bhaiyya bht pareshaan honge...
Waise kitne baj rahe hai...

" 2 baj rahe hai..."

Tara: " kya ???? Itna waqt...pls unhe jaldi batao..."

Isse pehle ki meri aankhon se aansun...ussi ke saamne gir pade...maine munh pher liya...
Kyunki main usse apne aansun nahi dikhaa chaahta...

Main room se bahar nikal aaya...

Sidd ko number diya aur kaha...inform kar de...main uss haalat mein na tha...

Rona kyun aaya main jaanta nahi...
Woh uss lamhe ko bhool gayi ussliye...ya phir main usske saamne khada hokar bhi usse apne hone ka ehsaas nahi dila paa raha ...

Woh ab bhi pareshaan thi...
Shayad woh saari baatein bhool gayi...yeh mujhe zyaada takleef de raha tha...

Sidd ne mujhe yunh dekha...toh aake mere paas baitha...

Main usse gale lag kar ro pada...

Sidd: kya hua yaar...ab toh woh thik hai...ab kyun ro raha hai...

Maine kaha...kya karoon yaar...usse kuch bhi yaad nahi...jo jo baatein ussne mujhse  Car mein kahi...usse kuch bhi yaad nahi...

Sidd: ek kaam kar pehle hum doc se poochte hai...chal...

Hum doc ke paas gaye...usse poocha...

" Accident ke baad woh jo baaatein kar rahi thi...woh usse kyun yaad nahi..."

Doc: see ...tht time...she was in delerious condition...so uss waqt jo bhi hua...woh uske subconcious mind mein chala gaya...par aap yeh kyun jaanna chahte ho...

Sidd: Aise hi...

Doc: yeh toh Achcha hi hai...jo bura waqt tha usse yaad nahi...and dont force her...if she wil ask also...comforts her...

Hum waaps baahar  aa gaye...

Maine socha...

Ab main kya kahun...jiss lamhe ko maine jiya...uss waqt...uss pal...

Jo ussne kaha...apne ehsaas ka izhaar...meri baat...meri yaad...yeh woh lamhaa tha...


Jisse doc bura keh rahe hai...uss lamhe ka jawaaz koi nahi...uss pal ne mujhe kitni khushi di thi...
mujhe meri Tara di thi...

mere ehsaas ko takmeel di thi...

mere intezaar ko manzil di thi...

Mere justoojoo ka haasil thi...

Uss waqt mujhe wih pata chala jo pichle ek saal se main na jaanta tha...apne hi waham mein jee raha tha...

Par usse woh yaad nahi...ab main kya karoon...

Sidd: mere bhai...dekh jo hota hai...achche ke liye hota hai...

Mujhe itna tez gussa aaya...yeh kitaabi baatein sirf kehne ki hoti hai...

Maine jaise gusse se Sidd ki taraf dekha...aur gala dabane jaisa action kiya...woh peeche hatt gaya...

Sidd: mere bhai...


Maine kaha..."chup ho jaa...issmein tujhe kya achcha nazar aa raha hai..."

Sidd: arre...

Main: "chup ek dam chup ho jaa...saara gussa tujhpar nikaal dunga..."

Main abhi thoda der pehle ro raha tha...ab gussa kar raha hun...woh bhi Sidd par...
Yeh mere saath kya ho raha hai...har cheez haath aate aate choot jaati hai...

Tara gayi toh note chod kar...mili toh behosh...jab izhaar kiya toh ab yaad nahi...

Main kya karoon...

Sidd: mere yaar ...pehle baat toh sunn...

"Dekh...tu usse chahta hai..."

Maine kaha..."haan"

Sidd:" Woh tujhe chahti hai..."

Maine phirse kaha " haan"

Sidd: Arre mere yaar...tujhe yeh toh pata hai na...ki woh bhi tere khayaalon mein mast hai...par yeh baat usse nahi pata...ki woh yeh sab keh chuki hai...toh kya farq padta hai...

Jisse janna tha...usse pata toh chal gaya...matlab ...tu...

Ab usse nahi yaad toh kya hua...

Maine kaha..."kaise..."

Sidd: izhaar ka kya hai...kar degi...dil mein toh hai...zubaan par aa hi jaayega...par lana kaise hai...yeh ab tujhe tai karna hai...

Ab inn bakwaas baaton mein time paas karega beta ...toh ghar waale bhi aate hi honge...

Toh jo bacha kucha time hai...mil le...

Maine socha ...haan...yeh bhi sahi...

Main fauran daud kar gaya...bina time waste kiye...door ke paas jaate hi speed slow kar li...

Dheere se door khola aur ander gaya...

Jiss ke liye itni tadap...dard tha ab usse dekh utnahi sukun...
Jisske liye itna roya ab utna hi thehrao...

Darwaaza khulte hi ussne aankh kholi...aur uthne ki koshish ki...

Maine kaha...arre nahi...lete raho...aaraam karo...

Doc ne rest karne kaha hai...

Yeh kehkar mein wahan baith gya...

Woh bhi chup...main bhi chup...

Meri bhi nazrein neeche...aur uski bhi...donon ek doosre se nazrein nahi mila rahe the...pata nahi kyun...

Phir mera kya...ab kya...aisa hi kiya toh ...toh ho chali meri pyaar ki nayya paar...

Main usse phir dekhne laga...

Ussne kaha...

Tara: Mujhe nahi pata kya hua...kaise hua...mujhe yaad nahi...

Aap ne jo mere liye kiya hai...Thank u keh kar main usse chota nahi banana chahti ...

Mere paas toh lafz nahi...main kya kahun...

Yeh pehli baar nahi hai...uss baar bhi aur aaj bhi...

Kya kahun samjh nahi aa raha...


Maine socha...
"Haaaye...ab iski inn pyaari baaton par main kya kahun...yeh ladki har haal mein apna jaadoo chalati hai...

Sach kahun...koi itna pyaara kaise ho sakta hai...


Maine usse kaha...
"tara tum kuch mat kaho...doc ne tumhe aaram karne ke liye kaha hai...zyaada baat bhi mat karo..."

Woh chup ho gayi...

Phir khaamoshi chha gayi...

Ab kya...woh thoda idhar dekhti ...udhar dekhti...phir mujhe...shayad kuch poochna chaah rahi hai...

Jab uska dhyaan idhar udhar hota toh main usse dekhta...jaise hi meri taraf...

Phir main idhar udhar dekhna start kar deta ...

Phir usse raha na gaya...ussne pooch hi liya...

Tara:Mrityunjay...tum kya keh rahe the ...main kuch keh rahi thi...behoshi mein...maine kya kaha...mujhe bataoge...mujhe yaad nahi...pls...


Itne pyaar se pls kaha hai...bata dun...nahi...

Ab toh main phirse sununga...issi ke munh se wahi baatein...

"Kuch nahi aise hi...tum dhyaan mat do...inn sab par...tum thik ho...bas yahi kaafi hai..."

Tara: Achcha...Meethi Adi...Vasu...Yug...kaise hai...

Maine kaha jaan boojh kar...

"tumhe yaad hai..."

Tara:"Yaad hai ka kya matlab...mujhe har koi yaad hai...uss trip ka ek ek pal yaad hai..."

Maine phir lohe par hathoda maara...

"aur main..."

Uska lehja dheema ho gaya...chehre ki rangat badal gayi...

Tara: "tum bhi..."

Phir khud hi kehne lagi...

"yeh kaisa sawaal hai...yaad na hote toh tumhe kaise pehchaanti...bolo..."

Jo mujhe sunna tha...woh toh jawaab mujhe mil gaya...

Maine kaha...
"Offooo main jaanta hun...mazak kar raha hun..."

Tara: par haan...ek farq hai...jisse maine dekhi thi...woh itna bolta nahi tha...tum bohot bolte ho... Uss Mrityunjay ke munh se hardly maine kuch lafz sune the...

Aur tum...baaton ka khazaana lag rahe ho...
Ek saal mein aisa kya badal gaya...

Maine socha kya karoon...keh dun...

Mohtarma aap ka hi Asar hai...par na...abhi nahi...iss nayi shuruaat ko mazedaar banaya jaaye...

Maine kaha..."Mohabbat"

Usska chehra dekhne laayak tha uss waqt...bed par lete hue...par hawaiya toh udd gayi...sawaalon ne chehre ko gher liya...

Tara: mohabbat????

Main: Ji...mohabbat ...chahat...ishq...jaisa lafz toh suna hoga...achche achchon ko badal deti hai...

Isse pehle ke woh kuch aur pooche...waqt khatam hua aur entry hui Sidd ki...

Ussne kaha...Tara ke Papa aur Bhai aa gaye...main khada ho gaya...

Phirse wahi saada mizaaj ban gaya...

Aas toot kar jo bandhi hai ab khona nahi...
Waqt tham kar jo chala hai ab rukna nahi...



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