~Ehsaas~ek mulaaqat.........SS....updated last part on page 16 - Page 5

Originally posted by: MastaT

Wow! Beautifully written!!xx

thanks dear...

Awesome...update. love it. ❤️Edited by TasrinS - 10 years ago

wow shagu :-) :-) :-D
kya bheega update hai

update ehsaaso se bheega hai

bus se niche utarne wale scene ke liye
~Chanda ki doli mein ,pario ki jholi se shehzadi aayi meri~

barish wale scene ke liye
~ye sazis hai boondo ki~

and Tara ki overall khubsurti MJ ki ankho se
~Chandi jaisa rang hai uska sone jaise baal,
ek tu hi dhanwan hai gori baki sab kangal~

ek gaana iss raat ke liye
~lag ja gale ki fir ye hasi raat ho naa ho
sayad phir iss janam mein mulakat hoo naa hoo~
😃

*thud*...ouch bohot zor se lagi...







Edited by Worldpeace - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TasrinS

Awesome...update. love it.❤️

thanks Samima...glad love it...

Originally posted by: Archi21

wow shagu :-) :-) :-D
kya bheega update hai

update ehsaaso se bheega hai

bus se niche utarne wale scene ke liye
~Chanda ki doli mein ,pario ki jholi se shehzadi aayi meri~

barish wale scene ke liye
~ye sazis hai boondo ki~

and Tara ki overall khubsurti MJ ki ankho se
~Chandi jaisa rang hai uska sone jaise baal,
ek tu hi dhanwan hai gori baki sab kangal~

ek gaana iss raat ke liye
~lag ja gale ki fir ye hasi raat ho naa ho
sayad phir iss janam mein mulakat hoo naa hoo~
😃

ohhhb Archi...song queen...
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Last line ...i m singing tht song since three days...aur tumne keh kar toh...
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Thanks dear...for liking so much...
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Lag jaa gale phir yeh haseen raat ho na ho...
Shayad phir iss janam mein mulaaqaat ho na ho...
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Iss SS mein raat bhi hai aur ek mulaaqaat bhi...
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Superb...

Originally posted by: Worldpeace

*thud*...ouch bohot zor se lagi...

u Know shagu wat wen I requested u for a rain sequence. .. after that I was repenting. ..

Was like o no ab shagu rain sequence likhegi jo as usual hoga aur meri wajah se iss ff ka flow kharab ho jayega...

BUt I was so wrong and thank u shagu for proving me wrong...

It was beatiful...

HEy I watch did so in the language od mudasar...

It Was chik chik... bhoom... FIRE...

SOng for the update...

TIp tip barsa pani...

pani mein aag lagayi..

aag lagi dil mein to..

dil ko teri yaad aayi...

ohooo Jaani...
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Pehle yeh batao...baarish scene baitha na perfectly story mein...
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In this part...
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I like MriAra jacket scene...and whole baarish sequence...
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Thanks dear...for giving idea...

Shagu dis is most beatiful rain sequence I have ever read...

Originally posted by: Worldpeace

Shagu dis is most beatiful rain sequence I have ever read...

and dis fits perfectly. ...

Thank u for considering my request. ..

mujhe hoda darr tha...kahin MriAra ka hug scene perfectly imagine karne mein aayrga ya nahi...
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Mj ka gussa...uski tara ke liye fikar...everythng just got perfect in end...
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Love u jaani...
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Aisa toh nahi...main frnd hun...isiliye meri taarif ke pull bandh rahi ho... 😉

No shagu aisa nai hai...