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AsYa OS - Countdown to New Year's Eve (Page 6)

--Radhika-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 4:52pm | IP Logged
Ahh I loved it! <33 You write very well. (:

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saida.m Goldie

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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zanutix

Originally posted by saida.m

You weren't kidding that it is long! LOL But hey! I didn't even realize it! I loved reading the entire story together at once without having to wait for the updates!

So are you ready for a long ass review? LOL Such a long and worked hard upon story deserves a thorough comment!

First off - It is based in London! Aww! London is my second home! I have spent countless summers there!

You got me good with Sarah's introduction. I totally thought the enchantress was Zoya. I mean, why wouldn't I, right? But it was such a nice twist to the story! And Dude! I can read maps just fine! I guess Sarah is naturally blonde? LOL

Asad and Zoya's meeting was hilarious! Zoya will always be blunt in her ways, right? Of course! Way to let a guy know he messed up! But I loved their bonding, Zoya's Van and their walks and talk around the Square! And shopping! It was such a beautiful bonding scenario! And boy! They are falling for each other fast! Sarah stands no chance, Asad Miyan!

Speaking of Sarah - what a bitch! Asad did good telling her what she really was when he broke up with her! Well, is it really breaking up when you have only gone on one date?  And allergic to her perfume? Classic! LOLLOL

I loved Asad's gift to Zoya. I would be sentimental about such a thoughtful gesture as well! And the gentle kiss! Such a bitter sweet moment for our Zoya! 
The little heartbreak and sad part was a good break from the banter and all the happiness! 
And come on Asad's inner voice! His stubble looks DELICIOUS! There is no other way around that particular thing! He looks hawt when grieving! Blushing
In fact, I loved all the inner monologues and discussions with the inner self!

Asad did manage to get her to talk to him! And confess as well! Woohoo! And they kissed at the end of the countdown! Day Dreaming It doesn't get better than that!

I loved the characters, the story and the setting! It was so sweet and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! You know, I would love to read more of these characters, now that they are a couple! They'll make a cute, and very bantering couple! 
Lovely OS! (Outstretched Shot) ROFL But everything made sense and nothing was stretched without reason, so the length is just an added bonus for the readers!  

You need to write more often! You really are a brilliant writer! Big smile

Oh, I certainly wasn't! NOT AT ALL! ROFL
17 pages of a Word Document - Phew!

I thought of breaking it up into a TS, but I SO BADLY wanted to write an OS, which it was - An Outstretched Shot - as you called it!

I love long ass reviews! Thank you! Hug
Oh, the hardwork! Thanks for the acknowledgement. Smile

I love London! Everything about it! Especially Trafalgar Square - countless memories. Day Dreaming
Yay! Finally! 
I asked my friend about the intro, and she was like, 'I knew it wasn't Zoya' and I was like, 'What the heck!' You got caught off! Approve
Yep, it was the most predictable thing. I like it when the leads are simple, sober. 
Just like me! ROFL

Oh she's a blonde - who else survives on cattle food and can't read maps?!
My favorite part was their signature, customized goodbye.
I'm attracted to spirals like moth to flame! I really have no idea why!

Exactly! Especially when she shrugged off Zoya's polite gesture towards her. Bitch!
Haha! I don't think they would've gone for many dates, considering the fact that he didn't even let her kiss! LOL

Poor Zoya! She wanted him too, but he was taken at the moment! Unhappy
I like the clean shaven Asad more. And the inner voice likes what I like!
I loved it when he tried impressing her by showing up at her Food Van before her.

Didn't I mention that I love it when friendships turn to love?!Day Dreaming
I know it was super cliched, but I couldn't help!
And I would love to write more, only when my life permits.

The 28th, 29th and 30th were the hardest to write. I didn't know how to stretch it further! 
Thank you so much for liking it!
It means a lot! Big smile

P.S. - It's 3 a.m. and I'm still awake as an owl. I love owls!
Anyway, Good night! LOL

Keep up the hard work! I really loved it! And its great to hear your thoughts behind the writing and what you thought about the characters! 
Owls are good, owls deliver your letters. Hedwig!
Clearly I am still in my HP mode! Excuse me! LOL

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rajnid68 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 January 2014 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
Absolutely amazing...

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Zanutix Senior Member

Joined: 29 March 2013
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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rajnid68

Absolutely amazing...

Thank you! Big smile
Zanutix Senior Member

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Posted: 06 January 2014 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Radhika--

Ahh I loved it! <33 You write very well. (:

Thank you so much! Big smile

Glad you read the WHOLE of it! LOL
Zanutix Senior Member

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Posts: 990

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SBanoMalik

I loved it!! Embarrassed
It was just awesome!! Amazing!! Clap

Thank you so much! Big smile
Zanutix Senior Member

Joined: 29 March 2013
Posts: 990

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 2:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Arshaya...

I read da whole os.
Believe me itz amazing!
U r a really brilliant writer.
Btw i'm arshaya.

It was so long!
Thank you for reading and liking it! Embarrassed

And you can call me Zan! LOL
Zanutix Senior Member

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Posts: 990

Posted: 06 January 2014 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by zola007

Awesome update !Clap
loved it !
it was so well written !
thanks for the pm (:

Thank you! Embarrassed
I'm glad you loved it!

And you're welcome! Big smile

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