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AsYa OS - Countdown to New Year's Eve (Page 10)

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Posted: 10 January 2014 at 10:43am | IP Logged
This OS is wonderful, hope to read more from you :)

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Posted: 11 January 2014 at 1:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lavanya.K

This OS is wonderful, hope to read more from you :)

Thank you so much for reading and liking it! Big smile
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Posted: 12 January 2014 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Linsie


Thank you! Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 January 2014 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
You're right! It IS long. But I'm not complaining! LOL 'Cause I loved every bit of it. Wink I absolutely adore your writing style. Cool
 
Anyways, I, as well as other readers probably, was really caught off guard in the beginning. I expected the girl Asad saw to be Zoya, not someone else. Wink I liked how you used the element of surprise and the story wasn't totally cliched and cheesy. ClapClapClap
I loved the progressions too, how Asad and Zoya slowly started feeling for each other. Embarrassed And the necklace-thing/kiss-on-the-cheek was so sweet. Big smile
 
All in all, I really enjoyed this! Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming It was perfect. Embarrassed Great job! Heart
 
-Fari. Embarrassed Heart

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Posted: 16 January 2014 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -LiveLoveLaugh-

You're right! It IS long. But I'm not complaining! LOL 'Cause I loved every bit of it. Wink I absolutely adore your writing style. Cool
 
Anyways, I, as well as other readers probably, was really caught off guard in the beginning. I expected the girl Asad saw to be Zoya, not someone else. Wink I liked how you used the element of surprise and the story wasn't totally cliched and cheesy. ClapClapClap
I loved the progressions too, how Asad and Zoya slowly started feeling for each other. Embarrassed And the necklace-thing/kiss-on-the-cheek was so sweet. Big smile
 
All in all, I really enjoyed this! Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming It was perfect. Embarrassed Great job! Heart
 
-Fari. Embarrassed Heart

Thank you for reading Fari!
Haha! Well, I don't actually like the 'love at first sight' mantra.. hence the surprise! Embarrassed
Friendship turning to love Day Dreaming
The necklace thingy and Asad's plan to impress Zoya by turning up at the Van were my favorite parts! 
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Big smile

P.S. IT WAS SO LONG! LOL


Edited by Zanutix - 16 January 2014 at 2:13am
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Posted: 25 February 2014 at 8:39am | IP Logged
Never again will I delay a read. 
Never again.


You've touched a few unknown chords in my heart. Unknown for I never knew they existed. I'm very sure I have said something similar to someone else before this, but this, this is different.

Zanu. *No! No more running* 


Tell me. Please. Please, tell me. Will it happen? Can it happen? To us? Are we deserving of this beautiful feeling. Most importantly, are we destined to feel this way? And for such feelings to be reciprocated? Tell me. I need to know.





Why did I wait till today to read this. 




Will our Asad ever come to us?







Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam..
Ishq

Yeh lal ishq...




Mummy ne theek farmaya. Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.

This meethi meethi ehsas...my eyes water with deep emotions...my heavy heart, ever hopeful.


You said cheese. And fluff.


This?





This is the first light at the break of dawn.

This is dew drops...

This is Zoya telling Asad where she keeps the spare keys.


This is reverence.


This is tranquility.


Rahan na main phir apne jaisa




Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam






Ishq...



Edited by farz_parachute - 25 February 2014 at 8:39am

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Posted: 25 February 2014 at 8:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by farz_parachute

Never again will I delay a read. 
Never again.


You've touched a few unknown chords in my heart. Unknown for I never knew they existed. I'm very sure I have said something similar to someone else before this, but this, this is different.

Zanu. *No! No more running* 


Tell me. Please. Please, tell me. Will it happen? Can it happen? To us? Are we deserving of this beautiful feeling. Most importantly, are we destined to feel this way? And for such feelings to be reciprocated? Tell me. I need to know.





Why did I wait till today to read this. 




Will our Asad ever come to us?







Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam..
Ishq

Yeh lal ishq...




Mummy ne theek farmaya. Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.

This meethi meethi ehsas...my eyes water with deep emotions...my heavy heart, ever hopeful.


You said cheese. And fluff.


This?





This is the first light at the break of dawn.

This is dew drops...

This is Zoya telling Asad where she keeps the spare keys.


This is reverence.


This is tranquility.


Rahan na main phir apne jaisa




Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam






Ishq...


Aww.
That was really touching, but WUT DAWG, aap toh bohot serious ho gaye?
Did you not find it light hearted? Confused

Man, you're poetic! Wow!

But really, what made you feel so heavy nigga?


Edited by Zanutix - 25 February 2014 at 9:01am

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Posted: 25 February 2014 at 9:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zanutix

Originally posted by farz_parachute

Never again will I delay a read. 
Never again.


You've touched a few unknown chords in my heart. Unknown for I never knew they existed. I'm very sure I have said something similar to someone else before this, but this, this is different.

Zanu. *No! No more running* 


Tell me. Please. Please, tell me. Will it happen? Can it happen? To us? Are we deserving of this beautiful feeling. Most importantly, are we destined to feel this way? And for such feelings to be reciprocated? Tell me. I need to know.





Why did I wait till today to read this. 




Will our Asad ever come to us?







Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam..
Ishq

Yeh lal ishq...




Mummy ne theek farmaya. Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.

This meethi meethi ehsas...my eyes water with deep emotions...my heavy heart, ever hopeful.


You said cheese. And fluff.


This?





This is the first light at the break of dawn.

This is dew drops...

This is Zoya telling Asad where she keeps the spare keys.


This is reverence.


This is tranquility.


Rahan na main phir apne jaisa




Mera naam ishq
Tera naam ishq

Mera naam
Tera naam
Mera naam






Ishq...


Aww.
That was really touching, but WUT DAWG, aap toh bohot serious ho gaye?
Did you not find it light hearted? Confused

Man, you're poetic! Wow!

But really, what made you feel so heavy nigga?

I don't know.

It just occurred to me that Love is possible.

Not the I love you kind.

The love you have going on in your piece of art.

That.

That exists.

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