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Wow that was amazing !
It was long but beautiful
Loved it π³
Originally posted by: Appleflove this story so much..
the way you wrote it made it so interesting..asya started off with friendship..their friendship was so unique and so lovely..they just hit off at the first meet..they were so comfortable with each other..asad was so funny in this..creating so many excuses to run away from sarah..πasya's bond was so open and very stable from the begining..love the part when they both were thinking about each other with new feeling..asad gifted her the chain that she wanted to buy..π³how sweet..they were like real friends..reminded me of my best friend instantly..πfinally they are together on the new year..π³zoya's question at that part was so cute..Finally breaking away, Zoya asked in a ragged breath, "does that mean we'll be kissing throughout the year?"ππ³you are awesome..reading it all over again..
Originally posted by: treasure11Hushhh...
ALLAH MIYAN YOU REALLY MEANT IT WHEN YOU SAID ITS ALONG ONE πI know! So long that it was awkward when I posted it! π³21st DEC- YOU GAVE ME A SHOCK WHEN YOU SAID SARAH π² BUT THAT GIGGLING CALMED ME π THEY BOTH CONNECTED SOO SOON π HE WAS EXITED TO MEET BOTH π² πYay! You got caught off too! Everyone must have predicted her to be Zoya, but BAM! She turned out to be Sarah! π22nd DEC- SARAH ,SUDDENLY SHE WAS FREE FOR THE WEEK π²ZOYA ALREADY PREPARED CHICKEN TIKKA FOR HIM π I LOVE CHICKEN TIKKA AND BIRYANI π AND I LOVED THEIR SIGNATURE WAVE π³ ASAD TRYING TO BE CAREFREE AS HER πShe can do whatever she wants, whenever she wants - it's her Dad's office after all!Zoya and her '6th sense'. πAsad Miyaah learning the worldly ways from Zoya begum! π³23rd DEC- Gosh she had a tendency to day dream more that he ever did!Day dreamer Zoya!πI LIKE THIS DAY DREAMER ASAD πAND MULTIPLE PERSONALITY DISORDER WAS A GOOD ONE TOO π AND SHE ALREADY HAS FEELING...Yup! I like it when the lead characters have a sense of humor. Life becomes monotonous without it. π24th DEC- SARAH IS SUCH BITCH π‘ SHE DID'NT EVEN AKNOWLEDGE ZOYAAND ASAD SNEEZING BEFORE THE KISS π€£ GOD HE IS SUCH A DRAMEBAZZ πI felt really bad for Zoya. That bitch! How could she?!Haha! Asad couldn't waste his first kiss on Sarah, could he?! π25th DEC- ASAD KEPT STARING AT HER π³ SOO CUTE !!And Zoya caught him in the act! Poor he! π26th- SHE WORE A DRESS π CHINESE DINNER AND I WOULD SAY SAME BOUT CONJURING πAND IGNORING SARAH ONLY AFTER 1 DATE !!!!! I KNEW HE WOULD BUY HER THAT NECKLACE ...I LOVED THAT SCENE WHEN THEY STOOD INFRONT OF THE MIRROR π³Ooh, Zoya in a dress..The Conjuring is a stupid movie!He didn't want Sarah to ruin the night when he was actually having fun. So he straightaway ignored her! πI agree.That was such a picture perfect moment! βΊοΈ27th DEC- THAT KISS WAS SOO SWEET !!!AGAIN THE BITCHSARAH AND NAUTANKI ASAD πI LOVED ASAD AND ZOYA'S BICKERINGYes! I m so happy that Zoya was awake. The kiss would've been wasted otherwise. π³Haha! Especially when Zoya imitates a manly voice and refer's to herself as 'sexy'! π28thDEC-- I LOVED HOW HE STOOD ACROSS AND ADMIRED HER AND THEN FOLLOWED HER ...POOR HIM29th DEC- AGAIN POOR ASAD π€£30th DEC- I LOVE HIS CONVO WITH HIS INNER SELF π SO FUNNY !!!πHe had no choice! Poor he! π€£Again, as I said, I love writing self talks! They're hilarious!Asad sure has a commanding brain! π31st DEC- INTRUDER π HAIII...WHAT A ROMANTIC ASAD βΊοΈHAPPY NEW YEAR πOh he knows how to woo his lady love! πHushhh... AGAIN !!!!!!! SUCH ALONG COMMENT !!!!!!!HOPE U WON'T GET TIRED READING THIS πTHANK GOD YOU GAVE THIS AS A WHOLE ! I LIKE READING ALL IN ONE GOAND WELL DONE AM IN LOVE WITH THIS ASAD πI WANTED SOME MORE π GREEDY ME πTHIS WAS THE BEST SUPRISE !!!THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN!!I love long feedbacks, so THANK YOU!Haha! The little voice inside me told me to make it a TS, but I scolded her and she scurried away! πThe Asad in my stories is always funny! I like him that way. πI'm so happy you loved your surprise!I guess it makes up for the delay! π π³
Originally posted by: Nitya_SureshI love this... Such a great os... I just can't get enough of it.. :)
Originally posted by: Zanutix
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