AsYa OS - Countdown to New Year's Eve - Page 5

Ahh I loved it! <33 You write very well. (:

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Oh, I certainly wasn't! NOT AT ALL! 🤣

17 pages of a Word Document - Phew!

I thought of breaking it up into a TS, but I SO BADLY wanted to write an OS, which it was - An Outstretched Shot - as you called it!

I love long ass reviews! Thank you! 🤗

Oh, the hardwork! Thanks for the acknowledgement. 😊

I love London! Everything about it! Especially Trafalgar Square - countless memories. 

Yay! Finally! 

I asked my friend about the intro, and she was like, 'I knew it wasn't Zoya' and I was like, 'What the heck!' You got caught off! 

Yep, it was the most predictable thing. I like it when the leads are simple, sober. 

Just like me! 🤣

Oh she's a blonde - who else survives on cattle food and can't read maps?!

My favorite part was their signature, customized goodbye.

I'm attracted to spirals like moth to flame! I really have no idea why!

Exactly! Especially when she shrugged off Zoya's polite gesture towards her. Bitch!

Haha! I don't think they would've gone for many dates, considering the fact that he didn't even let her kiss! 😆

Poor Zoya! She wanted him too, but he was taken at the moment! 😔

I like the clean shaven Asad more. And the inner voice likes what I like!

I loved it when he tried impressing her by showing up at her Food Van before her.

Didn't I mention that I love it when friendships turn to love?!

I know it was super cliched, but I couldn't help!

And I would love to write more, only when my life permits.

Sigh.

The 28th, 29th and 30th were the hardest to write. I didn't know how to stretch it further! 

Thank you so much for liking it!

It means a lot! 😃

P.S. - It's 3 a.m. and I'm still awake as an owl. I love owls!

Anyway, Good night! 😆

Originally posted by: rajnid68

Absolutely amazing...

Originally posted by: --Radhika--

Ahh I loved it! <33 You write very well. (:

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

I loved it!! 😳
It was just awesome!! Amazing!! 👏

Originally posted by: ...Arshaya...

I read da whole os.
Believe me itz amazing!
U r a really brilliant writer.
Btw i'm arshaya.

Originally posted by: zola007

Awesome update !👏

loved it !

it was so well written !

thanks for the pm (:

HI ! This was amazing. I loved each and everything about this OS! You're a brilliant writer Zan! :)
Its funny how Zoya talked about "Never judging a book by its cover" while they were shopping and it turned out be like a piece of advice for Asad! The conversation Asad had with inner Asad was also so cute haha. Im in love with this story. Have read it twice already! Please continue writing such wonderful pieces 😳..And PM me if you can!

Originally posted by: -GaussianNoise-

HI ! This was amazing. I loved each and everything about this OS! You're a brilliant writer Zan! :)
Its funny how Zoya talked about "Never judging a book by its cover" while they were shopping and it turned out be like a piece of advice for Asad! The conversation Asad had with inner Asad was also so cute haha. Im in love with this story. Have read it twice already! Please continue writing such wonderful pieces 😳..And PM me if you can!

love this story so much..