AsYa OS - Countdown to New Year's Eve - Page 4

Originally posted by: marcoe

Ur a fab write
I loved d characters asad and zoya as well
differnt from d show ,but really cute
.specially d way they had a conversation with their mind

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Haha! Thank you!😳

I love the conversations they have with their mind too!😆

Thank you reading such a long 'OS'!😃

Oh I love reading long updates
So the pleasure is all mine
Since u like giving such amazing long updates u shud consider writing ffs 😉

Originally posted by: marcoe

Oh I love reading long updates
So the pleasure is all mine
Since u like giving such amazing long updates u shud consider writing ffs 😉

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Thanks for the suggestion but I'm so lazy and busy that I hardly have time to up
date the FS I'm currently working on!😆😳

Haha. ..kk
Which fs is it anyway

Originally posted by: marcoe

Haha. ..kk
Which fs is it anyway

You weren't kidding that it is long! 😆 But hey! I didn't even realize it! I loved reading the entire story together at once without having to wait for the updates!


Edited by saida.m - 10 years ago

Originally posted by: saida.m

You weren't kidding that it is long! 😆 But hey! I didn't even realize it! I loved reading the entire story together at once without having to wait for the updates!

So are you ready for a long ass review? 😆 Such a long and worked hard upon story deserves a thorough comment!

First off - It is based in London! Aww! London is my second home! I have spent countless summers there!

You got me good with Sarah's introduction. I totally thought the enchantress was Zoya. I mean, why wouldn't I, right? But it was such a nice twist to the story! And Dude! I can read maps just fine! I guess Sarah is naturally blonde? 😆

Asad and Zoya's meeting was hilarious! Zoya will always be blunt in her ways, right? Of course! Way to let a guy know he messed up! But I loved their bonding, Zoya's Van and their walks and talk around the Square! And shopping! It was such a beautiful bonding scenario! And boy! They are falling for each other fast! Sarah stands no chance, Asad Miyan!

Speaking of Sarah - what a bitch! Asad did good telling her what she really was when he broke up with her! Well, is it really breaking up when you have only gone on one date?  And allergic to her perfume? Classic! 😆😆

I loved Asad's gift to Zoya. I would be sentimental about such a thoughtful gesture as well! And the gentle kiss! Such a bitter sweet moment for our Zoya! 

The little heartbreak and sad part was a good break from the banter and all the happiness! 

And come on Asad's inner voice! His stubble looks DELICIOUS! There is no other way around that particular thing! He looks hawt when grieving! ☺️

In fact, I loved all the inner monologues and discussions with the inner self!

Asad did manage to get her to talk to him! And confess as well! Woohoo! And they kissed at the end of the countdown!  It doesn't get better than that!

I loved the characters, the story and the setting! It was so sweet and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it! You know, I would love to read more of these characters, now that they are a couple! They'll make a cute, and very bantering couple! 

Lovely OS! (Outstretched Shot) 🤣 But everything made sense and nothing was stretched without reason, so the length is just an added bonus for the readers!  

You need to write more often! You really are a brilliant writer! 😃

Edited by Zanutix - 10 years ago

I read da whole os.
Believe me itz amazing!
U r a really brilliant writer.
Btw i'm arshaya.

Awesome update !👏

I loved it!! 😳
It was just awesome!! Amazing!! 👏