AsYa OS - Countdown to New Year's Eve - Page 8

Originally posted by: Lavanya.K

This OS is wonderful, hope to read more from you :)

Originally posted by: Linsie

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

You're right! It IS long. But I'm not complaining! 😆 'Cause I loved every bit of it. 😉 I absolutely adore your writing style. 😎

 

Anyways, I, as well as other readers probably, was really caught off guard in the beginning. I expected the girl Asad saw to be Zoya, not someone else. 😉 I liked how you used the element of surprise and the story wasn't totally cliched and cheesy. 👏👏👏

I loved the progressions too, how Asad and Zoya slowly started feeling for each other. 😳 And the necklace-thing/kiss-on-the-cheek was so sweet. 😃

 

All in all, I really enjoyed this!  It was perfect. 😳 Great job! ❤️

 

-Fari. 😳 ❤️

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Never again will I delay a read. 

Never again.

You've touched a few unknown chords in my heart. Unknown for I never knew they existed. I'm very sure I have said something similar to someone else before this, but this, this is different.

Zanu. *No! No more running* 

Tell me. Please. Please, tell me. Will it happen? Can it happen? To us? Are we deserving of this beautiful feeling. Most importantly, are we destined to feel this way? And for such feelings to be reciprocated? Tell me. I need to know.

Why did I wait till today to read this. 

Will our Asad ever come to us?

Mera naam ishq

Tera naam ishq

Mera naam

Tera naam

Mera naam..

Ishq

Yeh lal ishq...

Mummy ne theek farmaya. Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai.

This meethi meethi ehsas...my eyes water with deep emotions...my heavy heart, ever hopeful.

You said cheese. And fluff.

This?

This is the first light at the break of dawn.

This is dew drops...

This is Zoya telling Asad where she keeps the spare keys.

This is reverence.

This is tranquility.

Rahan na main phir apne jaisa

Mera naam ishq

Tera naam ishq

Mera naam

Tera naam

Mera naam

Ishq...

Originally posted by: Zanutix

Aww.
That was really touching, but WUT DAWG, aap toh bohot serious ho gaye?

Did you not find it light hearted? 😕

Man, you're poetic! Wow!

But really, what made you feel so heavy nigga?