Posted: 06 January 2014 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jagrutid
Thread 2 and some fiction to continue the
story. Very happy that you have decided to carry on because this really
is the only thing i read in terms of ff. I really liked the fact that
you wrote a prologue for us. Its a nice point to start reading from.
Aww, thank you:) I am glad that you liked:=)
was lovely to come back to this ff ..however the only thing in my
opinion (maybe preference) that seemed out of place was Khushi
re-marrying. Khushi is definitely entitled to re-marry and be happy,
start a new life,of-course she is but I found it a little odd.
his wife she endured all the pain he inflicted on her and that must
have been because she loved him or longed to be loved? Even if he
didn't. The only time i feel you can put up with so much ..is when you
truly love someone or desire to be loved by that someone. For me it
doesn't quite click.
A girl that stuck to her relationship for so
long ...endured not only emotional but physical torture from her husband
and still was committed enough to do a vrat like karva chauth then
goes on to marry someone else.?
See, Khushi is not married yet, it was a just a news which Arnav heard from someone, and who says that everything you hear is always right. Sometimes there is a reson behind why doing it. In the future, you will get your answers:)
Okay there is a 2 year period in
which things would have changed but my perception of Khushi was a girl
that would have put up with anything to be acquire a little love from
her husband. Is it so easy to get over someone you tried so hard for
maybe even loved at some point and re-marry. ?
Some things have change during these two years and Khushi has got alot stronger when she was before. Which will you notice later too:)
Think what i am
getting at is I hope Khushi isn't really remarrying or has changed her
mind about re-marrying someone else because for me that undermines all
her endurance and devotion during her marriage with ASR.
She might as well have just left him at that first incident when he abused her post something trivial like breaking glass.
my point of view of course..and which ever direction that you
decide to take the story i am sure it will be an amazing read. As a reader I would love to see Khushi returning to her home as Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada and ASR little by little putting right his wrongs. From...reacting appropriately/ understandingly at a mistakenly broken glass to helping her break her fast.. or even something as small as helping her address him as Arnav instead of Mr Raizada. All those little things that Khushi had longed for and suffered in hope of. I just want her to get a taste of the love she once endured so much for.
On the other hand ..if she is scared that severely by him then her looking for love in someone else is justified but I still feel that there is too much devotion in Khushi towards her first relationship for her to re-marry someone else.
I really understand your point and this will happen to them but in small steps, after everything Khushi has been through, it will take her time to heal, even if she has got stronger in these two years
Thank you very much for retuning with another array of i'm sure astounding reads 0 and like i say, no matter where this story goes i will be following it and will enjoy each and every chapter i'm sure.. Jagruti
Aww, thank you for reading and always giving such wonderful long comments, I really enjoyed reading:)