ArHi FF: Silent Whispers Thread 1: Link to Th 2 Pg 1 - Page 7

Congrats on the new ff loved the prologue and the start awesome Khushi is very interesting the hate between mother and daughter is heartbreaking awesome update thanks for the pm.

What a troubled childhood Khushi had. No wonder she turned out like this.

Very intresting i thought this was the intro to the raizadas but turned out to be the guptas...continue soon...

awesome update..

Arey who is Khushi's brother? You didn't mentioned his name anywhere in both the updates. 😳

Archi... 😲 you backwa... 🤗
I so happy to see you... 😃
JuSt read ur story wa.. it's interesting.. 😳
but Khushi is so upset with her mother... why so????? 😕
I m sure Arnavji wil tk the bitterness away from Khushi Hai na????.. 😉

update soon ji.. 😛

Hmmm...i like where this is going.

Welcome Back !!
The Prologue was amazing !!
The fear , the sadness of a teenage boy was aptly felt ..
And moreover the concept of the story seems so strong ! The last line of the prologue , the promise to make the justice right , seemed to contain a vow which is determined and withstanding .
This wrong justice is what frames his coming future . his persona , his mindset , everything! This will forever be imbibed in his personality as a dark , bad past...

Intrigued !

:-)Edited by RainyDays - 10 years ago

Welcome Back !!
The Prologue was amazing !!
The fear , the sadness of a teenage boy was aptly felt ..
And moreover the concept of the story seems so strong ! The last line of the prologue , the promise to make the justice right , seemed to contain a vow which is determined and withstanding .
This wrong justice is what frames his coming future . his persona , his mindset , everything! This will forever be imbibed in his personality as a dark , bad past...

Intrigued !
Merry Christmas!
This was a perfect Christmas present , Santa.. :-)Edited by RainyDays - 10 years ago

Great Update !
After reading the prologue , I kind of expected to siblings to be Arnav and Anjali... I think it was because the character of the brother seemed strong and willed...

Anyways , the dynamics of Khushi's relationship with her mother is undeniably, as Jaya said, like a word which could be defined as more than hate ...
The divorce seems to be affecting the whole family till date... And as expected the brother is a lawyer! But who is he ? Shyam or some new character ..??
The brother is calm and is swayed by emotions ...
Same questions as the ones Jaya had and many more...which me thinks will eventually be cleared with the coming chapters...
Lots to be cleared ... Abhi toh suruwaat hai , aage aage dekhe hota hai kya ...:-)
Bring it on !!

PS: Still incurably intrigued !
PPS : Could I please request for PMs ? ;-)