Ek Veer Ki Ardaas - Veera

A veeba story part 50 (last part) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
Lai yaar rishta pakka v ho raha hai Mainu pata Bhi ni chala... 3-4 part kaise miss kiya Maine ... But thanks for the update ... But it was shocking ke Veera ne shadi ke vaaste haan keh Di ... Jaroor koi plan hoga uska ... Wow ... Plz update soon :)
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I will update on daily basis so keep checking guys. And abhi ul b more shocked
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Ranvi hold veera from her shoulders
Ranvi; ki keh rhi he veera, tu pagal to nhi hogai..tu tu baldev se shadi kregi

veera just nodded in silence

Bansuri: lo ji hamare munde ne to humen das diya pr aapki kudi ne to raaz rkha.

Balwant:Parjaiji chaiji jb veera ki haan he to

Ranvi:nhi tayaji ye pagal hogai he hamrai trf se saaf na he

Veera: veerji...me baldev se hi shadi krungi wrna kisi se nhi aage aapki marzi
she runs away to her room.

Bansuri: oye ranvi tujhe lagta he bataya nhi teri veera ne...ye dono ik dusre se na pyar krte hen to tu kis waste beech me a rha he.

Chaiji; han chote chan shi te keh rhi he bansuri...theek he balwante ye rishta pakka.

Balwant:bht changa chaiji.

Ratan:hum log kal hi roka kr lenge.

Bansuri: changa
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice dear... i like it...
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Part_6
Karan holding veeras hand
Karan:tum esa kese kr skti ho yr tumne to kaha tha k u hate him to ab ye

Veera was quietly listening unable to speak unable to cry.
Suddenly her hand was grasped by a hand very strong and firm she knew that touch at once.Baldev pulled her away from karan and to his side.

Baldev: oye door reh isse

Karan; door to tujhe rehna chahiye meri veera se

Baldev in full anger holding veeras hand in one hand and grasping hold of karans collar with the other
Baldev; oye zaban sambhal apni mujhe bilkul pasand nhi k meri cheezon ko koi apna bole aur veera ki to tu gal hi na kariyo wo to hamesha se meri thi.

he let go of karans collar
Baldev; aur wese bhi sherniyan sheron k saath achi lagti hain geedadon k saath nhi

he turned and went away pulling veera with him

Bfriend1: oye karanjee agar kudi ne aap ko palat k dekha to matlab aap sahi the
Bfriend2; aur na dekhe to smjh jaiyega k wo hamari parjai banne pe bht khush hen

karan stared at her until she was out of site. she didnt turn.

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Posted: 10 years ago
This update was like WOW
I loved Baldev's part
Plzzz continue soon
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wow nice story but hav to say abhi takh suspense toh nahi khula 
thanks for pm😊
waiting for nxt updt
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Nice ... But suspense abhi Bhi bana huya hai ... Why this all is happening :)
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the suspense is just 2 parts away so hv patience and buddy me so i can pm u wen i update
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Part_7
Ranvi was not talking to veera and she wasnt doing efforts to talk to him either, the wedding celebrations had started, but ranvi was not a part of them. To every1's surprise ratan was very happy and was behaving like it was her own daughters wedding.
It was the wedding night every1 was waiting for ranvi to sit with veera for kanyadaan.
ranvi didnt cum nd @ the end ratan had to take his place there too.
He didnt even attend her bidaai.
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Veera was welcomed in her new house warmly and taken to his new room(Baldev's room).
Baldev was about to enter when Gunjan blocked his way.
Gunjan; kitthe chale veerjee pehle menu mera naiq to de do

Baldev:oye gunjan aaj jo mange gi dunga

Gunjan:suchi veerji

Baldev:haan suchi

GUnjan: theek he veerji to phr menu ek vaada do k tusi menu bhi na apni tarah love marriage krne do ge

Baldev: han han qn nhi teri bhi na veera ki tarah love marriage hogi vaada

Gunjan: tussi t great ho veerji

Baldev: chal ab angreji maarna chod aur menu andar jane de

Gunjan:han han qn nhi
she moved to a side. Baldev entered the room and closed the door with an evil smile.