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sweetangel14 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

i just love ur guys fan fiction stories

all of urs....

*Dipti* thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
Thanx Plz continue



Angadzgirl thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

wow... its so good storu..... plz continue...

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TheBlackJaguar thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
It's going great.Continue...ppl.Come on.
Angadzgirl thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

yup plz someone continue...

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JinK thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

And now... This episode will surely change everything!

Angad and Kripa are both sitting next to each other. Prithvi is sitting way in back. Angad is looking out of the window.

Angad: In badalon ko dekho. Yeh to jab neeche se dekho, to kitne duur aur kitne masboot dikhte hain. Lekin ab jab hum inke beech se guzar rahein hai, to unki masbooti bhi nahin rahi aur inka duur hona bhi mitgaya.

Kripa: Angad, duniya mein aisi bahut saari cheesein hoti hai. Jab tum apne duniya ko dekhne ka nazariya badloge, to tumhare aas paas saari cheesein badalne lage gi.

Angad turns around and looks at Kripa.

Angad: Lekin kuch cheese aisi bhi hoti hai, ke buri hoti hai, or buri hi rahengi. Chahe woh apka khud ka parivaar hi kyun na ho.

And Angad starts to get a bit angry.

Kripa: Angad, dekho. Tum bas apne parivaar ki wajahh se apne aap ko chott kyun...

The aeroplane goes for landing. Kripa unfastens her seatbelt as it lands and stands up, as the other people do so as well. Kripa slips on the floor and Angad makes her stand up straight.

Angad: Tumne mujhe sambhala, Kripa. Ab meri baari hai.

Then Prithvi also comes up. All three of them go outside. Prithvi brings Angad his red car... Angad looks at it and wonders how Prithvi had it.

Prithvi: Angad, jab tum gayab ho gaye, to phir tumhari family ne tumhari saari cheezein auction pe lagadi. Tumhari car - usse main jane nahi de sakta tha. Isiliye maine kharid li.

Then Angad looks at Prithvi in a weird way, as though feeling guilty. Then Angad takes the wheel and they all drive off.

Prithvi: Angad, mujhe ek kaam hai. Bas 2 minute lagenge. Tum dono bhi andar aa jao.

Angad hesitates, but Kripa nods. They all get out of the car and go into the Bose house. Prithvi goes to his room and Angad and Kripa wait. Suddenly, Mishti comes down the stairs. She is amazed to see Angad and runs to him.

Mishti: Angad, tum - tum wapis aa gaye - mujhe pata hai, ke tum mere liye hi aaye ho na?

She hugs Angad. Kripa looks at Angad.

Angad: Main aur Kripa yahan bas thodi dayr ke liye aaye hain.

Mishti: Lekin...

Angad (strong voice): Thodi dayr, Mishti.

Mishti: Fine. See you later, Angad!

And she goes off after saying a short bye to Kripa. Prithvi comes back.

Prithvi: Mera kaam ho gaya. Chale?

And they go back into the car.

Angad: Let's go bowling. Bahut miss kiya hai bowling alley ko.

Kripa: Bowling?

Prithvi: Chalo, Angad.

And they all go to the bowling alley. It is lit with a fluorescent blue and purple flashing light. At the counter, there is a guy serving drinks. Angad, Kripa and Prithvi go to buy drinks.

Angad: Kripa, tumhe kya chahiye?

Kripa: Um... Oreo milkshake!

Angad: Aur tum, Prithvi?

Prithvi: Coke.

Angad orders one capuccino, one Oreo milkshake and one Coke. After they take their drinks they go to a table. Angad gets tickets for bowling for all of them. While Angad is rolling strike after strike, Prithvi is helping Kripa learn how to bowl, with his arm around her, holding her arm in place. Angad looks back after getting another spare and sees Kripa and Prithvi. He goes to them and asks what's going on.

Prithvi: Angad, main to bas...

Kripa: Angad, ye mujhe sikha raha tha.

Angad: How dare you.

Kripa and Prithvi are both shocked.

Angad: Tum the great Angad ko dekhne ke jaga, practise kar rahe ho? This is not fair. Aur ab meri aakhri turn hai. Ab to dekhlo.

Angad rolls the ball with great power. It hits right in the middle - and two pins are left. One is right in the front, on the far left, and the other on the back, far right. Kripa and Prithvi are both thinking how Angad will manage. But Angad smiles and rolls the ball with such power that the entire floor shakes - and due to the shaking the pins fall down!

Prithvi: Kripa, ab tumhari baari.

Kripa: Lekin Prithvi, tum...

Prithvi: Kripa, mujhe ghar jaana hai. Please, kal milte hai. OK?

Kripa: OK, bye.

Prithvi goes.

Kripa rolls her first ball - a gutter ball. Then she rolls another one - a strike!

After bowling, Angad and Kripa go into the car.

Kripa: Ab Dadi ke paas chalte hain.

Angad: Ab to main Khanna mansion mein hi rahoonga. Dekhlena, Kripa.

Kripa looks on, shocked, as Angad continues to drive.

Kripa: Lekin Angad, vahan to mandir ka rasta hai. Khanna Mansion to doosri taraf hai.

Angad doesn't say anything, just continues to drive.

KHANNA MANSION

Dilip, Naina, Kartik and Anitaah are sitting on the sofas in the room, talking about some boring business topic. Then Angad pushes open the doors and walks in.

Everybody is shocked and stand up. They all stare at Angad. Then they get even more shocked. Because from behind Angad, Kripa comes out, and that too having sindoor in her maang and a mangalsutra in her neck!

Plz reply!

TheBlackJaguar thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

VA-VA------VROOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Naina faints with shock.Loved Angad's reaction to Mishty and Prithvi is wonderful......Mishty should learn  a thing or two about selflessness from her brother.

Waiting for the next scene.

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Angadzgirl thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

wow...Awesome.... plz contiune....

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Nasha thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

smashin.... pls continue... tho i wud have preferred if naina had DIED in shock instead of fainting... PLZ continue... I AM HOOKED!!!!!!