FF: ~Crashed~ This is my First: Preview of Chp 26 Pg 76 - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

601

Views

63170

Users

25

Likes

1300

Frequent Posters

NaijaLuv88 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter One

(Three weeks later...)

 "How could this have happened Zor? This makes no sense, she called, he called saying they were alright and then...and now..."  she stopped in frustration and she gripped the pallu of her saree in frustration.

"Amrit," Zor said resting his hands on her shoulder.

Everyone was gathered outside Shraddha's room in the hallway, anxiously trying to hear any news about what was going on.

Everyone rushed immediately when they heard about Shraddha, Kunal, and Dhruv being involved in an accident three weeks ago.

People called in after reporting a black Mercedes SUV being overturned on a highway back into the city and it took a while before emergency can reach there on time.

"See what did I tell you mami ji, if you accepted this marriage this is what happens," Jaya said quietly to Kamini.

Kamini was still paralyzed from shock when she came to find out about what happened to Kunal.

 "See Kamini, see your son that you gave to Shraddha, you have lost it rightly due to her. I wouldn't be shocked if she planned all of this," Jaya sneered.

Kamini looked at Jaya with a deep look and didn't say anything, which encouraged Jaya to rave some more.

"Shraddha is something isn't she? Her first husband divorces her and now her second is dead, I wonder what will happen to the third..."

"That's enough!" Kamini said.

Jaya was startled and she slightly rebounded.

"What's wrong mami ji?" Jaya asked.

"It's you," Kamini said turning a sharp gaze at her.

"What did I do?" Jaya said at a lost.

"Your mouth, it's annoying, shut up," Kamini said and she walked away from a speechless Jaya.

"What's her problem, I was just trying to tell her the truth, it's not like she wasn't thinking it all along," Jaya said pouting before she walked over to join Ashish.

"Papa ji!" Kittu raced in the waiting room.

All eyes turned to her as well as Anand who trailed behind his wife.

"Kittu what's wrong," Amrit said with an edge of hesitation in her voice.

"Calm down Amrit, Kittu, what's wrong?" Zor said.

Kittu and Anand glanced at one another, Kittu face looked forlorn for a moment before she forced a smile on her lips.

"It's Shraddha, she is awake."

****************************

Edited by najialuv88 - 10 years ago
-Red-Rose- thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Ohooo..so the suspense is still not out!!πŸ˜‰
Really interesting!!😊nice update!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
beautifully written!❀️
Great going dear..keep it up!!⭐️⭐️
wuFi thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
nicee updt!! πŸ‘πŸΌ

it getting interesting 😊
nd diz Jaya ..sm1 plz make her big mouth shut 🀒

updt soon n if possible to abki thoda lamba wala updt πŸ˜› 😊
Edited by wuFi - 10 years ago
Serena.V thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Omg plz plz update fast i hate cliffhanger ur story is awesome
NaijaLuv88 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Serena.V

Omg plz plz update fast i hate cliffhanger ur story is awesome


LOLπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Thank youπŸ˜›πŸ˜‰ will try to update ASAPπŸ˜‰
NaijaLuv88 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Red-Rose-

Ohooo..so the suspense is still not out!!πŸ˜‰

Really interesting!!😊nice update!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
beautifully written!❀️
Great going dear..keep it up!!⭐️⭐️


nope it won't be out...probably until next chapter...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Thank youπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜›πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜›

Awww...thank you😳😳

Thanks...definitely will!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
NaijaLuv88 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: wuFi

nicee updt!! πŸ‘πŸΌ

it getting interesting 😊
nd diz Jaya ..sm1 plz make her big mouth shut 🀒

updt soon n if possible to abki thoda lamba wala updt πŸ˜› 😊


Thank you...and it will and next chapter will be a lot longer than this one...didn't know i made chapter one so shortπŸ˜•πŸ˜•

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Jaya should shut up but she will be quiet...for now...πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”

Yep, yep everything will unfold in the next chapter, thanks for reading and hope you enjoyπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜ƒ
Stark_Wolf thumbnail
Anniversary 14 Thumbnail Group Promotion 6 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
awee u updated :-D the mystry is still unsolved..
so shr is alive :-)where is dhru nd kunal dead im sure there is some twist u wont kill of our hottie jus like that will u?
continue soon nd nxt time with a longer chap<3
adithyan thumbnail
Anniversary 11 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
nice update...u r building up the tension..uff...
kunal is dead😲...no..its only jaya's mouth😑
NaijaLuv88 thumbnail
Anniversary 10 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Lumzz

awee u updated :-D the mystry is still unsolved..
so shr is alive :-)where is dhru nd kunal dead im sure there is some twist u wont kill of our hottie jus like that will u?
continue soon nd nxt time with a longer chap<3


i have something in store...it might take a while for it to be clear but they will be happy and safe and all together as a family...well...unless...😈😈😈😈😈😈😈