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Hot_Chocolate IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 4:59am | IP Logged
New thread already?
Congrats Big smile

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arshirupa IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 5:13am | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved it

Edited by arshirupa - 21 November 2013 at 6:19am

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beenish248 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 5:42am | IP Logged

this concept is so new yarr i loved it to the core ..

waiting for 2nd part

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Uzii Goldie

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Very nice really u r a very talented writer I must say wow wat a story really maaa a geya.plz update part2 soon.

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celinawalter Goldie

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 5:45am | IP Logged

what an dhamakedar update!!!StarClapStarClap
loved it and i am amazed too, yet again!

how do you do this? i mean, with the inclusion of Institute of Edinburgh and Parapsychology unit, u have taken this to another level and i must say, it was the masterstroke. i mean actually bring reality to this alternate universe is something i wasn't expecting of, and hats off for the striking thought.

i loved the ay u described Arnav from the heartbroken and a man in despair to a man with purpose of  saving his Love, his Khushi.
also i loved the convo and the promise and solace they found in each others arms.

i remember a story i used to love hearing as a kid. it was that the life of a demon was captured inside a parrot and u have to kill the parrot to kill that demon.

i find the case with Khushi a quite similar one albeit in reverse order. the painting when tried to be destroyed by Garima & Saint, burnt had to be born by Khushi.
what i want to Know though is why only Arnav & Garima were the only people to witness Khushi entering into the painting? is it because only those person could see her because she have loved them and they have overwhelmed her with joy?Confused

what is the 4th line of the curse? though i don't want this epic tale to end anytime soon, but i am just itching to know the how curse will be lifted.Tongue
i loved the ending and the kissEmbarrassed
could we expect some seduction and passion in next update?Blushing

Edited by celinawalter - 20 November 2013 at 11:04am

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Raila1014 Goldie

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Juhi, this is so beautiful, it is turning into an epic love story where he will not rest till he find his quest to cure his princess and bring her back to life.  This is exactly what he needed, the will to fight and to do everything he can and not accept the inevitable as he keeps blaming himself for not doing anything in Akash's case.  His determination will be the strength that she needs to be hopeful.  I like her train of thoughts at the end about being with him till he won't need her anymore because that will only happen when the last breath leaves his body.  That is how much he is in it.  You go Arnav, I love the change from the vulnerable man to this man possessed with the will and strength to fight for his love.  Quite a transformation but then love give you these powers that you don't think you have.  Can't wait for part 2 and I am going to be late for work but could not stop reading.  Hope you get some sleep.
Back from the grind and just read part 2.  So Payal had no witch power or a black tongue that can make lasting curse?  Just her deep hatred for her cousin turned this into a powerful and long lasting curse?  I wondered if she can see the outside world when she is in the painting but I think you mentioned that she physically go back to that time and freeze.  Is this why she is disoriented when she is back?  I think there must be more from that curse that was uttered by a jealous person who has lost everything.    How to get to the bottom of that?  His methodical brain needs to come in play . . . He does not want her to go back in the painting so he is pushing her away.  This is such a great concept that it makes one think and want to come up with a cure for them . . .

Edited by Raila1014 - 20 November 2013 at 4:26pm

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kclovearshi IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 5:55am | IP Logged


Arnav is devastated after he saw what he saw..!! And the worst thing is he could not explain this to any one let alone Lavanya or NK and not knowing when she is coming back Confused

So the thing he found is her anklet..I guess it gave him some determination to do something about the curse, how to break it Wink I loved his resolve to do something about it instead of wallowing in grief.

And his Promise to her when she comes back again, reassuring and endearing for Khushi. She is on crossroads, on the one hand she knows the curse is too powerful to break and the other she is cherishing the feeling of having some one fight for her Smile

It was disheartening to know that the painting can't be destroyed without harmig Khushi Ouch And the fact that she has go to the painting when she feels joy, her namesake Confused

Juhi, I was wondering if you got the inspiraton from JK Rowling's HP series. Was watching HP & DH part2 yesterday. the scene where Harry comes to Hogsmeade and asks access to the Castle to Dumbledore Jr.. he then tells the painting to what to do, Ariana his sister smiles and walks away, brings back Neville -  all this reminded me of Khushi in Seduction Wink


(ps:very very sorry for the late unres)

Edited by kclovearshi - 01 December 2013 at 5:05pm

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Hawa1997 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 5:56am | IP Logged

OMG, what a chapter this was!!

You have left really speechless!!  I have heard of this kind of paranormal activities and they do exist! Now this story just seems so true, who knows there might someone out there in this situation...

Loved how he waited for her to come out. But also realized that he needs to break this curse.. 
I happy that he wants to stay by her and figure this out.. He has done so much research to find out the solution... Khushi now knows that she doesn't have to fight this by herself and just wants to enjoy this time with Arnav..
I really hope that Arnav finds a solution for this. Now she wants to spend the night with him, will love break the curse?? 

Juhi, this is just remarkable! Your really a genius writer and to come up with this!! Clap

Thanks for the pm..

Waiting to know what Arnav reaction is and what happens when she spends the night...

Edited by Hawa1997 - 21 November 2013 at 6:46am

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