***IsHq ViShK***(updated pg.36) - Page 2

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

heyy, i am the first one to reply
anywayz, i wud like to say that this ff is going really gr8 so far...
continue it soon...
can't wait2 read the next part

thxxx....we'll continue very very soon😃..hehe😆

Originally posted by: Indian101

it was really good. poor sandeep plz cont sooon

thxxx....ya i kno poor sandeep but sun worry pooja will be with him soon😉...

***IsHq ViShK mein aab tak apne paara:
B: ohh..

P: eww bubbly what happened to your clothes??

B: some dumb idiotic boy made me fall in the mud...

K: who you calling boy??

College has finsihed Pooja heads home with Rahul and Kripa and Bubbly head home with Sandeep.

At Kapoor House:

Bubbly, Kripa and Sandeep enter the house. Their dad Sukhman and Mom Maya are sitting there.

M: finaaly your all home..hurry get dressed you guys are going out.

S: going out?? where??

P: To mansukh's house.

K: Whattt???nooooo

B: whyyy he's such a scary mannn!!

S: how come you guys aren't coming??

P: we have to attend another party..

M: ok no more questions hurry and get dressed..

The kids go up to get ready.They get ready and come down.

S: ok lets go.

They reach the mehra house. Mansukh is standing at the door.As soon as he see's the three his eyes widen.

M: Namaste...mom dad nahee aye??

s: no woh busy the..

M: oh ok...chalo andar aoo...

They all go inside...Pooja see's them.

P: Kripa!! bubbly!! Sandeep??wut r u guys doing here??

S: poojaaa!! hiii...umm we were invited here...(he starts blushing again)

B: yeah..You were invited too pooja??

P: no sillyy!! i live here!!.hehe..

K: whatt??? your Mansukh;s daughterr??!!??!!

P: hehe..yeah you didnt know that?

B: oh my god..no..hehe..your dads soo-

K: niceee....

B: i was going to say he;s so-

S: (pushes bubbly)awesome...

B: uff you guys are impossible.im going to get some food..

Bubbly walks away..

s: soory about bubbly she can be a bit weird sometimes..

P: hehe..its ok shes just a little girl.

K: hahaa..shes a brat!! spoiled ltlle booger.. 🤢 😆

P: hehe aww dont worry once she grows up a bit more she'll understand..

Mansukh walks over..

M: aap sab batein karte rahogge ya kuch khaoo ge bhi??

P: yeah papa hum kane ja rahen hain..

they all go and get some food to eat..

Bubbly is walking around when kaboom she bumps into someone...

B: ahhh mi hairr...

R: ahh mi suitt!!

B: you care about your suit?!?!? what about my hair!!

bubbly looks up at the guys face...

both at the same time: Youu!!

R: your always bumping into people..are you really blind??

B: noo! your the one who bumped into me!!

R: nowayy you bumped into me!

Pooja sees them fighting and goes upto them..

P: why are you guys fighting??

B: this dumb guy bumped into me!!

P: Rahul?? what did you do??

R: nothing she bumped into me!!

B: pooja you kow him??

P: well yeah hes my brother..

B: whatt..first you tell us mansukhs your dad now hes your brother!!

P: hehe..yeah...

R: your a weird girl!

B: your weird!

P: okay guys stop fighting lets go eat...

they go and eat with sandeep and kripa.

Edited by ***HumTum*** - 17 years ago

nice part!!!!the story sounds interesting 😊

great parts continue soon! 😃 😛 👏

bubbly and rahul, huh? 😉 really cute parts. pl cont soon Edited by Indian101 - 17 years ago

this ff is so funnny n i luv teh way kripa n bubbly fight n i never imagined kripa like that n when is angad's entry? n kripa's parents r so lazy they r so different lol
continue soon

Originally posted by: bhumishah

this ff is so funnny n i luv teh way kripa n bubbly fight n i never imagined kripa like that n when is angad's entry? n kripa's parents r so lazy they r so different lol
continue soon

lol..thxx..we not gonna have any drama in it...its just gonna be a fun fan fic😃...dun worry angad will enter soon😃...

Originally posted by: ***HumTum***

lol..thxx..we not gonna have any drama in it...its just gonna be a fun fan fic😃...dun worry angad will enter soon😃...

i wonder how angads going to make his entry 😉 better be gud. 😛

Ishq Vishk mein abh tak aapne dekha...

R: your a weird girl!

B: your weird!

P: okay guys stop fighting lets go eat...

they go and eat with sandeep and kripa.

*~*PART 4*~*

The party is going on beautifully..Mansukh is really happy (the party was thrown because Mansukh and sukhman had a business deal together but sukhman and maya couldnt make it because of other plans..so they sent their kids)

M: listen up everybody...im going to sing...

P: oh my lord krishnaa!!! hes gunna singgg 😲

M: tunuk tunuk tun tunuk tunuk tun tunuk tunuk tun ta ra ra(daler mahendi song..hehe) sade nal oye hoye sade nal oye hoyee!!...

pooja is embarresedd!!!..

P: oh my lord krishna..i cant believe him!!!

B: 😆 😆 😆 this is so funny i think im gunna pee in my pants.... 😆 😆 😆

K: eww you nastyy...get a life

B: shut up i have one

K: no you dont your a stupid coww..

B: shut your fattytastic mouth!!

K: no you little son of a-

B: son of a wut huhhh????

S: stop it u guys this is not your house!!!have some shame...

B: she started it!!

K: no i didnt u diddd!!

B: oh yehhh

K: yehh

S: girlss!!! stopp!!!

they stop fighting...they look over and see pooja trying to make mansukh stop singing..Pooja gives up and heads over too sandeep and kripa and bubbly...

P: hes not gunna stop...oh well...hey u girls come upstairs ill show you my room...

K: wut bout sandeep??

P: he can talk to rahul..heyy Rahulll!! come here..

Rahul comes over..

P: take sandeep with u..

R: ok hi sandeep wanna get a drink??

S: okay sure..

they go..the three girls go upstairs..the enter poojas room...

B: woww nice room poojaa!!

P: thanks...umm i have to tell you guys something..

K: yeh sure go ahead..

P: well my boyfriend ronit is free rite now and thats raree...i wanna go meet him but dont know wut to tell bapuji...

B: thts easy..juss tell him you have to run to the library to get sum books...

P: wut??

K: yeh and you could meet up with him..

P: great idea...ok lets go tell him...

they go down to mansukh and telll him..

P: bapujiii....i have to run to the library

M: kyonn??

P: i need to get some books..if i dont get them now ill never get them..then ill faill oh my lord krishnaaa helpp mee!!

M: oh mi lord krishnaa!! go noww hurry take these young ladies with you..now go now!!

pooja takes kripa and bubbly with her...

B: hey can i call sagar there too??

K: yeh and angad?

P: sure go ahead...

they all meet up at cafe le blanc....

Ronit is sitting wearing a silky blue shirt..with cream coloured pants..he has nice length cut black haair..he picks up the coffee mug and takes a little sip of his warm coffee...

Angad is coming out of the mens bathroom...he is wearing blue jeans and a black top...he waves his hand through his hair and takes a seat beside Ronit...

Sagar is just entering the coffee shop..he is wearing black jeans and a white top...he waves to someone in the coffee shop and sits beside angad.

the threee girls enter.

P: oh mi lord krishnaa! ronittt!!

R: poojaa..its been soo long..like a week!!

P: i knoww your always so busy with your work

R: yeh im sorry so howd you guys get out of the party??

K: easy we lied!!

A: omgg you guys lied??

B: yeh it was simple mansukh fell for it...

K: mansukh unclee bubblyy!!!

B: oh wut do u kno fatyy 😆

S: and he let you all go??

P: yehh duhh thats why we're here

R: well sit down guys ill order you all sum coffee...

they order coffee and chat away...

the three girls look at the time they see that its almost 9:30...pooja says she better go before her bapuji gets suspicious...so the three girls head to pooja's house...

M: pooja...books mili??

P:(realizes she has no books).oh um...b..bb..books??

M: haan books??..mili kya??

P: umm..wohhh..umm...

K: car main hai...

B: yeh pooja go get them...

P: yeh umm i will...

pooja is nervous she has no books..

M: well go get themm!!

P: actually bapuji..umm the books-

S: i have them...

pooja turns around to see sandeep..

P: sandeep?!?!?!

S: you left them on top of the car remember?so i brought them inside for you...

P: (confused at first but then plays along..) oh yeahh oopz..thanks for bringin them inside...

Mansukh smiles and walks away...

P: oh mi lord krishna...thankuuu soo muchhh sandeepppp!!!

S: no problem anytime(starts blushing)

B: but how did you know..u stalker?..hehe

S: very funny..i heard you guys talking to mansukh uncle..so i figured-

K: wow smart boy!!

S: oh thanks..hehe

P: thankuu so much sandeepp...how can i ever repay you...

s: dont worry about it!!

they enjoy the party...

Rahul walks up to bubbly...

R: say sorryy

B:whyy??

R: cuz u bumped into me..

B: noo..u bumped into meee!!!

R: not evenn!!

B: why r u here? juss go awayy

R: no i want an apologyy

B: well u aint gettin one!!!

R: yess i amm!!

B: god u kno ur annoyingg!!

R: yeah i kno(starts grinning)

B: eww stop grinning!!

R: no..now that u sed stop ill do it even moree..(grins much wider)

B: ughh godd please help himm!!!

R: u kno u luv me(starts smirking)

B: in your dreamsss....buh byeee

bubbly walks away...

s:ok mansukh uncle i think its tyme we leave now..

M: teek hai...byee

K: bye uncle

B: bye mans-

K: bubblyy

B: i mean uncle(smiles widely)

M:byeee

they leave for home..

Edited by ***HumTum*** - 17 years ago