FF: All the Right Moves - Chapter 14, page 129 - COMPLETE - Page 3

wow..dat was simply amazing

Omg Paly!!!

Please continue and PM!

I'm dying to read the next part!

OMGGG...I started freaking out when i saw the PM. It was like having a sugar rush without the sugar. :D I loved this chapter and i loved how annoyed Asad was and his reactions when ever Zoya tried to get closer to Rohan. I died reading the first part when they were trying to figure out where Rohan would stay. So funny. And i can't wait to read the next chapter. Edited by lover1998 - 10 years ago

awesome update!!

Omg yay you're back 😳 Fantastic story as usual ! x

an amazing start to another one of ur awesome stories! you are officially my favorite author in the world! I know I probably already told u that a bazillion times but everytime I read ur stories, I love more and more 😃 it looks like a fantastic story already and please update the next part soon! I can't wait to see more of a possessive Asad and what Rohan's secret is going to be.

Hey ...

YAY! New story!!!   Edited by Drea_QH1fan - 10 years ago

OMG YAY! 🥳 New story! I'm SO HAPPY to start reading a new FF of yours'! I missed your writing very much!

YAY I MISSED YOUR WRITING SO MUCH! So excited WOHOO! Beautiful beginning! All the Asad and zoya nhok-jhoks were absolutely beautiful and hilarious haha. Their close proximity, retorts, and Asad's jealousy- oh my! I can't wait to see more of it hehee. And Najma and Zoya fangurl if is absolutely adorable. Looks like Rohan and Zoya are pretty similar eh? He seems scared of Asad- noticing his protectiveness over Zoya. However, I feel he's gonna try to get closer to Zoya :0 Which Zoya may not mind at all but here comes trouble! And the little introduction of his bad behavior in the past may have a repeat? Eh, let's see! (: