TR ss part 12-page 13 shifted to d3 forum

 idk why im doing this- i dont read FF/ss/os esp when the serial is on bcoz the essence of the characters get diluted at times and expectations become high but im officially going mad without Taani in d3 and all kinds of ideas keep cropping up. so im writing and hope someone reads it...
index below part 1

its a continuation from where tani left

part 1

"pata nahin kahaan rakdiya" taani s busy searching for something in her cupboard, throwing all stuff here and there in her clumsy style.
"ab main kya..." moving towards a bag kept aside,"ismain hoga kya?" and searches in there. with a frustrated look , puts the bag ulta and shakes it .something fell out.

still with a frustrated look, taani bent down to pick it and as her hand lifted it, she stopped. something inside her chest constricted and she picked up the objct- the chain- which rey had gifted her for their only ever valentine. she dropped the bag and handling the chain with care  sat on the bed.
.afast glimpse of rey in his white shirt when he had given ...no put the chain on her neck appeared, she felt a tingling sensation on the back of her neck and  involuntarily rubbed it.
all energy gone,  lost suddenly- lost in the few moments that her eyes had fallen on the chain now clutched in her hand..

" main kab sudhroongi? itni si tho baat hain- ek chain hain bas. utho taani . baithe rehne se class miss hojaayega. waapas aake dhoondlena pen ko , aaj exam tho hain nahin ki aaj hi lucky pen chahiye "
shaking her head ,she got up from the bed and picked up her bag, adjusted her hair in front of the mirror and walked out of her room not realising she still had the chain in her hand clutched tightly.
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in St Louis, the whole AK track playing out... after swayam/rey fight...rey in his house after the launch when he apologises to the gang but SS are not with him.
reys house

"great rey . kal tak poora gang sath nahin tha..atleast ab sab hain"walking up and down  in disturbed rey style," agar sharon/swayam bhi mujhe forgive kardete tho itna lonely feeling nahin aata. i ahve to get them back with each other and with me. meri wajah se hi unke beech mein itne saare problems aagaye. dont know kyun main itna blindly us AK ko trust karne laga...main itna tho stupid nahin hoon...god knows kya sochke...ok now stop rey..apne aap ko blame karne se achha yeh hoga ki tum socho SS ko kaise manaaoge." looking up at the ceiling," krishnaji help kardena please" and stopped his walk, recognising what he just said.
a fast glimpse of taani in her initial avatar flashed before his eyes and an involuntary sad smile appeared
" ab aapki taani mere saath nahin hain (looking at ceiling still) aapko hi mujhe help karna padega. .agar wo hoti tho..." and stopped his walking aimlessly around .he suddenly realised why he was in such a stress, why he was in a hurry, why he felt lost even as his friends got back to him..." maybe swayam ne jaisa kahaan wo waise hi react karthi ...nahin rey usne tho hamesha  tumhara saath diya hain...I  wish main jaansaktha ki woh kaisi hain" shaking his head again,"  nahin rey focus..us mistake ko tho tu sudhar nahin saktha. ab Swayam/ sharon aur dance  par focus karna hain bas"
 
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part 1- page 1
part 2-page 2
part 3-page 3
part4- page 5
part 5- page 6
part 6-page 7
part 7- page 8
part 8- page 9
part 9- page 10
part10-page 11
part 11- page 12
part 12- page 13

SHIFTED TO THIS POST from part 13 onwardss
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3898658
Edited by prtn - 10 years ago

Amazing start
plz continue soon

Nice start...
Plz continue

Superb start😛Edited by monikasaxena05 - 10 years ago

Nice start!!
Continue Soon :)

awesome start
conti... soon

Awesome
Plzzz update soon... 😊

nyc strt dear :)

It's amazing loved it plzz update soon

part 2

reys world- just as in the show,  that resort nonsense and back...patched up with swayam/sharon. SS havent patched up.
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(imagine taani s place like in suvreen guggal with the violet wall of her room in swayams house- i loved that)
Taani asleep curled up on the sofa with a book in her hand and the lights on.mobile ringing constantly.stop. pause. ringing starts again.

taani got up with a jerk and looked around aimlessly, realised that it was the mobile ringing and picked it up from the side table- tauji

"hello tauji"
"kya baat hain taani, kahaan thi? itne dher.."
"sorry sorry tauji. wo main so gayi thi."
"itni jaldi? "
"pata nahin kab sogayi"
"its okay beta"
"kya okay tauji, mera assignments sab baaki hain aur main ek kaam bhi time pe nahin kiya hain . aisa hi chaltha rahaan tho mera exams gaya..pata nahin tha ki itna studies karni padegi MBA main "
laugh" hojaayega. mujhe apni bachhi par 100% confidence hain"
smile and laugh taani ...tauji continued," dinner kiya?"
"nahin abhi karna hain.  waise ghar main sab kaise hain?"
" sab teek hain.  tum aarahin ho na next week XYZ  ki shaadi main?"
"haan tauji"
"good. swayam bhi aarahaan hain"
"kya? bhai aarahe hain? itne saalon ke baad ghar ki shaadi main? " surprised and happy taani at the change in her tauji s and swayams relations
laugh tauji," haan. tumhaari baat hui usse?"
smile on taani s face faltered," nahin"
catching the change in tone of her voice," achha? kyun? " frown on tauji s face," taani ek phone main kitna time lagtha hain? yeh swayam ..."
"nahin nahin tauji. bhai ne hi phone kiya tha. maine unko call back nahin kiya bas"
"kyun?"
"wo...main busy thi." silence
'taani tumhaara aur swayam ka kuch fight hain kya?"
"nahin tauji. sab teek hain aapko worry karne ki koi reason nahin hain. mere liye bhi new place hain aur bhai .. wo bhi busy honge - college ka kaam, d3 team ka captain bhi hain aur sha...matlab studies bhi karni hogi. sab teek hi hain"
"sure?"
"haan" she said ina forced voice
"chalo then, see you next week. aur jab aaogi tho tumhaare saare old friends ko bhi milsakhogi. main swayam ki team ko bhi invite bheja hain. good night."
"good night" taani replied mechanically.-
the whole team really?
 so she will meet everyone , EVERYONE next week . she felt a spurt of joy suddenly at the thought. would EVERYONE come ?
"matlab tauji ne invite kiya hain  tho zaroori nahin ki SAB aajaaye. itni door hain mumbai se aur classes bunk karke kyun jaayenge. bhai se poochoon ki WO aarahe hain ya ..?  " she shook her head forcibly ," main kya soch rahin hoon? bhai se? jab se yahaan shift hui hoon tab se unke saath baat nahin ki... aur phir mujhe itna farak kyun padrahaan hain itni si baat ka. hey krishnaji, dekho aap muhe phir se kisi bhi tarah ki confusion main mat daalon. mujhe aage badna hain" she told her krishnaji in frustration," aur agar main ," she got up, walked to the small kitchen and took out her dinner plate talking continuously," aur agar main itni si baat se, matlab pata bhi nahin ki tauji ne kisko invitation  bheja aur kyun and koi aayega bhi ya nahin- wo log tho XYZ cousin ko nahin jaanthe , tho kyun aayenge? aur main," dumping the plate on the table and sitting on the chair," aur main yahaan itni khush aur excited feel kar rahin hoon sirf yeh soch kar ki SHAYAD ..."she stopped and closed her eyes in frustration," mujhe itni small baath itna affect karrahin hain ,  agar main unko phir se miloongi tho...rey, main aapko itna miss kyun karti hoon? "

staring at the plate , she continued," nahin rey. main phir se weak nahin bansakthi. mujhe bas apne studies par concentrate karna hain and uskeliye mujhe aapse door hi rehna better hain" , and the excitement which had involuntarily appeared at the thought of probably meeting rey again vanished.
she started eating fast as if the food would push thoughts of rey away.
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as we have no family info of anyone, assume its some xyz cousins wedding that tauji was talking about...thanks for reading
missing taani

Edited by prtn - 10 years ago