AnKi SS :Pyaar ki Rahe PART:3 (Page No:4) 23/12

Hello every1 im sanjana...1st time im going to write SS
Story of my SS wil revolve around KITTU..Pain,love everything which comes in Her life

1st time im writing SS so i need ur support guys..story wil be diff from MB track

Plz read and commentEdited by .SanVi. - 10 years ago

Part:1

Shergill Mension:
Evening 7 PM
Everyone is busy in preparation of Diwali(As next day diwali is there) No one noticed that kittu was not there

Amrit:Uff zor ye aap kya kar rahe hai?Safai karni hai kaam badhana nahi hai ..Jayiye jake kamre me TV dekhiye
(Zor holds her hand and dramatically says)

Zor:Madam ji bhuliye mat ye sab mere bahe hath ka khel hai(making weired face)
Amrit smiles and continue her work

Ishan come and stand in front of amrit
Ishan:Mom kounsi liting acchi lagegi(he is lots of diff. Color of lites to Amrit) jara batatiye na

Amrit:Kya hai ye? Tum sab ek din mujhe pagal kar doge jake Kittu se pucho o batayegi
When ishan turn to search kittu amrit stop her

Amrit:(looking towards ishan)she pick yellow bunch of liting ye lo ye lago lo us bichari ko maat pareshan kar

In living area Jaya and ashish were busy in making guest list

Jaya:Kyu na hum koi celebrity bulaye..?kyu shraddha di aapka kya khayal hai
Shraddha is busy in kitchen..she loudly said jake kittu ko pucho jaya
Shraddha:Vaise bhi chota sa get together hai badi party nai hai jaya so ye sab na karo

Jaya making her face kittu bhabhi jara yaha aana..but no reply so she get busy in her work

Dhruv is running here and there with crackers

Anand:Dhruv kittu ke jaisi jid na karo ye hum kal jalayenge aaj isse mamma ke pass dedo

Dhruv:Par mama
Bfore he speak shraddha speak in between

Shra:Dhruv bhai thik keh rahe hai de do o crackers

Dhruv makes sad face

Zor:Oh dekho champion ka chehra kitna sad ho gaya baccha
Picking dhruv in his arm zor continue

Zor:Chalo hum sab milke aaj crackers jalate hai log kal jalayenge lekin hum special hai to aaj hi jalate hai kittu beta jara machbox leke aana
He again said kittu beta but no reply
Lil bit loudly he call her but no reply
everyone looked at each other but nobody find her around

Amrit:anand ye kittu kaha rah gai?

Anand:(Coldly) hogi apne kamre me wait me dekhta hu

Shraddha-Bhai aap rukiye me jati hu
Shraddha knock on kittu's door but the door is open she enter in room
Shra:Kittu sab bula rahe hai niche aa jao
But again no reply
She check whole room but kittu is not in her room

Shraddha tell every1 that kittu is not in her room
Every1 started searching her in house but she is no were in the house
Anand dialled her no but no answer

Amrit said sayada mayke gai hogi
Anand dialled kamini ji's no but kittu waha bhi nai thi

Zor:hume police ke pass jana chahiye
Every1 agree and zor amrit anand move towards police station

On other side
Some1 is sitting in lonely garden holding pics in her hand..she is crying from last 1 hour..her eyes were swollen..she is broken hearted..her kajal is spreding so it looks like black tears

In between her cry she is looking towards sky and asking kyu kiya aisa aapne kyu kiya..kyu kia apne kittu ke sath aisa? Aakhir kyu
(yes she is kittu)

What happend with her? Why she is crying
Everything i wil tell in next part if u guys wants then only

Plz press like and comment

Wow nice FF Sanju..kittu ke rone ka suspense khulega agle episode mein..dekhna na bhuliye PYAAR KI RAAHE..sirf meri bhabhi forum par! Rishta wahi..soch nayi!😆😆

le free mein tere ff ki publicity bhi kar di meine!😉

Originally posted by: niki_2293

Wow nice FF Sanju..kittu ke rone ka suspense khulega agle episode mein..dekhna na bhuliye PYAAR KI RAAHE..sirf meri bhabhi forum par! Rishta wahi..soch nayi!😆😆

le free mein tere ff ki publicity bhi kar di meine!😉

Shukriya shukriya publicity ke liye varna mera ghatiya ff koi padega bhi nai
Me ye 4 parts me finish karungi kali filli izzat jayegi varna

Originally posted by: .SanVi.

Shukriya shukriya publicity ke liye varna mera ghatiya ff koi padega bhi nai
Me ye 4 parts me finish karungi kali filli izzat jayegi varna

nahi re..acha ff hai..padke muje to laga jaise real mein mb ke characters bol rahe hain😆..

Originally posted by: niki_2293

nahi re..acha ff hai..padke muje to laga jaise real mein mb ke characters bol rahe hain😆..

Ha ha bas

hmm! finally anki ko FF mil hii gaya ..sanju tu writer bhi hain 😲😲😲chalo ab kuch na kuch read krny ko milegaa. but ur 1 attempted 👏👏kabil-a-tareef 😉 pyaar ki raahe na jaane kaha milegii par humko yakeen hain kahin na kahin melegii😉

 really nice Ff & plz! continue 😉

Kameeni! I hate you 😡 (Not really 😆)

Originally posted by: shree_007

hmm! finally anki ko FF mil hii gaya ..sanju tu writer bhi hain 😲😲😲chalo ab kuch na kuch read krny ko milegaa. but ur 1 attempted 👏👏kabil-a-tareef 😉 pyaar ki raahe na jaane kaha milegii par humko yakeen hain kahin na kahin melegii😉

really nice Ff & plz! continue 😉

Are shree im not writer and all its my 1st try..aivi timepass ke liye likha hai
Thank u for liking

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Kameeni! I hate you 😡 (Not really 😆)

Tune meko promise kiya tha ki tu mujhe pehle batayegi jab FF likhegi lekin nahi bataya na 😭

Dekhli teri dosti.

Coming to the part,

though mujhe characters nahi pata, mein koi normal story ki tarah padh rahi hun naaki fanfic and seriously speaking, tu accha likhti hai.

Continue soon. :)

are mujhe yaad hai mene promise kiya tha ki teko bataungi but tab jab AR ka ff likhungi..is serial ke baar me kuch nai pata isliye nai bataya
Vaise bhi im very bad writer..mera ghatiya ff na padh to hi accha hai