MRIARA SS: EXPECTATIONS OF LIFE ch 6 ON PG 11 ( 11/ 06) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: ShagufElina

Fraser...so so..so...beautiful...👏

Search for her...

Storyline is awsummm...this SS made my day...

Sachchi its so beautiful...

Pls update soonnn...now i m becoming restless...kaise milenge...donon...

Thanks to Mohi...tum na bataati toh shayad main itni pyaari kahaani miss kar jaati...🤗



thank you..
in the mj hotel.. they will surely meet..
i come to know her new name.. spokewomen.. so how can she never tell you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: BlueJasmine

 The story is becoming even more intriguing  ... suberb writing ...👏 



thankxx jasmine.. hope you enjoy further too
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: Archi21

Dear ⭐️

Story getting more interesting 😃

u have explained Tara's thought n situation perfectly 👏 👏 👏

her fear of rejection

her wait

each and every emotion perfectly explained 👏

hope for next update when u get time 😃



thankxx archi...
m missing your thoughts
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: -Humera-

Just caught up with the chapters of this ss, and I am spellbound. 

Each chapter is written so beautifully,  and I love the way you have expressed MriAra's feelings; I can't wait to see the this story unfold.

Please update soon 🤗



thank you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great work dear...👏
I am looking forward to this SS...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by: ItsMe_Ammu

Great work dear...👏

I am looking forward to this SS...



THANK YOU😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
please read... specially first two questions


hello peoples.. a huge thank you and hugs to all of you for your response .. i didn't know this OS and now turn into SS will do this much.. well whole credit goes to my masta ( i luv this name ..so cool) or mohi.. luv you and ofcourse new one Archi 21 ..they took this SS into new level..
as tell you earlier i luv to get any criticisms be negative or positive or any questions regarding my work on thread... so that others readers know ... i don't have any problem that other readers know that how crap writer i am...

m living a side effects of mj
1 case- morning 6 a.m--- temple.
priest is giving someone vermillon box of goddess( navratri is going on)  and total gone case of mine..
mj- dadu says that if a women bend her head in front of god so god itself blessed her husband..

2 case--- metro train--- on the way of university

a girl in white anarkali ...yaar kal tara ne bhi yehi dress dala tha na

3 case--- in class --- so how uranium ejjects.. dark room--- quantum ehjjects practical going on


uranium-- expectations of life.., dark room - mj,,
the light we used mj
teacher- we are  talking about uranium effects and which element is mj

till now am not able to write a chapter when got time update will be on...
anyways recently again i got pm regarding questions so before proceeding i thought to give answers...
PLZ HAVE A LOOK SO THAT AT LEAST IT CLEAR MOST OF THE THOUGHTS

did mj or tara as individually love each other ? if yes, so how ?
more than love there is respect and administration for each other they have... till now i didn't said they love each other.. they have feelings and some where a bud feelings of love for each other
but they never have a time to nurse their feelings that's why they calling their nascent respect as love which at time comes bloom itself.

specially for love we need a person whom we talk and meet face to face.. mj never want to cheat his veiled wife with his new tomboyish friend...so he always take up a boundary which eventually breaking day by day when he come to know his friend is his wife... and tara and mj never share a healthy couple talk and never see each other face ( plz read ss once again if not clear) till that time so how there live a love... the respect and admistration they nursed for each other in their one year part way.

why tara and mj never move on?
coz they both know they tied in a relationship or a destined bond. i already mention mj have a fear that if tara is involved with someone else and tara too is waiting for mj get involved with some one else... they tied up in  a marriage and when they part up their ways they both know they are fooled by destiny and eventually they come to know they both are innocent ... they never broke their bond and a chit of paper is not sufficient for any breakage we need. move on is not easy that's why tara and mj is want a clarity somewhere to move on they never get that... and a tradition or customes that we are married is also another reason.
who is your writing insipration and you write for the tv leads only?
m a guilt writer and write for the my diaries where my most of the stories post ( its my university blog and on nagging by my one of african friend i start writing)... yaar so far i just watch two shows ipkknd and ebi.. and ebi is so close to my heart coz this is the only show i watch from starting... and never flipped a channel for a jiffy to watch cartoon..  thats why i read whatever come to my way .. i never see what soaps they are coming from..

no, you are most welcome to assume any jeremy kapone, ian , taylor swift, robert , kristen ... my story characterization is upto to you whatever you wish for... earlier a write for arshi coz on forum there is only arshi story is posted so stories are on arshi my ek boond ishq names are... laura white(tara) and christine(mj)////

but ebi definetely taking a tole so my two storise is definately on them one is already post and another may be replace expectations... they are... expectations and naatth ( nose ring)

why you update so late? and did we get your writing index?
m a student and a interner too and letting you guys on wait is also become my problem so i thought of quitting writing but will complete expectations and if you are interested in reading my work so i will you another link.. infact m typing this on my way of my work lab so its tough to give you all links but with next update you will get all links specailly ur fav escort meet stripper ... i read your comment is truely give me happy tears
 
is that your pic? why its not fully pane.
m laughing after reading your question.. what you want give my pic to any matrimonial site.



Edited by fraser - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
here pics of mj that tara sees on twitter and fb...( on demands scrap m posting it)
 credit : my masta










twitter handler-- meethi singh shekhawat..

pics courtesy-- viraf phiroz patel
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for clearing thoughts

well ur writing is so clear i wonder why people are confused

Leave it
i enjoyed all answers

MJ fb n tweeter page pic are awesome

lol ...u also suffered ebi syndrome...i too suffered that
thanks for answeringEdited by Archi21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fraser i dont know why theses questions were raised. I loved Mriara yearning for each other part in your story & how mj is trying is level best to find Tara. The insecurities kicking in!! I love it.  Edited by mastaTmohi - 10 years ago