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Posted: 10 years ago
                                              CHAPTER SIX
 
KVL in the workplace. Laksh says Raji phone is ringing and waiting for her arrival.. Karthi not in a mood to talk about as he is frustrated on calling her number N number of times...

 

While they were talking, there comes sad Raji unable to face any of them. Looking down, she tells what happened.. that her father fell ill, blocks in his heart... But still all are angry as why she did not convey it to any one of them.

Later Laksh questions her, she says that in ICU her relatives were talking about her marriage and everyone were keen on having it soon as her father's health is not good and she cries..

Karthi confess his love for Raji on veranda (which dint expect) and tells that for this why to go to a different location.

KRV at cubicle.

Raji arranges things on her desk as she is back after a week and finds a coolers at the corner and also some notes written on the board beside her. She doubts and asks Vishnu.

Raji : Vishnu, naan varaadhappa indha place yaaraavadhu use pannaangalaa.. ?

Vish : Aama.. eppadi kandupidicheenga ?

Raji : inga paarunga... idhu en table la irundhadhu and shows the coolers..

Vish : grabs from her and sees that... super ah irukke... yaardhaa irukkum... (thinks) and says... inga enga friend Jaya dhaan utkaarndhirundhaa... but idhu pasanga cooling glass ache... yaar vahiruppa... ?

Karthi : turns and sees that... remembers its  the one Jaya gave him and later he returned back when they had misunderstandings inbetween.

He then tells... that's mine and I could have misplaced in that table..

Few days later ...

Raji gets appreciation from Vichu for her improvement. But Karthi gets angry that he is fighting with Vichu for her sake but she is now prasing him that he is a good person.

Next day :

KRV at their seats. Karthik still gaandu on Raji. Lakshmi comes there.

Laksh : Vishnu... vaa canteen polaam...  innaikku naan breakfast saappidala... juice kudikkalaamnu paakuren...

Vish : am busy latchumi.

Laksh : dei... idhu romba over u... sari vaa... poi vaangittaavadhu vandhuralaam..

Vish : ennaala paadhilaye vittuttu vara mudiyaadhu...

Laksh : fraud-u...  nee vera edhavadhu karanam sollirundhaalum paravaailla... aana velaiya paadhiyila vittuttu vara mudiyaadhunu sonna paathiya... ennaala idha othukkave mudiyaadhu...

Seri po.. enakku neraya vela irukku... Raji nee variyaa illa neeyum busy ya ?

Raji : vela irukku... irundhaalum varen... vaa polaam.

Both leaves...

 

Vishnu still busy typing and seems enjoying something. Karthi doubts and peeps into his system.

He sees a chat window open and starts his convo.

Karthi : dei... vaangura sambalathukku vela paakurennu paathaa... ippadi yaar koodayo kadala pottuttu irukka...  idhellaam block pannirundhaangale da... Ennadaa kurukku vazhi use pannure...

Vish : thambi... nee un personal vishayathaye paathuttu irundha... ippadi dhaan... office la enna nadakudhune theriyaadhu...  updated ah irukkanum boss... idhu.. namma nettech messenger..

  Karthi : ennada pudhusaa kadha vidura...

Vish : pudhusaan machi... Ippo dhaan launch pannirukkaanga...

Karthi : sari.. adhukkulla appadi yaar kitta da pesittu irukka...

Vish : disturb pannaadha da...  B'lore Angel...

  Karthi : yaarunnu sonna..

Vish (casually says) : adhaan da namma Jaya...

Karthi : (gives a look)

Vish : ayyayyo.. veri aaga poraan.. yerkanave ivan kitta naan vaangunadhu pathaadhaa..

Karthi : ennadaa mulikkuraa... ?

Vish : onnum illaye...  

Karthi : marubadiyum edhaavadhu plan panriyaa.. ?

Vish : Sathiyamaa illa daa... naan poi unaku appadi pannuvenaa ?

Karthi : nee edhuvume pannala ? enga enna paathu sollu...

Vish : adhu jaya voda plan da... naan chumma perform dhaan pannen... 

           ennadaa.. ? thirumbavum nee Jaya va sandhega paduriyaa... nadikkuraan nu..

Karthi : aamaanda... doubt dhaan... but ava mela illa... indha dhadava un mela..

              Appadiye ava kooda close aagura maadhiri act panna... naan kaduppaguven nu nenakiriyaa.. ?

Vish : illaye... aana.. ippo nee kaduppu dhaan aagura ?

Karthi : (silent)

Vish : ennada silent aagitta... enakku theriyum da unna pathi...  idhukku per dhaan possessiveness. 

  Karthi : appadi yellam onnum illa...  naan adhellam marandhutten...  en manasula ippa Raji mattum dhaanda irukka...

Vish : yen da unnaiye nee yemathikira...  unnaala Jaya va marakka mudiyaadhudaa...

           Raji mela unakku love vandha vudane... Jaya va nee marandhutta nu neenye samaadhaanam aagiruppa... but ava ippa marubadiyum vandhu nippaanu edhirpaakala...  Correct ah ?

Karthi : (silent)

Vish : ennadaa.. correct ah sollittenu paakuriyaa.. ivlo naal unkooda pazhaguren..  idhu kooda theriyalanaa.. apparam ennada friendship...

Karthi : (feels) enakku ore kolappamaa irukku daa...

Raji and Lakshmi return.

Vish : ippodhaikku free ah vidu da... apparamaa paathukkalaam...

-------------------to be continued -----------------------

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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting...
Karthik is at confusion which is not good for Raji and Angel's past is mystery yet which makes it more interesting..
Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very interesting thanks for the updates. 
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Posted: 10 years ago
                                   CHAPTER SEVEN
 
 
Note : As said earlier, some part will be the actual scenes from Office and K5 to which I have included my own imagination to link both the tracks...
 

Raji still did not accept Karthik's proposal and repeats her standard dialogue to everyone that she did not give any commitment and haven't uttered those 3 words.

Jaya is back from training and she is put into a different team, obviously different workstation, near Lakshmi's cubicle.

So chances are less for Karthik and Jaya to meet very often but Lakshmi likes to befriend Jaya.

Once she comes to KVR's workstation and gets introduced to Raji by Vishnu.

Vish : Jaya, this is Raji alias Rajalakshmi. Ivanga leave la irundhappa dhaan nee ivanga place ah occupy pannirundha...

Raji, and this is Jaya alias Jayalakshmi alias Angel.  Engal kalloori thozhi.

Both greets each other with formal Hi'.

 

Jaya learns so fast and does her work efficiently and receives good feedback from the seniors.

While coming to kadala pottufy Laksh, Vish renew his friendship with Jaya as they had during college days and start kalaachify her in his own style as usual. But she is not talkative and naughty as before, seems to be very silent and just laughs for Vishnu's comments and doesn't gives counters for it.

 

At times, Raji sees Karthi talking casually with Jaya. Both Laksh and Raji does not know that Angel/Jaya is Karthi's ex-girlfriend, just knew that she is KV's college-mate.

Jaya also comes to know that there is something between Karthi and Raji through some of the colleagues there.

 

As Lakshmi moves with Jaya well, she calls her for breaks when she goes with Raji. Both Raji and Jaya are not comfortable with each other for some reasons.

 

All three girls VRJ passes through Susan's cabin and she calls them. It's not official, she called for vetti talk to pass the time. Slowly she starts talking personally and remembers Angel's presence for a second. On seeing her hesitation Jaya was about to get up but Susan says you can also be here and continues saying after all you are also friend of Karthik.

All there looks at each other and doesn't have clue on what she is about to speak out.

Susan opens that she started liking Karthik so much and doubts if she had fallen in love with him and don't know if that is correct or not, work out or not as he is much younger to her. But before that she wants to get it cleared that if KR are in love as she suspect and even others around speaks about it. 

 
Raji promises that it is not true and that they both are good friends and nothing more than that. Laksh notices the change in Jaya's face on hearing this which seemed like relieved from something. 
 

Susan is happy that KR is not in love and she says thanks and ask them to leave.

 
Venue :  Fantastic Four in Canteen
 

Raji starts the convo..

Raji : Lakshmi... gavanichiyaa..? rendu perum romba dhaan thulluraanga, college friend ah paathadhum...

Laksh : aama... konjam over ah dhaan panraanga..

Vish : neenga yen Raji ivlo kaduppaagureenga Jaya mela.. ?

Raji : yaar eppadi ponaa enakkenna... ?

Karthi : (hears the convo silently)

 

Laksh : (suddenly asks) Vishnu, nee ennavo karthi aalu ippadi iruppaa, ippadi iruppaa nu over-ah build up kudutha... aanaa indha Angel la paathaa appadi theriyalaye...

naamalaa pesuna pesuraa.. romba reserved ah irukka..

Vishnu did not realize that Laksh is talking about K's ex-love is J which Karthi has asked him not to tell and he continues...

Vish : adhukku kaaranam... ivanum ivan thangachiyum dhaan...

Laksh : thangachiyaa ? orey payyan nu sonna...

Vish : twin-sister.  eppadi paathaalum ivan orey payyan dhaane... ha ha ha...

Aanaa.. ava ivanga kooda illa.. bombay la irukka.. ivanga mama-athai chinna vayasulaye adopt pannikittaangalaam.

enga college la oru rendu varusham irundhaa... marubadiyum mumbai ke poittaa...

ivlo details podhumaa.. ? innum konjam venumaaa... (again laughs..)

 

Only after talking this much, he notices Karthi looking at him in kolaveri... and realize that he had revealed who is Jaya to Laksh and Raji stares at Karthi for hiding it from her...

Vishnu is afraid as what Karthi will do, he silently moves from there and Laksh too follows him.

Karthi : (tries to say something) adhu vandhu Raji...

Raji : pesaadha... (get up and leaves)

 

 

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update ramya.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting Ramya..
Raji knows about Jaya now enna panra'nu paakanum.. 
Jaya still has feelings for Karthik which is very clear.
Three girls in love with one boy 😆😆 Karthik enjoy 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Interesting part Ramya..👏

So ipo triangle love ..quadrangle love airucha...😉
good going da..👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
                         CHAPTER EIGHT
 
As Raji walks away, Karthi also gets up and goes down. He being disappointed on Raji's behavior, roams near the tea shop for some relaxation and come out of the bad mood.

He notices Jaya in the parking place struggling to kick-start her scooty.  He hesitates for a while and then walk towards her.

 

Karthi : (calls her) Jaya. ennachu vandikku... ?

Jaya : theriyala... kalaila nalla dhaan irundhadhu... yen start aaga maattengudhu nu theriyala...

Karthi : konjam thallu.. naan paakuren..

 

She moves aside and he tries to start the vehicle. He then starts looking at the engine part if he could do something. By that time, Jaya gets a call.

(only one side of the conversation)

Jaya : sollu di.  adhellam problem illa... permission pottu kelambitten...

Friend : ...

Jaya : vandidhaan correct ah innaikku makkar pannudhu...  innaikku auto bus laam strick ...

Friend : ...

Jaya : appointment ethana manikku ?

Friend : ...

Jaya : innum 1 hour irukkula... veettukku vandhuttu .. apparamaa dhaana porom... ?

Friend : ...

Jaya : ippa kelambunaa dhaan correct ah irukkumaa.. ? appo vidu next week paathukkalaam..

Friend : ...

Jaya : appadi enna avlo periya doctor... ? appointment vaanguradhu avlo kastamaa ?

Friend :

Jaya : sari di ... cut pannu... naan eppadiyavadhu vara try panren...

 

As she was very near, Karthi heard the convo...

Karthi : Jaya. vandi sari aagura maadhiri theriyala... permission pottu poradha paatha, edho urgent maadhiri theriyudhu... unakku prechana illanaa naan venaa drop pannattumaa ?

Jaya : Office time la nee eppadi Karthi ?

Karthi : adhu onnum prechana illa.. work konjam kammi dhaan... vandhu naan mudichuppen...

Jaya : Thanks Karthi.

She locks her scooty and sits in Karthi's bike and he puts the coolers (which was found at Raji's desk which Jaya had gifted him) and starts his bike.

Raji sees Jaya going with Karthi in his bike, from the corridor.

******** to be continued ***********                                                    

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Posted: 10 years ago
Pochu erkanave karthik mela raji kovama iruka ippo bike la vara jayava kutitu poratha pathu innum sami ada pora.
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Posted: 10 years ago
super ramya...👏

so raji ku kova pada innoru resaon kidachuruchu...
jaya kudutha coolers ah vera karthik accept panitana...😉
 ipo yaara love panrom nu karthik kae doubt ah iruka pogudhu...😛