FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106

sweety

@sweety16

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Hi friends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know we all are missing the KR magic on the serial nowadays...

Even though they use to fight earlier there was some MAGIC which made us enjoy

Those cute fights and patch ups...

But nowadays the MAGIC is MISSSIIINNNGGG!

So here comes my FF ..."THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY"

FF...THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY...

CHARACTER SKETCH:

All the characters are same as in the serial.

SYNOPSIS:

My story starts from the day before Karthik's birthday...

The nice conversation KR had in conference room...

And the most ROMANTIC phone conversation in the night...

As shown in the episodes telecasted...

(we expected a lot... but ...)

...Chapter 1 ... coming soon...

INDEX: (Created by Ramya05... Thanks dear...)

CHAPTER 1 CHAPTER 11 CHAPTER 21 CHAPTER 31 CHAPTER 41

CHAPTER 2 CHAPTER 12 CHAPTER 22 CHAPTER 32 CHAPTER 42

CHAPTER 3 CHAPTER 13 CHAPTER 23 CHAPTER 33 CHAPTER 43

CHAPTER 4 CHAPTER 14 CHAPTER 24 CHAPTER 34 CHAPTER 44

CHAPTER 5 CHAPTER 15 CHAPTER 25 CHAPTER 35 CHAPTER 45

CHAPTER 6 CHAPTER 16 CHAPTER 26 CHAPTER 36 CHAPTER 46

CHAPTER 7 CHAPTER 17 CHAPTER 27 CHAPTER 37 CHAPTER 47

CHAPTER 8 CHAPTER 18 CHAPTER 28 CHAPTER 38 CHAPTER 48

CHAPTER 9 CHAPTER 19 CHAPTER 29 CHAPTER 39 CHAPTER 49

CHAPTER 10 CHAPTER 20 CHAPTER 30 CHAPTER 40 CHAPTER 50

CHAPTER 51 CHAPTER 61 CHAPTER 71 CHAPTER 81

CHAPTER 52 CHAPTER 62 CHAPTER 72

CHAPTER 53 CHAPTER 63 CHAPTER 73

CHAPTER 54 CHAPTER 64 CHAPTER 74

CHAPTER 55 CHAPTER 65 CHAPTER 75

CHAPTER 56 CHAPTER 66 CHAPTER 76

CHAPTER 57 CHAPTER 67 CHAPTER 77

CHAPTER 58 CHAPTER 68 CHAPTER 78

CHAPTER 59 CHAPTER 69 CHAPTER 79

CHAPTER 60 CHAPTER 70 CHAPTER 80

Edited by sweety16 - 9 years ago

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sweety

@sweety16

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 1

(After the cute KR conversation at the conference that ended like...

Karthik: Naalaikku kandippa solluviya???????????????

Raji: Amaam... yenna naan oru vaatti sonnaa ...en paeche naane keakkamaatten...)

At the cubicles:

Raji takes her phone and messages to Vishnu... Unga kitta thaniyaa pesanum.. konjam Reception ku vaanga... please...

Vishnu replies ...OK...in 10 mins...

At the Reception:

Vishnu: Enna Raji? En vara sonneenga..?

Raji: Irunga Laksmiyum varattum...solren...

Lakshmi comes there asking...

Lakshmi: Hey...Raji...enna intha avasara meeting?

Raji: Naalaikku Karthik birthday...

Vishnu:Adu thaane namma officela rendu vaarama planning nadakuthu...(laughs...)

Lakshmi also joins him...

Lakshmi: adukku?

Raji: sirikkatheenga... Karthik ku surprise tharanum...adukku neenga rendu perum help pannanum..

Lakshmi: Hey...Raji...enna plan?

Vishnu: Sollunga Raji en nanbanukkaaga naan enna venum naalum seyya naan ready...

Raji explains her plan...

Vishnu: Super Plan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ppaa ...chance ea illa...ippadiye nadandiduchii idaan Karthik oda best birthday vaa irukkum...

Lakshmi: mmm

Raji: Adu daan ennoda aasai!!!!!!!

Vishnu: OK Raji...naama kalakkurom... Karthik Susan room le irundu varadukulla Naan ess aagaren ...

Vishnu shows thumbs up and leaves...

Lakshmi hugs Raji and says ..."nalla mudivu di... ippa thaan enakku romba santhoshamaa irukku.

Raji: sari vaa oru tea saaptu varalaam...

Lakshmi: mm... vaa...

Both leave to canteen.

At the cubicles:

Vishnu working...

Karthik comes from Susan's room and sits in his chair with a Sigh...

Vishnu: Enna machan? Sema tired aa irukke? Meeting romba serious oh?

Karthik: Ennadaa venum unakku?

Vishnu: Illa romba neramaa ...

Karthik: Dei !!!!!

Vishnu: velaiya paarkanum...adaaane...?

Karthik: mmm

In the evening...

Lakshmi comes to the cubicles..saying ..."hey!!!!!!!!! Kilambalaama?"

Raji: mm... kilambalaam...

Vishnu: Neenga kilambunga Lakshmi... Naanum Karthikum kilamba late aagum...

Lakshmi: OK ... Bye Vishnu...Bye Karthik...

Raji: Bye Karthik...Bye Vishnu...

Karthik: Bye...

Both Raji and Lakshmi leave smiling!!!!!!!!!!!!

Karthik turns to Vishnu and asks...Ennada aachu unakku? Eppavume 5.30 ke shut down dialogue

Poduve... Ippo kilamba late aagum nu sollure?

Vishnu: adu vandu...

Karthik: enna daa?

Vishnu: naalaikku unakku birthday!!!!!!!!!!!

Karthik: adukku ippa enna?

Vishnu: naama celebrate panna venaama?

Karthik: innaikku edukkuda celebration?

Vishnu: naalaikku kaalaile Raji kooda kovil poganum...appuram office...evening Susan kooda dinner poganum... ennoda eppa daa time spend pannuve? Ivanga ellaam un life la varadukku munnaadiye naan unakku friend...daa... adanaale naama ippave celebrate panrom...

Karthik: (smiles)sari adukku ippa enna pannanum?

Vishnu: vaa jolly yaa kondaadalaam...

Karthik: OK ...aana oru condition... thanni party kadaiyaadu...

Vishnu: adapppaaavi...

Karthik: naan sonna sonnathu thaan...

Vishnu: sari OK ...edooo onnu... Polaam vaa...

Karthik smiles and Vishnu's mind voice "appaaa!!!!!!! Ethana varusham aanaalum ivan kitta poi solli samaalikkuradhu ... kashtam daa saaamii...

Both leave.

At a Shopping Mall:

Lakshmi: Raji... enna gift vaanganum nu yosichittiyaa?

Raji: gift illa... karthik ku dress edukkalaam nu...

Lakshmi smiles...

Raji: sirikkade Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: OK OK... adukku size ellam theriyanum illa?

Raji: Vishnu vai kekkalaam...

Lakshmi: avan kooda Karthikum iruppaan illa?

Raji: aamam ... Ippo enna pannalaam? Laksmi...Vishnu vukku message pannu...

Lakshmi: OK...

At Coffee Day:

Karthik and Vishnu enjoying chilled Cappuccino and chocolate brownies...

Vishnu gets message...he reads and replies...

Vishnu gets message again... again he replies...

Karthik: yaaruda ?

Vishnu: Lakshmi thaan...

Karthik: paarra adukkulle MISS YOU message aa?

Vishnu: adu illa daa... idu vera... kaalaile anuppina mail ku reply panniya nnu kekkaraa?

Karthik smiles...

Vishnu: enna sirippu?

Karthik: mm hmm ... onnum illa...

At Shopping Mall:

Lakshmi: dress eduthu aachu... Aduthu enna?

Raji: Cake order pannanum...

Lakshmi: mmm...sari... vaa polaam..

At Cake Shop:

Raji selects a cake and orders for it. The shopkeeper tells them that the cake will be ready by 10.30 p.m

Raji: Lakshmi ... Ippo enna panradu?

Lakshmi: onnum prachnai illa.. naama pay pannittu Vishnu vai vaangittu vara sollalaam...

Raji: OK...

She pays the bill and Lakshmi shows the sales boy Vishnu's photo in her mobile and tells him that he will come to take the cake...the sales boy says OK...

Lakshmi messages the cake shop name and bill no to Vishnu.

Lakshmi : aduthu enna?

Raji: candles vaanganum...

Lakshmi: mmm ...appuram...

Raji: ayyo marandutten !!!!!!!!!! en sari stitching koduthen adu vaanganum..

Lakshmi: sari vaa polaam...

At Pizza Hut:

Karthik: en daa inda kolaveri?

Vishnu: enna daa?

Karthik: modalle Coffee day!!!!!!!!

Appuram Aappa kadai...

Ippo Pizza Hut...

Eppa daan da un treat mudiyum?

Saayanthrathu le irundu raathiri aayiduchi...

Polaam vaa daa enakku bayangara tired aa irukku.

Vishnu: ippo nee avasarama veettukku poyi enna pannuvennu engalukku theriyaada? Raji oda phone la pesa porae ... Vera enna?

Karthik: sari daa... Nee polaam nu solar varaikkum naan pesale...

Vishnu messages Lakshmi ..."innum evvalavu neram?"

Lakshmi replies ..."almost done ... 15 mins kazzhichu neenga kilambidunga"...

After 15 mins karthik and Vishnu shake hands and say bye to each other and leave...

CHAPTER 2 coming soon...

CHAPTER 2

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suhasini

@Suha95

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Hi sweety...

Welcome to the forum..

Chapter 1 is nice..

This Raji is taking efforts for karthik's b'day...is it...

wow nice part..

And one more thing ..post the chapter in this thread it self...and change the title ..like "chapter 1 pg1"

So that u need not post another thread or topic for next chapter...

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sweety

@sweety16

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

hi friends,

hope you all enjoy this story...

this is my very first attempt...

sweety.

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anithu

@amrithatec

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Nice ff sweety...Waiting for next part

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mey_mey

@mey_mey

Senior Member

Posted: 10 years ago

Superb story, Sweety. This is way better than the one on TV. Good job!

Waiting for the next chapter.

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hopper_ocean

@hopper_ocean

IF-Veteran Member

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hi, good start. Keep up the good job.

You seem to have open 2 topics with the same title. Are you using the other one? If not i shall trash it away.

Office Dev Team

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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

nice start sweety...sounds interesting...👏

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sweety

@sweety16

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER 2

In the night:

The fantastic KR phone conversation as it is as we saw on TV...

(This is my favourite KR scene till date...what MAGIC it created!!!!!!!!!!...

So, not disturbing that... but here in my story ... the MAGIC continues...)

Before he could switch it off, Karthik's phone rings ...

It's Raji... He answers..."sollu daa"...

Raji: Karthik enna pannure?

Karthik: Edukku kekkare?

Raji: illa enakku onnu thonuthu athaan un kitta sollalaam nu...

Karthik: Enna?

Raji: Karthik... thookkam varuda?

Karthik: illa... En... Edukku kekkare?

Raji: Karthik correct aa 12 manikku motta maadikku variya?

Karthik: motta maadikkaa? Edukku?

Raji: illa ...

Karthik: En kitta solla enna thayakkam unakku? Ennannu sollu...

Raji: nee maadikku vandu nilaavai paaru... naanum maadikku vandu nilaavai pathu en manasula irukkaradu sollidaren... Nee kaetta maadiri unnoda poranda naal parisu unakku 12 manikke kidaichidum...

Karthik: nee anna nagar le sonna enakku inga eppadi kaekkum?

Raji: naan manasula yosichaave unakku kaekkum bodhu nilaavai paathu sathama sonna kaekkaadhaa?

Karthik: kaekkave sema romantic aa irukku... Sari varen... Bye...

Raji: bye...Karthik...

Raji cuts the phone and a pillow hits her...

Lakshmi enters and says "killaadi di neee..."

Raji : po lakshmi ... sari Vishnu cake vaangittaara nu kelu...

Naan Sari mathittu varen...

Lakshmi:mmm OK...

Lakshmi calls Vishnu ..."hey.. Vishnu enga daa irukke? Cake vaangittiya? Mmm ellaam OK... Plan padi thaan poyittu irukku ... Ok... Naan thirumbavum kooppidaren..."

She cuts the phone and Raji calls her ..."Laksmiii..."

Lakshmi turns around and smiles seeing Raji in dark green embroidered saree..

"wow!!! Rajiii ... romba azhagaa irukke di... Karthik ku innikku heart attack dhaan!!!!!!!!!!!! Paathukko..."

Raji: summaa iru Lakshmi ...nalla naal aduvumaa...

Lakshmi: OK OK... Nee kilambu... 12 aaga innum pathu nimusham daan irukku... nee maadikku po...

Raji: mmm ...

Lakshmi: unakku 15 mins daan time, adukkulla manasula irukkaradu sollidu...Correct aa 12.15 ku naanum, vishnuvum maadikku vandiduvom , appuram engala kurai solla koodaadu...

Raji: mmm... Sari...

Lakshmi: hey Raji... marubadiyum "I" nu solli mayangi vihaade!!!!!!!!!!!

Raji: Lakshmi... enna tension pannaadhe...

Lakshmi: sorry...sorry... All the best...

Raji: Innaikku ennoda life la mukkiyamaana naal... Karthik innaikku full aaa Santhoshamaa irukkanum... appuram naalaikke en uyir ponaalum naan kavalai pada maatten...

Lakshmi: Rajii... ippo nee en ippadi pesure? Kuzhaippikkaama kilambu...Karthik kitta manasu vittu pesu...

Raji: mmm...sari...

Both hug each other and raji goes to the terrace (of Lakshmi & Karthik's house... Ofcourse...)

Chapter 3 coming soon...

CHAPTER 3

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Hey both the chapters are amazing.. Raji is going to give a beautiful bday gift to Karthi 😳... As the title says their love is really cute.. Amazing dear. Cont soon.

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