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awesome update
loved it
its getting interesting update by update
loved adi and manvi part... Ab dialogue
last part is shocking
manvi is not v.mom friend's daughter
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Awesome..!!! this is getting interesting..as the lot progresses so does the game...and mystery makes it lot more interesting unveling it...So Maanvi is dead for the world...now eager for the next and how does this effect her married life...Thanks for the pm!!!

nice update real manvi saxena dead
she manvi choudhry viren choudhry
sister right update soon

awesome, fantastic update
And loved the whole special dining sequence
But last was literary shocking
Waiting 4 next part
Update soon and thanx 4 d pm

Nice update adi and manvi both are gd gamers adi and mr? thnk viren hs manvis bf is manvi planing to leave vadhera house once hr mission is accomplished update sn

Nice story, just caught up with it all..really intriguing, hope you update soon,

Originally posted by: naina927

Ohhh my god... Wat will happen next...
But i loved the dining table scene... Adi n manvi r players n d way dey were talking... Ahhh loved it... ❤️
Virman bedroom scene was nice... Game n score wali convo...
Continue soon...

thanks a lot for the comments dear nxt update nt sure when will try😊

Originally posted by: virmanfan013

lovely update. Dinning scene was awesome. Adi is such a clever person bt manvi is more clever than him. Nw wt is gonna happen is manvi really dead waiting for the next part. Do cnt sn thanx for the pm

yes manvi is indeed clever...
will try to continue nt sure when
thnks a lot fr the cmments dear😊

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

hahaa the dining table scene was fun adi is smart but manvi is ofcoz the most clever one who got a dumphead hubby virat :-P
manvi is really dead ?? then who is this one ...
waiting for the next update

thnks dear fr the comments
manvi isdead or alive u will get to knw soon😊

Originally posted by: Kicha111

Nice update

manvi heard adi's conversation

Last part ws shocking

loved virman conversation

do cont soon dear

wait'g eagerly nd thnx 4 d pm

thanks a lot will try to continue soon nt sure when though😊