TS: Irreversible Mistake, Part 3.2 (Alt End) Pg. 13 - Page 8

I want rk to die prooving his love to madhu even if madhu forgive him he wont be able to forgive himself soo plss kill him in his love that will be ok

you made a hero out of bittuji n RK became a wimpy hero!!! why? just becos he committed adultery!!! it does not look the same as other parts. bt d scene bet madhu n rk ws painful n very powerful too. your forte is tragic writing. you excel in it. 

nice part ! 👏 Edited by war_is_peace - 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: tanuja.siri

Oh tainar that was a very painful ending😭 i wish it should never happen in the show.however bittuji again stood outstanding in the update...the perfect friend 😛.poor madhu is shattered with what all has happened in her life.rk in a fit of rage committed an irreversible blunder and shattered all relationships.all because of bhai and dips,and the fate they met with was deserving.serves them right.now i want to read the alternative ending where i'm expecting a happy rishbala.loved the update and thanks for the pm.

Sowy! 😕 It was painful to write as well. In fact, it left me drained. I adore Bittuji. He is a pillar of strength for Rishbala. Thank goodness our RK in the show didn't make this mistake! I hate to see my Rishbala shattered. 😭 So an alternative track toh banta hai! I just have to figure out what. Lol!

Thanks for reading and your insightful comments! 😳

Originally posted by: Tainar

Sowy! 😕 It was painful to write as well. In fact, it left me drained. I adore Bittuji. He is a pillar of strength for Rishbala. Thank goodness our RK in the show didn't make this mistake! I hate to see my Rishbala shattered. 😭 So an alternative track toh banta hai! I just have to figure out what. Lol!

Thanks for reading and your insightful comments! 😳

my thoughts too...am glad our RK is far more restrained in the show 😉...its ok to read that they separate(tragic nonetheless) but seeing our gorgeous,deep in love couple separate onscreen is another

Originally posted by: NehaVdian

R u planning to kill rk in next part
If u r so do write it bcoz that will be bearable rather than rk dieing every moment of his mistake which he didn't want to do

No RK didn't want to make the mistake but he did. No next part will be an alternative ending to this story. Hope you stay tuned! 😳 Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: bahnni.mj

my thoughts too...am glad our RK is far more restrained in the show 😉...its ok to read that they separate(tragic nonetheless) but seeing our gorgeous,deep in love couple separate onscreen is another

I would turn destructive if our Rishbala onscreen separates. As you said, it's painful to read and even more painful to write. But to actually witness it would kill me. I am just so happy the lightbulb is on in RK's head! He will definitely write the ENDING for Sultan and say PACK UP! 😃

It was disheartening...but your writing is superb...we always want a happy ending, but this is true to life.. won't say I enjoyed this update, but would say appreciated it a lot..

Originally posted by: tinkerred10

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Tani ..this is so sad ..I'm wiping my tears at the moment :(
Can I just go and slap RK for doing this . I hate him and I love him :(

Give the happy ending wala update really fast..ok :)

Keep up the good work and thanx for the pm :)