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OUCH! So RK does not get to play hero in your story? No chance to redeem himself by saving Madhu from Sultan. The hero turns out to be Bittuji? whew.
well written. The emotions were heartbreaking! No one is happy and both RK and Madhu are broken.
I look forward to your 'alternate ending' but this one was very good too despite being sad.
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