Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
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FF- DAGGER- curve to painful memories pt-8 dec 29 pg-42 (Page 32)

mandy15 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 October 2013 at 3:04am | IP Logged
awesome update :)

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lenageorge IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 October 2013 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
loved the updats dear
maan is cheted by same
geet too in very bad condtion
waiting for d next part
do update the os light in d dark also

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sukklover IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 October 2013 at 11:59am | IP Logged


 4 PM me...

 4 comment sooo late...Ouch...

ur update was  
,  ..WinkBig smile..
u done a 

 ..Big smileEmbarrassed.


lots of  4 u.Hug..

 P.S.S.: I Give u all Dhamki Last Time.. if u guys not comment on my creations.. next time..if like or not..m not giving any comment on urs too...Yaar..m also Human..don't think me as only commenter also as friendShockedOuchConfused

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Donnaa IF-Addictz

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Posted: 22 October 2013 at 3:02am | IP Logged
nice update
maan taking care of geet bt ignoring his own health..
this sam har jagah aajati hai!!!!!!

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Jayeeta_06 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 23 October 2013 at 2:44am | IP Logged
awesome...Thumbs Upmaan is so sweet taking care of geet...Big smileloved it...Heart

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_Maaneet_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
waiting for the next part...
update soon!!!

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sanghita0000 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 November 2013 at 8:24am | IP Logged
What happened dear???...plz update ch 7...

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angelic-eyes Senior Member

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Posted: 27 November 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged
hi sweeties...Smile
i m really sorry for the late update...i was busy in my exams...and guys i don't forget about my story but though ur comments make me feel out of the world...awesome...thanks for remembering my story...i tried my level best this tym to impress u all...and sorry for not commenting on others...but i love u all...thanks a ton...StarStar
DAGGERcurve to painful memories...


                            credit goes to vanshi_maaneet
                                      thanks alot dear...Heart
Maan after doing his tai-chi he felt little bit relaxed...whenever her name came in front of him he just lost his could that girl Sam make his life living hell...i hate her...then he remembered how he talked to his could i talk to dadimaa like this...she is concerned for me and what did i do...he left and moved to dadimaa's room...

Maan saw dadimaa sitting on the bed...he went near her...and put his head on her lap...Dadimaa I m sorry for my behaviour...dadimaa knew his pain so she wanted to sooth him...she start massaging his hair...maan I know...before she complete maan spoke...dadimaa plz listen to me today...I know I m not a good child of urs anymore...I know I did some wrong things but u know I love u and my family and if somebody hurt them I want leave them...

A silence prevailed in the room...dadimaa wanted to console him but knew that silence make him more comfortable than words...the pain he is having is not bearable when u love someone and she broke ur heart...


After a few minutes maan started again...dadimaa what she did to me can be bearable but what she said about my family can't be could she???...a tear roll down from his eyes and landed on dadimaa's lap...his voice start shaking because of pain...i loved her dadimaa...why she ditched me??? Why???if she wanted money then she could ask me...i can't forget her betray dadimaa...I can't...and start crying...


Maan is a man of determination...he never shows his strength and weakness to anybody though he was fun loving guy but he never showed his weakness to anybody except dadimaa...he knew he can cry in her lap and forget about his pain...

But maan u have to take ur health seriously...u can't live ur life like this..u know u have to be strong for u, ur brother, ur sister and for me...said dadimaa and wipe his tears...u know na how much i love u beta...i care for u...i know dadimaa...i m sorry...i'll never do such type of things again...and i love u too...said maan...
Dadimaa thought about maan's journey of his parents left him at such a tender age...he made himself strong for his brother and sister..he forget about himself...he became mature before the age...but what life did to him was horrible...


Dadimaa always tell him that if life gives you such experince then there is always something good behind it...maan asked her what is good behind it and she just smile and patted on his back...u will see..

Maan time always take test of everyone's strength and may be HE is taking yours now...dadimaa said...before maan can speak further he heared a scream...

Maan run to scream's direction...and stop at the sight of her treambling body...Geet was literaly treambling or can say creeping on the floor...

Maan took a step towards her and before he could step further she start sobbing and yelling to leave her...please leave me...please...I'll never leave again...please...chodo mujhe...mat maro mujhe...please...m kabhi nai jaungi yahan se...please...and again start sobbing like a small child...

Maan dragged his feet towards her and when he approached her she scream painfully...AAA...and hitting her leg and hand in the air...Maan felt dagger everytime he saw her in this type of state...he knew he has no relation with her but still he felt like to sooth her give her happiness...


Dadimaa came into the room and saw Geet's state...she felt sorry for her...she told maan to put her onto the bed...and maan forcefully grabed her and put her in a hug position for few seconds and she stop protesting  for awhile...but again she start fighting...and Maan make her to sleep on the bed...


 Dadimaa seated on the bed and shifted Geet's head on her lap... Maan was standing near the window...both forget about their miseries and thought about Geet's misery...

Dadimaa patted her head to sooth her...and heared Geet's whisper of leaving her alone...shhh...its ok...its ok Geet...i m here for few minutes passed and Geet felt calmness...


Dadimaa asked Maan what doctor told him and maan told her everything...

i m happy with ur comments but likes are less...i want only 50 likes...i send pm to 80 people and likes are only 45-46...guys if u like my story then please hit the like but other remove me from ur buddy list because i don't want to distrub u but sending my update its a request to u all...thanks guys 4 ur support and comments, means alot to me...
 NOTE- FOR PM, just add me as buddy...


Edited by angelic-eyes - 29 December 2013 at 8:55am

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