Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

FF- DAGGER- curve to painful memories pt-8 dec 29 pg-42 (Page 14)

angelic-eyes Senior Member

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 10:22pm | IP Logged

DAGGERcurve to painful memories...



The man tried to wake her up by patting her cheeks but still the girl didn't response...

At that time his mobile rang...on seeing the caller ID he cuts the phone..

He again patted her cheeks but this time also she didn't respond. So, ultimately he scooped her in his arms and moved towards his car...all this time her head was resting on his chest...on reaching the car, man placed her on the passenger seat and went towards the driver seat and headed towards khurana mansion...

Meanwhile driving, his thought diverted towards his life changes...when u loved someone and they left much pain u have to devour in your life...first his father-mother left him and now his love...

He never thought Sameera would ditch him...he loved her and she used him only for money...he was so frustated and lost in his thought that he even didn't realise that the side person was gaining consiousness...

Her head was spining due to sever pain...she felt like someone hit her hard...she tried to capture her surrounding but due to weakness she couldn't be able to move...she closed her eyes and then the bang... whole scene came in front of someone came near to she scearmed for help...again her face left the colour...she looked like she had seen some ghost...she hadn't that much courage to see around and saw the next person sitting near her...

When she didn't get what to do ...AAAHHH... she just jump from the jeep

That broke the trance of maan...he immediately pulled the break with a jerk...Oh!!! God...he was hell shocked to see the girl jumped from his jeep...and that too in a steep valley...

He came out from his jeep hurriedly and saw her rolling on the slope...his face looked like he was watching some horror movie...she was the heroine doing some thoughts left his mind to think something and he also jumped without caring the after effects...he was rolling on the slope...

She was hit by the rock on her forehead...AAAHHH...she cried in pain...and continuously rolling...

He dogged the rocks many time but couldn't be able to pass to tree branch and struck by the branch in the stomach...he yelped in pain but the scream of girl forget him about his pain...he was mentally chided himself for the careless behaviour...

The pain in scream was piercing Maan's heart...he wanted to protect her...

She was struck by the huge rock on the head and there she became unconsciousness and tugged on the rock...
Just in few seconds Maan reached the rock but couldn't be able to hang on the rock...he tried to hold on the rock...but the grip was lightning with every passing second...he tried many times to get a grip on the rock but now the pain in stomach and head was torning him and it increased by ten folds when the rope peeled his hand's skin...he was losing it...but there out of the storm he saw her face covered in blood...blood oozing out from her head...

Just for seconds he lost his life...his pain..he never bothered where he was hanggin... and tried harder this time to get a strong grip on the rock...andfinally  he was succedded in his attempt...he put his back at the rock and stand the girls around his body...

He put an arm around the girl to support her...and suddenly rain started...the whole area became silent except the poundering of rain drops on them...her serene and pure face skipped the heart beats of Maan...rain drops helped the girl to became semi-conscious ...she wimped in pain...a small cry came out of her mouth...

Maan patted her cheeks hey wake up...whats ur name???...hosh me aao...tumhara naam kya hai???

In semi-conscious state, she blurted her name...G...G...GEET in a low voice...

Maan heard the sweetest voice in his life...Geet...he murmur under his breath like he heard the musical sound..

She opened her eyes and their eye-lock make them spell bound of togetherness...

He saw the ocean in her the black magic holding capitative of him..on the other hand she felt like warmth in his eyes belong for her...the hold they feel for each other can took the breath of anyone...

And suddenly due to slipper mud...Geet tried to move away from him but lost her balance...and slipped through Maan's arms...but Maan instantly caught her she was hanging above the deep valley with the only support of Maan's hand...

Maan who didn't see the valley depth before was astonished with back view...he was hell scared now...the valley seems to be death valley... {they can see all this in moonlight i wonder}

Maan come on try to hold come up...but due to rain its all futile...come on try harder...

Geet was feeling like she have no chance to live...she had faced a lot in her life but still she wanted to take breath in beautiful world instead of getting suffocated but now...

Maan Geet try...khosish kar... u can do it...and like 10 mins of hell struggle Maan able to pulled her up...and instantly with the effect of pulling she landed on his chest...she was numb now with the effect of person's closeness...

Maan tried to move her upto the jeep and in dazzed state she followed him...

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Edited by angelic-eyes - 13 September 2013 at 7:39am

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 10:23pm | IP Logged


thank u so much for the support and loveEmbarrassed...but i m little disappointed with the likes...
i love writing...especially on maaneet...
i want to write more about our maaneet Embarrassedbut due to continuous decrement in likes, i m gonna discontinue my stories...
i know i m doing injustice with u lovely maaneet readers...but when i didn't get the good response,i assume i m not good enough to write on them...
so,i m sorry for the problem...
i love our maaneet alot and love u all 4 the support u give me through-out my writing
P.S.- i'll update the last part of my Os- LIGHT IN THE DARK...

Edited by angelic-eyes - 31 August 2013 at 10:39pm

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Donnaa IF-Addictz

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
thanx for the pm
n m sorry for the late reply...was out of town
read all the 3 parts at once
nice updates
loved them...
plz pm me

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sweetsampa39 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 11:34pm | IP Logged
My heatbeats were on a hault untill Geet was safe with Maan.We were completely on the edge,where anything can happen.

It seems that Maan's parents died and obviously Sam ditched him,which broke him.But Geet's misery seemed bigger than his thats why he saved her without caring about any of his physical pain.

But thank God they are safe now.

Loved d part.

p.s.-Sweety if U end d stories what wud happen to usUnhappyPls dont do this yaar.Stay with us as only few of us are left,baaki sab toh chale hi gaye hain.

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sporthy_smile28 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 31 August 2013 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
That was a good part! !Smile

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sweetgirls1 Goldie

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 12:02am | IP Logged
please dont stop writing yar..
this is the story i m reading of yours... you can give me the other links of your work.. dont discontinue..
i loved your update...
i hope dono save rahe...
update soon

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Simran_B IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
awesome part
hope both are safe
dont stop writing you are a fab writer

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impoojaverma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 September 2013 at 1:22am | IP Logged
awesome update
maan is feeling angry on himself for loving sameera who used him for money
chalo now maan n geet r there with each-other
but how come geet was there???

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