|| SS : Make Me Whole || Last Part Page 21 , 9/20/13 - Page 18

awesome ending
loved every bet of it
it was sweet cute and romantic
thanks for pm
loved it

Thank god u ok and atleast u finish your beautiful story I like it   Keep it up

hi dhriti di🤗...

 

u know its 5.30 am ...n i'm reading ur arjun drooling😆😆😆😆...

 

feeling too sleepy but now aapne hospital me rehkar itni mehnat ki toh itna toh mein bhi kar hi sakti hu😉...

 

hmm...ahye love arjun drooling 😉😉...moonlight me arjun...can just imagine di😆😆😆...

 

and saashi anand ka heart monitor🤣...saare drums baja diye😆😆😆...

 

and then apne umar ki classes😉😉😉...then loved saakshi's style finaly  arjun ko  hasa diya

 

21 toppon ki salaami...dishhh...dishhh...dhisshhh😆😆😆😆...loved it di!!!...love u too🤗

A beautiful ending to a superb SS👏

🤗 Awe...there is my bahuria, well and kicking, and I am so glad.

You make me proud baby, this was brilliantly done, and yep excellent work with the heart monitor, no blooper there.😆

I love happy ending, and this one I was definitely expecting a happy ending for, and I am glad you listen to your sasuma once in a while.🤣

I loved that you stuck to their character as they are from start to end, wish I could see this on screen, but not worries I have you and other BBs to keep me dreaming on Arakshi. (If only the stalkers knew...)

Thank you so much for granting my request, I loved it, most especially the end.😉

And bahuria, the VM was perfect, very well done.👏 I love that song.

This is such a beautiful SS!! Excellent, excellent work! You're so good with words, and so very vivid!

Amazing!!!!!! Can't expect any less than AMAZING from you!!!

How do you always manage to bring the characters to life...

Can't wait for your next piece of art.

Always a fan,

Khushi

Late comment... SORRY for that😒

Awesome story
Just loved it