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|| SS : Make Me Whole || Last Part Page 21 , 9/20/13 (Page 22)

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:12pm | IP Logged
Awwsssmmm
loved it

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
awesome endingClap
beautiful VM


Edited by live - 19 September 2013 at 11:46pm

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 11:32pm | IP Logged
That was one of the most beautiful VMs i have ever seen...

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 12:01am | IP Logged
aww...this is the reason i call u angel...u always bring a smile on my face through ur stories!...nd some times...even tears...making me realise dat hw much i get involved in ur stories...


loved ur description and fantasy about arjun...holy crap...i sooo badly started my fantasies abt arjun...hayy...when he *sorry...censored content ahead*...lolz...

finally sakshi is back...in full fledged form...

sometimes its ok...its ok without 'I Love You's...nd Kisses...

keep writing

love
Aisha

Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 20 September 2013 at 9:51pm

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 12:48am | IP Logged
Awesomr ending!
love the vm
 
And uff that heart monitor, Sakshi ki dil ki baat uske bina kahe hi keh di
Also loved how you added those bts lines to it, they fit in perfectly
 
Waise will we be seeing some sort of Arjun giving lessons to Sakshi OS? Would make for an interesting one, don't you think?
 
Also hope you get well soon! Don't know what you were in the hospital for, but hope you're all better now

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged
One amazing update dear...
Just a perfect ending...

Arjun and Sakshi are awesome as always...
But I felt one thing more interesting..
The great heart monitor..
It played an important role in this update...
Actually it expressed her unspoken thoughts and emotions...
That too rhythemically...great...

Thanks for such a cute emotional romantic work...
and for the pm...

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 12:50am | IP Logged
im glad that you are well better now
now take care at home
thanx for the wonderful update
its great!
awesome ending
though im sad its over im happy that u wrote this ss
awwee... please just try seeing what work u did start and if every u think of something u can update then please do update them
i love ur work!

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It was awesome update..
Loved it:)

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