|| SS : Make Me Whole || Last Part Page 21 , 9/20/13 - Page 17

Posted: 10 years ago
aww...this is the reason i call u angel...u always bring a smile on my face through ur stories!...nd some times...even tears...making me realise dat hw much i get involved in ur stories...


loved ur description and fantasy about arjun...holy crap...i sooo badly started my fantasies abt arjun...hayy...when he *sorry...censored content ahead*...lolz...

finally sakshi is back...in full fledged form...

sometimes its ok...its ok without 'I Love You's...nd Kisses...

keep writing

love
AishaEdited by Aisha.Vashishth - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
Awesomr ending!
love the vm
 
And uff that heart monitor, Sakshi ki dil ki baat uske bina kahe hi keh di
Also loved how you added those bts lines to it, they fit in perfectly
 
Waise will we be seeing some sort of Arjun giving lessons to Sakshi OS? Would make for an interesting one, don't you think?
 
Also hope you get well soon! Don't know what you were in the hospital for, but hope you're all better now
Posted: 10 years ago
One amazing update dear...
Just a perfect ending...

Arjun and Sakshi are awesome as always...
But I felt one thing more interesting..
The great heart monitor..
It played an important role in this update...
Actually it expressed her unspoken thoughts and emotions...
That too rhythemically...great...

Thanks for such a cute emotional romantic work...
and for the pm...
Posted: 10 years ago
im glad that you are well better now
now take care at home
thanx for the wonderful update
its great!
awesome ending
though im sad its over im happy that u wrote this ss
awwee... please just try seeing what work u did start and if every u think of something u can update then please do update them
i love ur work!
Posted: 10 years ago
It was awesome update..
Loved it:)
Posted: 10 years ago
Absolute Brillaint !!
 
You should really congratualte yourself tht you managed to finish this one ...Pat on ur back mere traf se πŸ‘πŸ˜‰
 
 
Awesomely written ...bilkul tadke wala and damn the monitor !!! sab bata deta hai
 
He came to her in pieces.. so she can make him whole.


This Line was beautiful and so true
 
Loved it sesky
Posted: 10 years ago
wow...
loved it...
awesome...
loved the end...
 
Posted: 10 years ago
I loved it
it was awsm
thnx 4 such a wonderful story
Posted: 10 years ago


Precap mein likha tha, A tadka wala serious fluffy update aur Kya diya itni sweet si ending & you are telling" some words are better left unsaid"😑

Dil k armaan sweet si ending mein beh gaye.😭

P.S:You were hospitalized? Hope that you are hale & healthy my dear.Take Care & yes I want to see the Tadke wali Saint back in action😎

Posted: 10 years ago
Techie is back with a bangπŸ₯³πŸ₯³...first of all welcome back..i know you were never goneπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...soo happy you're feeling better now...miss ya😳

Coming to the update..its was just awesome...love each bits and pieces about it...you perfectly penned it down πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

And then the conversationbetween Arjun and sakshi...was just mindblowing...i could not stop reading and smiling all the way till the end πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

I actually got a mini-attack when i i finished the first part..i thought it was the end  but then while scrolling down..i was all balle balle 

Hehe i read that part you wrote after the update also πŸ˜† and you know what its the perfect ending...and awww you lappy..hope you can recover all your data by some means soon😊

You sure there was no Arjun in the hospitalπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Thank you thank you heaps for this beautiful and amazing SS and all the pm πŸ€— πŸ€— β€οΈ

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