|| SS : Make Me Whole || Last Part Page 21 , 9/20/13 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Till the end of this update my dear my eyes welled up with tears.You made me cry with this one inspite of me knowing that this is just a fic & nothing in real.This was  one of the best update of your's most specifically the CD part.👏 ⭐️ 👏As i said this before as well not every love story have happy ending but I really wish to see a happy ending for this Tahi. 😭😭😭Rest is upto you.But yes Brilliantly penned down this 1.👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
its such an emotional update😭😭😭
you made me cry😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwssmm part
can't wait to read more
cont soon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
right now i am not in a position to write much but yes then also ill definitely say...
THIS IS CALLED WRITING 
THIS IS CALLED TALENT...hats off dear
u touched my heart
i am actually teary eyed right now despite knowing dat its not real but just an ss...
each and every word dat sakshi said was so real...
so touching 
exactly smnthng she would say before leaving
just d right mixture of all emotions
well a small request plz plz pz make it a happy one and let sak live
neither arj nor sak deserve being separated...
plz let their love blossom...
and yes plz update soon
i know im being greedy but what to do...??????
thanx for pm...!!!!!!!
Edited by loveasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
plzzz update soon and pm me plzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
u made me cry while reading abt sakshi's past nd dat CD wala part.. awesum writing dear..waiting to read d nxt part..omg wat vl arjun do nw..cont soon plzzz 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just had the need to read all this again and say that you are extremely an  amazing writer and this is one of the best best SS im reading👍🏼👏
All stars dedicated to you my techie for writing so amazingly⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
i forgot where i ressed last night😆, so a fresh comment... & also, hve fun reading the essay tht is abt to follow😈😆

Part 2:
loved the way you hve structured the update!! very interesting and gripping till the final pages!! 
so shree helped sakshi lie and take blame for arjun!! naughty naughty😉!!


Part 3:

😭... sakshi ka past!! so sad!! its weird how if a writer writes sooo well, the reader feels and becomes emotionally attached to its story, the characters and their circumstances!! kudos to you di👏👏👏... brilliant!! 

love the growing understanding btwn the two... if he saved her from bullets, she saved him from hookers!! lolz😆... goood one😉

the star-convo!!! in knowing what happened in the 1st chap, so sad😭😭... didu, r u alright?? am concerned!! u usually write funny, cocky & naughty ones, not the ones where i hve to choke my tears😳, still beautifully written!!! 

the video!!! 👏... enuf said... reallly amazing!!! pls, dont kill her!! the love the bonding btwn the two!!! prettty pls, 50 shades wali tahi di!!! forum-walo pe reham karo, jahanpaah😉!!!

PS: awesome 100 ep vm tahi di... That was fantastic!!! && update very very sooon!!! warna😈...

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dhriti didu🤗...
 
aapne kasam khayi thi na mujhe rulane ki😆 lol i fought with my tears😆 i won👏👏👏
 
and kya emotional update diya😉 kya rulana chahte ho ?
 
arjun was feeling guilty ... sakshi's past was really tragic😭😭😭...
 
their moments 😉 too good...that cd part 😭😭 i was fighting with ma tears 😆...aap tahi style likha karo mujhe rona nahi pasand😉...
 
abhi jaldi se arjun sakshi ko milwao ...aap badale badle lag rahe ho ?😉 baat kya hai😆😆...
 
update soon di with my tahi with a T😎🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
sry fr d late di
awesome banner
update no wrds
speechless
one of d besest wrk i ever read
v
cvs ko ye padhwa do
its beautiful
sakshi banter was just to hide her pain
so hauntful
balam pichkari grt
listen d effectful sng as u said
dnt leave him alone
tears
dnt give up
nt funny hillarious crack me up
video heart touching
hats off di
let d miracle happen
ps. pandhora means chatter?
lol
nam payal to shor
in btw
pps.my line am i allow. to faint used by in ur wrk lol
glad
thanku di
love u
tc hugs n miss u
continue jaldi sys