SwaRon OS- Tu Hi Dil Hai,Tu Hi Jaan Bhi (PMs sent) - Page 4

Originally posted by: d3fan4eva

Mujhe frst cmnt karna tha...!!😭
No fair!!😭

But still...do I need to say??
Chalo keh hi deti hu..nhi to mai gyi!!😆
Killer..!! Bohottt Acha tha!!
Luvd it so much!!😃
Beautifully written!!😊


Ab ff update kar na!!!!!!😔

Originally posted by: nature2

simple Awosm

Originally posted by: zk456789

Cute n lovely os

Originally posted by: sweetdivya

amazing dear.. 😊

it was sweet..cute and romantic... 😉

loved it totally... 😃

Originally posted by: cenation123

Awesome os sakshi dii
the way you penned this one down is fabulous just loved
I liked how you kept the character real
Swayam is such a sweet heart and sharon is a darling love them both
the romantic moments spent together were complete bliss to read
awesomeee
loved it

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Sakshi you wrote such a long OS! Delightful!
And it had so many wow factors in it like the room scene, attack and dance! It had a flow to it so nothing seemed abrupt. But the best was when sharon hugged swayam in the end which cooled her down, it was a genuine moment which is on my wishlist. I wish CV's show this, it would be a treat for the viewers to see how powerful is the feeling of love and especially power of swayam and sharon's love.

A bunch of super dates! Loved it totally.

Originally posted by: HSFA

The OS was a delight to read :)

Loved it. The situation and the characterization is just amazing.

Do write more.

Originally posted by: -Suni-

Awesome dear...thnx for d PM

Originally posted by: raj_tanha_fan

beautiful os!!

swayam completing her wishes!!

lovely!

ty for the pm.

Originally posted by: anushka1129

aww such a cute n sweet os..
both swayan n sharon pov are awesome..
loved it alot..
thanks for the pm :)
n do write more..