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SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :) (Page 16)

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 9:44am | IP Logged
amazing part
but so sad it's finished 
so quickly...love to read
what ever u write...great work harika

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 9:54am | IP Logged
Nice update...but its ended abruptyConfused

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 9:58am | IP Logged
the way u ended the story tells how much u have hurt with the comments given by some people dont think about them. Any how coming to the part i didnt know anything about lesbians from this update i came to know how they interact the girls who live in hostels must have come across this type of people so with the knowledge u tried to tell through ur writing i am appreciating for ur thoughts.

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:20am | IP Logged
hi thanks 4 da pm n nice update! Maan marries her! She is depressed bt he assures her! Pammi n Dev kicked out! Maaneet begin their life! well written

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
No its not last part i am not accepting have to write more this is most amazing true story which touched my heart you cant leave like this 

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Hey dear I just read today this story
And I really loved it dont take those harsh pms on ur heart
The last part u written in hurry
But me happy that geet accepted maan and now r happy with each other
I can't believe geet had gone through soo much but now she got maan and he will protect geet forever
Me happy that maaneet thrown pammi and dev out of the house

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:44am | IP Logged


hain bashing...kyun...what is in this story that caused so much reaction...

this is very beautiful story...

when I was reading it mujhe laga ki why this part is written like u r giving summary for remaining story...

chalo ok hai ji if u have given whole story instead of leaving it...






Edited by 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6 - 22 August 2013 at 11:46am

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Posted: 22 August 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
part 2

is great maan entry with bang he try his 100% for relation with geet its beautiful he wait for her well done dear but please don't effect work for other opinion that is there point of view so took positively yaar i think you again write this part story is good so...

women relation is part of our life we couldn't deny it  

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