You've portrayed Prem's inner turmoil beautifully. I could totally imagine everything that you wrote. Prem is another beautiful character you created. His character always reminded me of my own brother.
You create an imagery and it makes the reading experience all the more wonderful! :)
I was kind of missing Adi and Jeevika and you included them! :D Finally, Adi can be a happy man. But there arrives the twist. It'd be interesting to see how the story shapes up further.
Happiness doesn't last longer. Life is a mixture of happiness and sorrow. That's exactly how everyone's life is, in this story. All the characters have extreme dosages of either of them.
Well, I was a silent reader till now and I have no right to agree or disagree with your decision. But I'd definitely respect it. Take care! Keep smiling! :)
- Sindhuja
P.S. Your updates always make my adrenaline rush with anticipation as to what gets disclosed today!
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