Rishbala SS- Junoon Tere Ishq Ka (Part 15 page 41) 21/10 Completed. - Page 29

Posted: 10 years ago
superawesome + some light moment -update
happy both rk & madhu finally confessed with each other feeling & came in one frame
but what was in precap - its look like scary - hope everything will fine
thanks for pm & continue soon
sorry for late reply
Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for ur likes friends...will be replying to ur cmmnts soon...

Part 15

 

The Kundra family was left shocked after hearing everything from Madhu. They all were tensed for the trio- Rishab, Madhu and Rajveer. Even Deepali wanted to come with them but somehow they managed her. She was much worried for the three as Mahaveer is not a petty  thief who could be tackled easily, he was too dangerous to be handled by them. But she could not stop them from going and their car took start.

While driving Rishab was thinking about the consecutive incidents. First the phone and then their journey. He still was thinking about the scene, how Madhu was trembling after receiving Padmini's call.

Flashback

Madhu's face became pale white after receiving the call and hearing the other side. Rishab could not understand the conversation as Madhu was not speaking anything, only listening. When she kept the call Rishab asked her, "Kya hua Madhu, tum itni pareshaan kyun hoi?? Kiska phone tha?"

Madhu hugged him tightly and started weeping. He consoled her her and again asked, "Batao na Madhu kya hua, kyun ro rahi ho tum??''

What Madhu told him was that the caller was Padmini, who told her to come immediately to Motihari. After Rajveer and madhu left, Balraj's business was suffering and behind every problem Balraj was facing was Mahaveer. A day before Mahaveer came with some goons and captured both the havelis and he was constantly torturing them to bring Madhu to Motihari and hand over to him. He did not listen to any of their pleas and now was on the verge of killing them. Balraj himself realised that what mistake was he going to conduct by getting Madhu married to that rascal.

Listening all this Rishab said, "Nahi Madhu, tum kahi nahi ja rahi ho."

M- Rishab unhe meri jaroorat hai..woh Mahaveer unhe maar dega agar main nahi gayi to.

RK- Chahe job hi ho..

M- Nahi main jaungi.

RK- Madhu tum uss insaan ko bachana chahti ho jo tumse nafrat kara hai?

M- Nahi Rishab, main waha sirf Baujee ke liye nahi, balki Maa aur Dadi ke liye bhi jaa rahi hoon...aur main jaa k rahoongi.

A voice came from outside their door, "main bhi jaunga tera saath Madhu."

It was Rajveer. He continued, "Madhu, main bhi tere saath Motihari jaunga. Rishab tum chinta mat karo, main Madhu ka khyal rakh loonga."

RK- Nahi, agar aap dono jaoge to main bhi jaaunga aapke saath.

M- Nahi Rishab, Bhabhi ko tumhari jarurat ho sakti hai.

RK- yaha di ka khyal rakhne ke liya Mom Dad hain...main tumhare saath aaunga.

Flashback ends

Rishab comes out of his trance when Madhu asked him to stop as they had reached the outskirts of Motihari. They got out and Madhu called on the landline number of Badi Haveli. A man picked up and Madhu said, "Mahaveer ko phone do."

Mahaveer (MV)- Bolo Madhubala, main phone par hi hoon.

M- Main Motihari pohonch chuki hoon. Kyun bulaya mujhe yaha, kya chahiye tumhe?

MV- Tum to jaanti ho. Ab jaldi se gaaon ke sabse bade maidaan par pohoncho, main tumhare parivaar walon ke saath wahi aa raha hoon. Fir sabki maujoodki mein hum dono shaadi karenge.

M- Main tumse shaadi karoongi yeh humesha ke liye bhool jao. Tum bas waha pohoncho.

Saying this she hung the call. Mahaveer smirked and said, "Shaadi to tumhe karna hi padega Madhubala."

When the trio reached at the field, Mahaveer was already there with everyone. Balraj, Padmini and Dadi were tied to pillars with their hands backwards. As Madhu ran to help them Mahaveer came in front of her and said, "itni bhi ky jaldi hai, pehle shaadi karo fir jo man mein aaye karna."

Madhu lifted her mangalsutra and showed it to Mahaveer saying, "Yeh dekh rahe ho?? Yeh mere suhaag ki nishaani hai, mri shadi ho chuki hai, Rishab se."

MV- Koi baat nahi, tumhare suhaag ko abhi ujaad dete hai...

He ordered his men to attack Rishab and Rajveer and himself started pulling Madhu. Rishab observed the men aroung him. As soon as one of them came in front of him, Rishab kicked him on his abdomen. Each and every goon tried to attack him but Rishab was quick enough to avoid their attacks and himself bet them black and blue.

Here Rajveer also fought ferociously with the men. But as soon as he saw Mahaveer forcing Madhu, he forgot everything and towards them only to be punched by one of the goons. Rishab quickly came near him and said, "Tum usse roko main inhe dekhta hoon."

He punched and kicked and even used some karate techniques on the goons. Soon all of them were lying on the groung and being beaten by Rishab. He ran and opened all the ropes of Padmini, Balraj and dadi. Although he shot an angry glare at Balraj, but this time what he saw was regret in Balraj's eyes, instead of hate which he had expected.

Rajveer ran to Mahaveer as soon as he got freed from the goons. He punched forcefully on his jaw and shouted, "Meri behen se shaadi karega tu? Jaan le loonga agar meri behen ki taraf tune aankhe utha ke bhi dekhne ki koshish ki to." Mahaveer tried to punch him back bu t in vain as Rajveer was not only younger than him but also stronger. He constantly punched him until Mahaveer fell down on the ground.

Madhu, Rajveer and Rishab were in front of Balraj, Padmini and Dadi. Rishab soothed Dadi's hand whch was paining to due to the ropes, while Madhu and Rajveer hugged padmini and Balraj. Madhu was weeping very much and so was Padmini. Suddenly there was a sound of firing. Everybody turned and saw that Mahaveer was standing with a gun with an evil smirk on his face. He said, "Bas ab koi herogiri nahi hogi. Agar huyi to sabse pehle yeh maregi. " He pulled Madhu who was most near to him. A short shriek escaped out of Padmini and Dadi's mouth. Mahaveer smiled evilly and said to Madhu,
"Tu agar mujhse shaadi nahi karegi, meri nahi banegi to tu kissi ki nahi banegi." He pulled a safety latch of his gun and pointed it at Madhu's head. Madhu was as pale white as a paper and was trembling. Mahveer's hand was on the trigger.

BOOMMM!!!!! The sudden of firing made everyone's face blood less. Madhu was shocked as she thought she who got fired but she felt the gun removed from her head. She saw that Balraj was holding a gun which fired into Mahaveer's leg. He had hoped away from madhu in pain. Madhu's legs became like jelly and she was about to fall when Rishab caught her and took her side near Padmini.

Mahaveer tried to take his gun back when Balraj kicked him and aid, "Meri beti ko maarne ke bare mein tune sicha bhi kaise?? Uska baap abhi bhi zinda hai Samjha?? Aur bandook lene ki koshish ki iss baar sach mein teri jaan le loonga."

The police had arrived shortly after the incident and took Mahaveer away. Everyone returned to Badi haveli. Once they were at home, Balraj came near Madhu who was sitting. He folded his hands and said, "Mujhe maaf kar de beta.."

Madhu quickly held his hands and said, "yeh aap kya kar rahe hai baujee?"

B- Nahi beta jaroori hai...maine tere saath humesha anyay kiya, tujhe apni beti maan na to door ki baat hai, insaan tak nahi samjha maine tujhe...Aur aaj humari jaan bachane ke liye tu apni jaan dene ko taiyaar thi...mujhe maaf kar de beta...

M- Maine to aap ko bohot pehle hi maaf kar diya hai Baujee...jab aapne Mahaveer se meri jaan bachai tabhi maine aapko maaf kar diya...

Balraj looked at Madhu and Rishab with tears and extended his hands. Both hugged him and Balraj said, "Meri bet aur mere jamaaisa ko shaadi ki Mubarak ho."

Finally he asked for forgiveness from Rajveer too and asked him and Deepali to return to Motihari after Deepali's delivery. The three went back to Kundra mansion.

 

After two months

Everyone was waiting anxiously outside the labour room. Deepali's delivery operation was going on and all the Chowdhurys as well as Kundras were damn tensed. When the light outside was off they eagerly waited for the doctor to come out. The doctor opening his gloved came out and said, "Mubarak ho, beti huyi hai..."

Madhu was Padmini feared that Balraj might get angry but to their surprise, Balraj hugged the doctor and then Mohan and said, "Mubarak ho Nanajee."

Mohan- Aapko bhi bohot bohot badhai Dadajee...

Everyone was very happy. They met Deepali and the baby. While others were busy seeing the mother-daughter, Rishab pulled Madhu aside and whispered, "Badhai ho Bua cum Mamijee..."

Madhu smiled and said, "Aapko bhi badhai ho Mama cum Phuphajee..."

Suddenly both of their ears were pulled. They saw it was dadi who said, "Ab aap dono ki baari hai, ek doosre ko badhai dene ke bajay koshish karo ki agle saal sab tumhe Papajee aur Mummyjee kehke badhai de..."

Madhu blushed and hugged Rishab as soon as Dadi left. And now they were finally together forever. Their life was blissful, without any tension and sorrow, only filled of happiness...

 

THE END...



Sorry for the mistaked freinds...pls like and comment...this is the final part of the ff...hope you liked it...😊

Edited by rg0782 - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
NICE...
IT WAS A HAPPY AND WONDERFUL END...
LOVED IT...
KEEP WRITING 
Posted: 10 years ago
vey beautiful ending of this sweet story, good job, please write some other story, would love to read your other works :)
Posted: 10 years ago
wow
i just loved thisff
nice start
wonderfull ending
loved it
keep writing such stories
keep rocking
and this one for you
πŸ‘.πŸ‘.πŸ‘.
keep shining like star
⭐️.⭐️.
Posted: 10 years ago
Good one, loved it, hope u start a new ff soon, will surely be waiting.😊
PM me it u write anything .πŸ˜‰
Posted: 10 years ago
...ur ff is ending😭 ...
i loved it and ending too
Posted: 10 years ago
Superbbb update as always...can't belive it yeh last part tha...i'm gona miss dis ff sooo much...loved it...
Posted: 10 years ago
wow it was so nice
but it ended 
i hope u will write more 


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