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Part 1

Motihari

Today there was very much chaos in badi haveli. Today was the grihapravesh of the badi bahu or new chaudhurain of the haveli, that is wife of the the eldest son of Balraj Chaudhury, Rajveer. All the members of the haveli were too busy. A young girl in pink saari was also busy in doing some work. Suddenly someone tapped on her shoulder. She turne dand found her father Balraj Chaaudhury smiling wickedly. She started trembling in fear.
B- Madhubala, aap ko pata hai na ki aaj ghar mein ek shubh avsaar hai?
M- jee...jee bauji...
B- (keeping his hand on Madhu's head) aur aapko yeh bhi pata hai na ki ghar ke kissi bhi shubh avsaar par vidhwaon ko hissa nahi lena chahiye???
M- Jee...jee...bauji..
Balraj suddenly pulled her hair tightly and siad, "Fir tu yaha kya kar rahi hai kameeni? Apna pati khaake tujhe shaanti nahi hua jo apne bhai ki patni ko khaana chahti hai apshaguni?"
M- Nahi nahi bauji...woh to dadine kaaha hki thoda kaam dekh le...
B- oh to ab tere bauji ke adesho se jyada teri daadi jaroori ban gayi...agar phir se yaha aayi to jaan le  lunga...ab jaa yaha se...
Madhu quickly left the place and went in her room...

Madhu closed the door and sat on the floor crying. She sobbingly said, "Maine kya galti ki hai bhagwanji? Kissika jeena marna to mere haato nahi hai na?" She turned towards the photo of Shiv, her late husband and said, "Shiv, maine kya galti ki hai jo mujhe iss tarah se har roj saja milti hai? Tu to jaanta hai na ki main kabhi bhi tera bura nahi chahti thi...to phir...bauji hamesha aaisa kyun kehte hain???"
She remained in that position for a long time. Suddenly she heard a knock at the door.

precap: Deepali's entry and Madhu's past revelation...


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awesome update 😊 thanks alot for the pm 😊 please update the next part soon & pm it to me 😊
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LOVELY START

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intresting update
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Nice update
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awesome update 😊 thanks alot for the pm 😊 please update the next part soon & pm it to me 😊
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Part 2

Suddenly someone knocked at the door. Madhu wiped her tears and got up to open the door. A maid informed her that Deepali has arrived in the house and everyone was waiting for Madhu to meet her before she goes to rest. Madhu asked the maid that what was the time. She was shocked to hear that it was already 9 pm. That means from the morning she had been crying and no one even bothered to find out that why her bedroom was closed and whether she ate or not. She followed the maid downstairs where she was introduced with Deepali, her bhabhi.
Next morning, Madhu as usual went to the temple, and did her pooja. The priest thought, "Yeh bacchi kitni siddhat se pooja karti hai, phir bhi bhagwan ne issi ke zindagi ko gamo ke sayo se gher rakha hai."

As Madhu entered the haveli Padmini came and said, "Madhu tu aa gayi? Accha hua. Teri bhabhi ko tujhse baatein karni hai to tu sidha unke kamre mein chali jaa. Thik hai na?"
M- jee Ma...
Madhu entered Deepali's rrom and called out, "Bhabhi..??"
D- arre nanad ji, aaiyee...baithiyee na.
M- Bhabhi aapko akelapan mehsoos ho raha tha?
D- haan..asal mein...nanadjee aap to janti hai na...main yaha itni ghuli mili nahi hoon...aap meri umar ke aaspaas hai to mujhe laga agar aapse thodi der baatein karoon to shayad accha lage.
m- jaroor...waise aap mujhe nanadjee mat kahiye...madhu aur tum kahiye...
D- Thik hai Madhu...waise Madhu, tum apne baare mein kuch bataaon na??
M- Main apne baare mein kya bataon? Madhubala Shiv Chaudhury, Late army officer Shiv Chaudhury ki patni...Shiv aur main bachpan ke dost the, bilkul humare baujion ki tarah, balki unse bhi gehri thi humari dosti, jab ki Shiv mujhse paanch saal ka bara hi tha. Mere 18 hote hi humari shaadi karwa di gayi...lekin shaadi ke fauran baad Shiv ko yaha se jaana para. Sab ne theek kiya ki Shiv ke aane ke baad meri vidaai hogi, paas ke gaaon mein hi rehte hai woh log. Magar...
D- Magar kya Madhu??
M- Kismat ne mera saath nahi diya...Ek hafte baad, Shiv ki laash yaha layi gayi thi, main ban gayi apshaguni...bauji ke saath Shiv ke bauji ne saare rishte tor diye, kyunki sab ka yeh maan na tha ki main hi apshaguni hoon jis karan se mera pati shaadi ke ek hafte mein hi mar gaya. Aur iss wajah se main chaudhurain to bani par meri vidaai kabhi nahi huyi...
D- Tum to ek aur shaadi kar sakti thi na Madhu...tumhari to itni kaam umar hai??
M- Nahi bhabhi...humare yaha aaisa nahi hota...ek to main ladki hoon isiliye sab mujhse waise hi nafrat karte hain...upar se itni apshaguni...mujhse dusri shaadi kaun karega?
D- Aajkal ke jamane mein koi yeh sab nahi maanta hai Madhu...
M- Yaha ke log aaisa hi maante hai Bhabhi...Khair choriye yeh sab baatein...main abhi thoda kaam karke aati hoon ...ya phir sab phir se mujhe gussa ho jayenge...

Madhu left the room and went to the kitchen. Deepali looked at her wya and thought to herself, "Isski itni kam umar ki zindagi kitni berang hai...dont worry ab main aa gayi hoon na??? Ab tumhari zindagi ekbaar phir se rangeen ho jayegi.;;;"

Precap- Entry of our Darling Rishab Kundra...

Sorry for the mistakes...😊
Edited by rg0782 - 10 years ago
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beautiful update dear
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awesome update😊 thanks alot for the pm 😳 please update the next part soon & pm it to me 😊
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Read both parts..Loved it