SS:JUNOON-Irresistible Urge!!!,Chapter-12,page29...

Posted: 10 years ago

  

                                   

                                                         CHAPTER-1.


        It was getting dark,as a storm loomed over..Prithvi hurried to his home..These days,he could not stay away from his home for too long or too late..Ever since he was forced to stay together with that girl as a married couple..

     That girl..He always called her 'Ladki'..He had never thought further than that..He could never dare think further than that,,It was forbidden for him..Not even in his mind,had he called her anything other than Ladki..

    There was something about her though..Something irresistible that seemed to be pulling him towards her these days..Everyone had accepted their marriage..Even her mother,Sudha Tahkurain,had also,accepted their marriage finally,shocking Prithvi to his core.But what had been more shocking to Prithvi was the girl's lack of surprise at her mother's acceptance..And her lack of fight with her destiny..How had she calmly and willingly accepted to staying in the backwaters of the village of Baragaon,and that also as life partner to him,Prithvi,whom she hated so much..

 I am not even sure if she hates me or for that matter feels anything for me..Prithvi thought grouchily,as he parked his jeep infront of his house..She sometimes acts as if she doesn't even see me..He thought with irritation,and self-consciously tried to fix his black kurta,as he peeped in before entering the gate..His eyes searching for her whereabouts..He could not see her anywhere,and so looked down at the packets in his hand..Somehow he had bought gifts for her today..It was an irresistible urge too...He had seen them in the shop,and had instantly wanted to see her wearing them...

Maybe she is in the kitchen..And anyways I'm hungry too..Prithvi decided,as he strutted into the house..He walked into the house,and sat on the bed,his back turned to the kitchen..He quickly kept the gifts beside him on the bed and cleared his throat..

   Some minutes passed,but no one came forward,offering him water,like she usually did.

Maybe she did not hear me?Prithvi thought,and cleared his throat louder this time,to get her attention..

   Perking his ears he waited to hear,the tinkling sounds of her bangles,that he always loved to hear..No one was responding..

"I'm hungry!"He finally snapped out,impatient and irritated with her lack of response,as he had come home in a hurry just for her.Still silence..

"Have you become deaf?!"Prithvi snapped and turned to face the kitchen,and was amazed at finding it empty.

Where is she?!Prithvi thought in amazement,as he went outside again to search for her,but the courtyard was empty,and so was the bathroom..

    The whole house rang of emptiness..There were no clothes hanging for drying,no feminine stuffs cluttered around,and also he could not feel her usual beautiful fragrance engulfing his senses,or the tinkling of her bangles as she moved around the house..Usually he was unwilling to accepting to like them..But today,he was terribly missing them..The house and courtyard screamed of loneliness..Suddenly a big boulder seem to settle on Prithvi's heart,as the realization finally came..

"She has left me.."He managed to choke out..And instantly his eyes became misty,as her flashbacks began passing through his mind..Like a completely broken apart man,Prithvi sat on the ground with his knees bent..He was feeling so helpless..So forlorn..So empty..

"I had told her to leave last night!"He remembered,and his heart squeezed in pain,as he recalled last night's argument with her.."She left me,as I said I'll be happier without her.."He whispered in a broken voice,as tears started pouring out of his eyes,unknowingly.."I called her a burden,a thorn..And now she has left me.."Prithvi whispered again,as uncontrollable pain seemed to pass through his body in waves..

    He had not realized how much she meant to him..He had not realized,how much he needed her,until now..She was always lightening up his life,and he had ignored her,abused her,always tried to hurt her..And she had patiently tolerated his misbehavior..She had always-

"PRITHVI BHAIYA!!!"A child voice broke into his thoughts,and he quickly wiped his eyes,and stood up,running  towards the source..

    It was Heera,one of Jeevan Lal's friend..

"What happened Heera?!"

"Our bull has ran away!You have to help us find it,it-"

"Let's go!"Prithvi said,before the child could complete the sentence.

     As Prithvi was locking the door,the child prattled on..

"I was about to go to the river,my mom told me to call you..Then I saw Meera bhabi running towards the river,and asked her about you,but she did not answer.."

"YOU SAW MEERA DOING WHAT?!!"Prithvi turned round in amazement,his heart beating very fast,as he heard about her..He was so excited that he was also unaware that he had just called her by her name..

"She was running towards the river,and was looking very sad,and I.."The child went on talking,but Prithvi did not hear anything else..

  Meera had been seen running towards the river..She was sad..She was unhappy as he had called her all those things last night..She did not know how to swim..She might be trying to end her life!!!Prithvi's heart completely stopped beating,as the thoughts raced through his mind..

"PRITHVI BHAIYA!!!WHERE ARE YOU GOING?!THAT'S THE WRONG DIRECTION!"Th child called out,as he saw Prithvi running away like an obsessed man..

"I'LL LOOK FOR YOUR BULL LATER!"Prithvi managed to call out.

      Prithvi ran as fast as he could..He had to reach the river before that crazy girl did something crazier..She did not know how to swim..!He had to stop her..!Before it was too late...!


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Ok friends do let me know if you want to read more..?I had planned on a one shot,but it is becoming too long..😳I had to chane it to a SS...Dnt forget to let me know ur comments?πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰


Chapter-1:Above!πŸ˜›

Chapter-2,page-4:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90403023

Chapter-3,page-5:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90722459

Chapter-4,page-7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90937189

Chapter-5,page-9:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91007007

Chapter-6,page-11:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/91642713

Chapter-7,page-14:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92081626

Chapter-8,page-17:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/92633624

Chapter-9,page-22:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/93636883

Chapter-10,page-24:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98199247

Chapter-11,page-28:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/98763514

Chapter-12,page-29:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99680962





Edited by TehsinaJFJ - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago

me 1st... do i have to say anything.. loved it.. now give us the next chap of what ever it takes soon...
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow u write so well...very impressive.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Wouldlove to read how the story progresses.😊
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by meera.rajeev



me 1st... do i have to say anything.. loved it.. now give us the next chap of what ever it takes soon...


🀣I knew u will say dt!πŸ˜†M working on it!πŸ˜‰Hope to update by tonight!πŸ˜›
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome os n its description
and loved it where u started
no prob it take longer
will love to read it will convert to SS
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by khamosshhh


Wow u write so well...very impressive.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Wouldlove to read how the story progresses.😊


Thank u Muns!😳I hv an FF too..πŸ˜‰If u want u cn read dt too!😳Gosh!I sound m advertising!Bt thanks!πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by Marathi_Mulgi


awesome os n its description
and loved it where u started
no prob it take longer
will love to read it will convert to SS


Thank u Vidya...πŸ€—Hmmm..πŸ€”SS?U got me thinking...😳Ok..Let me update dis,dn if u ppl want me to,I'll chnge it to SS...πŸ˜‰
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by TehsinaJFJ




Thank u Muns!😳I hv an FF too..πŸ˜‰If u want u cn read dt too!😳Gosh!I sound m advertising!Bt thanks!πŸ˜ƒ


Yeah I know but I never read FFs, but now I will...it's gud u posted this not as an FF else I would have missed it.πŸ˜†
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by khamosshhh




Yeah I know but I never read FFs, but now I will...it's gud u posted this not as an FF else I would have missed it.πŸ˜†

you should check FF's on this forum
they r more mithviliciuos than junoon show😳
Posted: 10 years ago
Wow. I'm so happy to read this ts.

Wonderful writing. I loved the way Prithvi's defferent emotions are shown.

Can't wait to read the story from Meera's point of view. πŸ˜ƒ

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