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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:34am | IP Logged

A beautiful conclusion to a beautiful story (I dint want to use the word 'ending', because as u have written , it is actually the 'Beginning' of Arnav & Khushi's journey together having overcome all odds, fears, uncertainties and prejudices.

Loved Arnav's introsspection -

What was the purpose of it all ? Were they mere pawns in the hands of a higher power, a master albeit eccentric designer who had a twisted, warped, slightly sadistic sense of humor...? Or was their life, their existence, their destiny just a matter of chance...random, meaningless events, nobody had any control over.

Well, I would like to believe that the meeting  in Landour-

Between the  naive, innocent, good little Red Riding Hood and the bitter, disillusioned Bad Wolf

was destined to happen, so was their cruel seperation.
 
Their brief togetherness in landour before they were thrown apart by the cruel twist of fate  served to give them a glimpse of what this emotion called love was ? Wasn't arnav so cynical, always waiting to see if he would eventually get over khushi . In fact I remember that part when you described the Eureka moment of Arnav. How arnav, on that fateful night when he went out for a movie with dawn and then kissed her afterwards, realised with a jolt, that it was khushi , her fragrance that his mind and subconscious always sought after.
As for Khushi, she always knew she loved Arnav, but dreaded that he would get over her and forget her.
But just when he had confessed his love for her, when they had started dreaming of a future together, misfortune struck again, in the form of her granny's illness and her eventual death.
 
Perhaps their separation was best for their growth as persons. Both faced their trials in totally different ways. Arnav becoming harsh, bitter but his hardened demenour did help him to achieve the pinnacle of success in his professional life. He went thru hell & back, perhaps more than khushi because khushi had Branny,

That is why when he met khushi again, after his initial bitter reaction, he overcame his feeling of having been betrayed. Even before he knew khusi's side of the story, he had already decided that he dint want to let her go again. That he had fooled himself into believing that he hated her,. That he had never really stopped loving her.That for him, it could only ever be Khushi.

Once he realised that, he was determined to win her over. He was a changed person . The Arnav Foster who wooed Khushi back in his life was a changed man, a man who loved unconditionally. Who stood by her like a rock. Who could move mountains for her. It is difficult to say who was luckier in finding he other. For Arnav- khushi was like the sunshine, the cool, comforting breeze, the oasis in the desert of life.

And for khushi, Arnav was the solid rock, the man who symbolised love, passion, with whose help she could face any challenge in life,

They were both made for each other. How could they but not meet ??

Thanks Jenny for giving us  this beautiful story. For satiating the romantic in us who believe that True, Selfless and immortal  Love does exist  and that Love conquers all !!

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Superb ending
Loved it
Really going to miss this ff
Very beautifully written

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Beautiful ending...
I will miss this story...

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Jenny, I love Arshi & Sarun so much that I have become addicted to reading Arshi fan fictions & I have read so many of them till now. Many of those Arshi FFs written by other writers have been wonderful though a few have been mundane too. But never in all these days have I come across any of these fan fiction writers to take their FFs to the level of sheer poetry! Earlier I was simply addicted to Arshi FFs & I was reading them though I was not very proud of myself to be a mere FF reader but now I can proudly proclaim to the world after reading all your Arshi FFs written so far, that they are worth reading over & over! And I am so fortunate that I came across these FFs just a few weeks back. It goes without saying that you excel in every department of story telling - plot, narrative, character delineation - I am clean bowled as a reader by the beautiful language & the emotional content of your narrative! The powerful magical onscreen Sarun chemistry has immortalised the love story of Arshi which is inspiring till date so many people to write countless Arshi FFs but never did I imagine that it could inspire such masterpieces which you have been writing! I hope one day you can publish these stories in books which can reach a wider cross-section of readers which can hopefully convert more & more people into Sarun / Arshi fans eventually! And also I seriously wish Sarun (Sanaya & Barun) get to read your Arshi FFs one day Smile Now, I am hooked to your 'The Bride with a Doll' & looking forward to reading its next update soon Smile

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:42am | IP Logged
Jenny, when stalwarts have already commented what more can I add.

Beautiful beginning of once-in-a-lifetime love story!
Of the most adorable and desirable Foster and spirited Khushi!

As Sandy wrote they are perfect yin and yang. His ability to love,care and protect and her capability to love back in abundance.

I remember you had promised epilogue(s). and I am waiting and hoping for season-2 as well.
I will miss our impatient wait for Foster and ALS  updates.

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Comment unresed here :) 

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Such a beautiful story !! The one single act of Arnav's to tell Khushi to take Branny along with them , tells so much about this family's bonding in the future. Khushi and Branny are so lucky !!
 
Thanks a lot for this wonderful story.

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Posted: 30 August 2013 at 1:59am | IP Logged
I am so happy for Khushi ... She really deserved Arnav back in her life...
 And Arnav too... When fate had separated them I had so wished they elope and build a life... But branny would not have been there..


It's a lovely story and there's a beautiful end... 

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