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A Late Spring Removed. (Page 56)

Abyan Goldie
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
As always Beautiful teaser... sad its the last chapter... loved this story so much...wonder will there be an epilogue!...cant wait to read how settled they are in their new bond...

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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 5:34am | IP Logged
1stly sorriee for commentin late on d previous update was srsly caught by work
neways it was a beautiful update juz lyk fairy tale end after all d pain n hwartbraks dey were 1
i cud actly imagine arnav n khushi in dere weddin attires takin d marital wows jys amazingly written ..
janice is a sweet heart she knew dat d newly weds r in real neef of sum privacy n she very intelligently made space for dem ... n d passion was wow dey deserved dis union dey waited too long n finally dey r 1 in all senses ...superlative !!!!
teaser is amazin more exited for d actual update now...n feeling so sad its d end of a beautiful story
ill miss it ... Landeour ..khushi craven foster ..arnav foster n brandon foster

a love story of young hearts ..pain sepration ..reunion ..marriage n everythin juz loved it was a beautiful journey wid varied emotions ...
thanx for writin such wonderful stories

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supriya.arshi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 8:43am | IP Logged
How Beautifully you hav written this chapterStarwinking heart emoticonStar

it is Marvelous StarStar

their wedding partBig smile finally they r law fully binded to each other

heart in the sky emoticon thts was soo heart warming
m just way to flattered nd in whole different world
your writing on their first timebig heart emoticon
soo romantic , beautiful nd magical all at the same time ...you nvr went overboard but you kept the passion blazing hot nd sensuous ...Brilliant

i can't believe this is gonna end...it just breaks my heart...this was lik the only thing tht made me believe tht such kind of love exists nd now its endin...m just too upset nd happy at the same time

Thank you a million times over Jenny you r truly a magnificent Writer blowing a kiss smiley



Edited by supriya.arshi - 24 August 2013 at 8:44am

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Milii Goldie
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Posted: 24 August 2013 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
That was an awesome piece of art!!!! The second half is written soo very well...the passion, the desire and everything is described sooo well...without sounding vulgar at all...
Hats of to u Jenny...

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wonderblake IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Chapter 42
That was the most serene and sensual love making scene I've ever read, and do I even have to say how much I loved reading this part?!
Finally they are home. And the rain did add quite a good background for this scene.

Loved it Jen, just LOVED it Heart

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 1:27am | IP Logged
The teaser makes me all, what should we call that, hmmm, tingly.

Looking forward to read the last chapter Smile

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 6:26am | IP Logged

Loved the update Jenny!

That was a fabulous penultimate chapter.

It was wonderful to go through all the emotions that Arnav and Khushi went through as they took their vows. Branny chiming out loudly his importance the ambience of the church and both Ruth and Janice handling Brandon were very well laid out and finally they were on their own. The nature too cocooned them! Their emotions, their need and the passion have been described with very good taste and has come through very well. When I read it it was like reading the romantic novels of yesteryears where lots was left to imagination and the writer would induce one into thinking but never graphically describe!

Loved it Jenny. If you ask me how do I rate it its perfect 10 dear. Waiting for the final installment of this series.

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Posted: 25 August 2013 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Lovely teaser
Looking forward to update
Thanks for pm
Will really miss this story once its finished
Hope u planning to do another ?!?!?

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