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Posted: 10 years ago

really nice wriiten atlast arnav and khushi are married

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Posted: 10 years ago
Jen edited my comments here πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pure Justice Jen! I swear!!

You justified the whole concept!! Be it the story, theme, concept, characters or the readers! (Age wise wala part)

Loved it completely!

Picture perfect and the wedding card couldn't have been better! Suits them so well!

Every small detail, gesture that you have shown has indepth meaning if you read between lines! Be it Arnav seeing Mr Craner next to khushi whe she walks down the isle to the alter! That gentle squeeze during the exchanges of vows!

When she opens up about sean n he makes sure she.ll neva get back down that lane again! All so good!

How can I miss mentioning Branny?cutie pie! Janice n Rachael are smart gave time for the newly wedding but didn't give out on Brandon too! Sweet! He calling our maama n daddy was uber cute! Loved it to bits!

And then become one! Finally giving an end to chinese torture :p but this was the best! Nothing more nothing less both would have hampered the feel n essence of it all! Passion I agree but more that is the love they share!

Pure bliss

Cheers
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Posted: 10 years ago
The second half was beautifully written!
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Posted: 10 years ago
So much in luv vid dis update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Written brilliantly Jenny, with just the right amount of detail to represent their want and need, but still leaving enough to the individual imagination for us to make our own impressions!!!  πŸ‘

P.S... I loved that they didn't make it to the bedroom...and rather he finished where he had originally started!!πŸ˜‰
Edited by --Nargis-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written
Amazing loved it
finally they became one
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Posted: 10 years ago
Haiyee foster is taken by kushi ab hum ladkiyon ka kya hoga...hehe just kidding
i loved the wedding the way you wrote it...n branny as the ring bearer...
Congrats Mr and Mrs.Foster...may u live a long life together and forever...
Awesome awesome awesone...
I was blushing furiously while reading the second half...arnav n kushis union..
Loved the update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love the wedding card...there it's written my Branny;s name as Brandon Foster..wow πŸ˜ƒ
So finally Mr. and Mrs. Foster❀️ So beautiful wedding πŸ₯³
So lovely update...
Thanks for PM