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cherrybloom1 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 October 2012
Posts: 5798

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 8:58am | IP Logged

Oh my god!
lets start from the beginning!

those pics are absolutely stunning, i cud really picture arnav and khushi in the church in the first pic!
and wow, the invitation card was so so so beautiful!
how did the chapter end so soon?
i had just started reading and it was already over?Cry
I loved the feelings that was displayed during the wedding. the overwhelming feeling that khushi felt while they took the vows!
oh god, absolutely stole away!
Branny was so cute. he was so hyper and excited abt his parents wedding and he being the ring bearer!
im sure he has to be the cutest ring bearer ever!
I loved the little run in the rain!
I am amazed at how beautifully u wrote their souls becoming one!
it was such an amazing chapter!

please update soon this time. cant wait for a week before the chapter!
and pleaseee long chapter!
and also an epilogue maybe?Embarrassed

Edited by cherrybloom1 - 20 August 2013 at 11:25am

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ranogill IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 12 September 2012
Posts: 12716

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:02am | IP Logged
wow what a beautiful and peaceful feelings we got today...wonderful...thankyou

Edited by ranogill - 19 August 2013 at 11:45am

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priyalovely IF-Dazzler

Joined: 11 May 2012
Posts: 2661

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Wow waiting for both als and bwd...excited update soon...

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bunnylovessunny Goldie

Joined: 10 June 2012
Posts: 2383

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:17am | IP Logged
This is MY spot! :D :D :D :D
Crazy4Sobti IF-Dazzler

Joined: 21 April 2013
Posts: 2834

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:18am | IP Logged

Hey Jenny,

What do I say? And how do I say? I am amazed and bowled over. 

I don't want to say anything, I just want to enjoy and linger these moments of utmost joy and happiness of Arnav and Khushi union. It was beyond perfect, everything was so right and satisfying. This was the moment when I felt the whole journey, pain, agony, heartache everything was worth it. This was written so brilliantly that I got so immersed in reading and visualizing that I was holding my breath, and sighed in contentment in the end.Big smile

I found the following song (by Ronan Keating) perfect for Mr. and Mrs. Foster's wedding  

"This I Promise You"

My love, here I stand before you
I am yours now from this moment on
Take my hand, only you can stop me shaking
We'll share forever, this I promise you

And when I look in your eyes
All of my life is before me
And I'm not running anymore
'Cause I already know I'm home
With every beat of my heart
I'll give you my love completely
My darling, this I promise you

My love, I can feel your heartbeat
As we dance now closer than before
Don't let go, 'cause I could almost cry now
This is forever, I make this vow to you

My darling, this I promise you
My darling, this I promise you

This is for you HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 19 August 2013 at 6:46pm

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preethi.saseeda IF-Dazzler

Joined: 07 July 2012
Posts: 4358

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:23am | IP Logged

Alright I can't help but mention this here... The best thing I look forward to when it rains, is the stretch of white Lillie's that bloom in our garden after the rains... It is a sight that just makes me forget everything else around and finds me an unimaginable pure joy n peace in an otherwise commotion filled morning... Jenny this update just had me there... So beautifully written.. It was so poetic in every possible sense... The wait was long n when it happened it was put forth as the effects of longing that the souls would have felt... Pure joy n no other thoughts (*ahem*) crossed my mind...

I have never been to a Christian marriage but have read n seen in reel a lot... To me this was "the perfect" one I have ever come across... Mr Foster made an ahhh so dapper groom n when he took the vows my heart made an million thuds too... Khushi's tears were expected n felt so realistic... Who wouldn't when put in front of the love incarnate... So romantically written... Jenny my girl you just had me crying on a happy Wala update too...

Ps: I am still hoping that the journey with the Foster's does not end here... Occasional one shots throwing snippets on their life will help us cherish n live in this Foster Family... Think about it Jenny... Only if you feel to keep ALS open as long as you could...

Edited by preethi.saseeda - 19 August 2013 at 11:39am

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tina_1234 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 June 2009
Posts: 9441

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:25am | IP Logged
Awesome part

Edited by tina_1234 - 19 August 2013 at 12:01pm

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hi50 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 01 December 2005
Posts: 4101

Posted: 19 August 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Amazing update...!!
And so descriptive... Loved every bit of it..

I have never been in a Christian marriage... but now visualized it...!!
Thanks to you...!Smile!

Edited by hi50 - 19 August 2013 at 12:30pm

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