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Posted: 08 September 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
God that was so lovely an ending ...or should I say their beginning as that's how this chapter felt
Gotta admit when I saw this pm for one of my fav stories of all I was sad to open it when I saw the works last chapter
But after working up courage to read I gotta say it was arshilicious
The way how he reacted to seeing his sketch pad all his memories n feelings resurfacing all over again ...was so emotional still have a tear in my eye
As for his attempt to get intimate b4 the phone rang even I was cussing under my breath
But I soon started to smile again with the best man toast aww n how sweet was foster when he checked to make sure she was ok
He surely is turning into the family man suggesting to have branny in their wedding suite although did not stop him from finishing off his passion filled business he started earlier
Def gonna be keeping this story in reach for future reading when in mood for some romantic story
Thanks for pm really gonna miss this story

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Posted: 10 September 2013 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Oh my gosh!!!...That was totally amazing...an off the top romance...
 
The beginning with its myriads of twist and turns showed a painful journey, unwillingly taken by the lovers; and very willingly enforced by fate...
 
I had been so sad then...I thought that's it...Khushi's married...plus she has a son... Arnav's engaged...but that was just like the sleet of ice that covers lake...it was all wintery and frozen on top and all water and life underneath...
 
How magnificently you wove this story into being...each character with his/her own set of flows... each battling their own demons...
 
the concept was quite unique and the setting itself was refreshing... your imagination is so vivid...thanks
 
Thanks for taking us on ride...and showing a different Arshi world through your eyes... muaah... thank you
 
love this FF
... heart-breaking
...heart wrenching
...heart stopping 
YES!!!  That's how I'd describe this story...its from the heart and its about hearts...so, it is heart-breaking, heart wrenching and heart stopping...

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Posted: 13 September 2013 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
Awesome & fabulous
Love it
Sorry for late comment

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Posted: 15 September 2013 at 5:36am | IP Logged
i just read the last chapter (wanted a peaceful time to read...sry thts y i took so long)

you brought me to tears...Monkey Icons

it was all soo BeautifulStarStar ...your entire description of the wedding their love for each other so well written Monkey Emoticons

Mark's craziness was fun LOL

Arnav going through his sketches which Khushi had saved for him ...melted me ...he was happy being with her...nd true to marks words...he becomes a different person around her Embarrassed

their intimacy... their passion was spellbinding in your writing...Monkey Emoticons

Good times do come around...loved it completely

Thank you

will read prologue later ...i still don want it to get over LOL

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:02pm | IP Logged
 Hats off to you Jen for this  amazing and beautiful story  I will missed Mr Foster and family but I was lucky to read this terrific story.
 
God bless you Jen and do continue to write more such wonderful stories.

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Posted: 18 September 2013 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Finished reading it again, that too in just 3 hours. Again, superb story Jenny, amazing work ClapClapClap



Edited by PhenoixTears - 18 September 2013 at 6:26pm

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Posted: 19 September 2013 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Gosh...i read all the chapters in one night without sleeping an ounce all night.
I started reading it at 11 , i thought i would read it till 12 or so and then continue the next day..but my my i just couldn't stop !
Believe me , i was staring at the computer screen like a total maniac and almost without blinking !
This is..a Marvelous piece of work !
I don't have enough words to describe my feelings...
This is literally one of the best FFs i've read till date.
First of all the concept was Mind blowing !
Then comes the characterization which was absolutely outstanding.
The characters were simple yet complex.
The various shades of their characters was portrayed brilliantly.
Then the story...what can i say about it ?
It had everything starting from humour , romance , drama..and horror for me when Arshi got separated.
The amazing journey of ArShI from their teenage to their adulthood was described so beautifully.
The tender love , the yearning during their separation , the joy of getting back to each other , another heart wrenching partition , getting a second chance , realizing the depth of passion and desire !
And another part of the story that was wonderfully described was the bond between Khushi and Branny and Arnav and Branny..
Each and everything was perfect !
Some parts of the story literally made me cry when im not a cry person at all..
The way the story progressed was splendid.
Very Very Beautifully written.
I'm so glad that i didn't read it earlier , and read it all in one go..i could have never waited for the updates..
but now that it has ended , i suddenly feel very empty.
I was so engrossed in the story , i felt like i actually am  part of their life.
The last 9 hours i was totally lost in Lala Land..and now that im back to reality , Pheww...i feel like going into ArShI land again..
And now u officially are one of my favourite writers..
Ok , now im rushing off to read the the other works by you..
I sound like an obsessed fan don't i ??
Well can't help it Tongue

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Posted: 20 September 2013 at 12:45am | IP Logged
Big smile epilog...jaldi aaja ;)

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